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Reviewer: mrchunks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story has always been a favorite of mine. The way you put this plot together with the description of how the nephew's are teased and played with is  fantastic, your stories and a few other writers on writing.com are the main inspiration that got me into writing my own stuff in the first place, Thank you.



Author's Response:

Hello

It has been such a long time time since i visited this site,i must admit i was surprised to see that  my stories are still recieving reviews after all this time.I do enjoy writing about my inner desire to consume a mans body oooh it would be a delightful treat for me to eat,much better than any thing on a desert menu.

Thank you for your kind words it does turn me on knowing that that there are men like you out queing up to be my next meal hehe  yummy yummy

 

byee Amanda xx

Reviewer: Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

confusing to read...



Author's Response:

Oh"....really?..

 

Amanda xx

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Parrot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh you re bad! I wish I could be your young nephew,,,well...until you pushed me to the back of your throat

Author's Response:

Me too ...i wish i wish i wish that one day i will be able to fill my tummy up with your bodies,feel you inside me as you struggle to live..i wish i wish iwish....

 

Amanda xx

Reviewer: Parrot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2011 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow



Author's Response:

Not been here for ages your new ...i think hehe glad you liked my fantasy whilst it is only a story i would do it for real if i had the chance to ..oh and i would eat you for desert mmm yummy ....be nice treat for you i think to be rolled around inside my mouth waitng to be swallowed alive by me...i do have a lush mouth tho so you would proberly like being inside it ...see you soon...i hope hehe ..

Amanda xx

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I'm speechless.

Author's Response:

wow been ages since i visited this site hehe still the same tho ...pity i loved its vore but seems to be filled with giants and fairytales now...aah well maybe i shall write a tale to tease you Vito...been a a long time since i felt the need to put my urges onto paper sooo glad you enjoyed this early tale ...loved writing it really made me horny hehe but its my fanatasy to dine on the innocence of man...maybe one day i will get the chance..hope so take care Vito Amanda's getting hungry again lol...byeee

Amanda xx

Reviewer: Blade2009 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2009 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story forgot the rating part

Author's Response:

That's ok xx.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Blade2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2009 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story, i love your writing, and how you eat them and how they end up as your shit and piss

Author's Response:

Hello you are new here aren't you? i'm sorry i have responded for some reason my email notification never got through.

Thank you for your kind words enjoy whats been witten for only a few more shall i write.

Amanda.

Reviewer: daniel222 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2009 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

amazing story. loved most of it (toilet stuff is not my cup of tea) but the rest is simply great, was imagening that i was every one of your nephews.

Author's Response:

It's ok  a stories content may not always appeal to everyone,thank you for taking time to read and review(you'll be amazed at how many write to me telling me how good something is but they never review it...men are strange.) my story,take care xx.

Amanda.

Reviewer: AGrader Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2009 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I should have read this one before "Full Circle".
AUNT you an adventurous woman?

Author's Response:

Hello  thank you once again for your kind comments i am looking forward to reading your next story.

Amabda.

Reviewer: rahu Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2009 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very imaginative and exciting read. Thank you for sharing!

Author's Response:

Thank you Rahu i write down my feelings when they are clear to me,on this occasion the reality shocked me the story is still very real to me even now.

Amanda.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2009 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

All my life I thought I was wierd, but liked it. Now to find not only a site full of stories like this, but some of them written by women too. It's amazing.

Really liked this. I'm going to look at your others now.



Author's Response:

Thank you Timescribe i hope you gain some form of satisfaction from reading my stories,i shall be taking a look at the ones you have written,i.ll let you know my thoughts.

I think you will find woman are in the minority on this site i would suggest you read the one's written by Adeline as well,they are very entertaining also.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Tiny Brandon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

i forgot to rate last time so 10 from me

Author's Response:

Wow you have been a busy boy Brandon writing all these reviews thank you for taking the time to read and pass such nice comments about my desires.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Tiny Brandon Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story was amazing i love how to use the right words to describe the situation

Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2009 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey there,  very erotic writing but yes, a little repetative.

Personally I would have liked a little more teasing in the vore passages whwere the helpless victims have a chance to anticipate their terrible trip and their eventual destination and the horror of being swallowed alive.

I've devoted a whole chapter to the victims terror of looking into her throat and realizing its sole purpose

and the erotic emotions of both victim and predator

as the action takes place as if in slow motion. Just a suggestion.

Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and hope you continue to write, It's refreshing to get the female angle on this.  ladyprey



Author's Response:

Thank you ladyprey ı wrıte wıth my emotions and that was how ı felt durıng that period ı am so glad you enjoyed my story dıd you masturbate whılst readıng it ıf so then ı was successfull x.

Amanda.  

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 04 2009 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Amanda,

This is a good story! I like the perspective of the hungry giantess. My only critique is that it is, in many ways, repetitive. You cover the same ground - insertion - many many times, and I'm not sure that is really required to make the story work in a shorter amount of words and reading time.
Please keep up the story-writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words,i write with my emotions and at the time of compiling these stories i was getting aroused by these thoughts so i would write down my feelings whilst still fresh within me.I can see your point of view i shall try to regain control of my brain instead of letting my sexual disposition dictate the story writing.

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