Date: March 30 2024 9:05 AM Title: Search and Destroy
Please revisit this story. I don't know if you'll ever write here again, but this is one of the best reads about a normal girl falling into this industry and I love coming back to this every other month.
Author's Response: I really appreciate your compliment and I will definitely continue to work on this story. Life has become very busy recently and I have not found much time to work on chapters. I do have the next one in progress and have another story I am planning on releasing as soon as time allows. Again, I really appreciate your comment and I find it very motivating.
Date: April 12 2023 11:01 PM Title: The start of something new
Nice to see an update to this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: April 12 2023 10:00 PM Title: Search and Destroy
Great to see this continue!
Should be easy enough to look up online how Stockholm syndrome works so she can apply it to Tim long term.
And see how her side job finally evolved into a real job, and what new shoots she does.
Date: March 22 2023 11:49 AM Title: Girls night in: part 2
Absolutely amazing story. Her becoming intoxicated with the money and the cruelty is gripping. Please, please, please continue writing about her.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and kind words! I plan on working more on this as time allows!
Date: November 22 2022 9:22 PM Title: Girls night in: part 2
Really loving this story. Especially Sam ;)
Date: October 26 2022 2:24 AM Title: Girls night in: part 2
Did I miss it? What happened to the tiny in Sam's panty? Is he still in her black thong around her legs, perhaps trapped within the lace like a submissive bound by restraints?
Hmmm, seems like a bunch of the tinies are about to escape the tilting plastic container. Have to wonder, with two Giantess Beauties before them, will any willingly work their way to pleasure the sleeping women? Perhaps pleasuring their tits and pussies, or even their asses? After all, better to please their Giantesses than be crushed underfoot by them {Hmmm, not quite sure about that}.
Author's Response:
Thank you for catching that! I got a little sloppy. I made a tiny edit to make it flow better. Thanks again!
Date: October 25 2022 3:43 PM Title: Girls night in: part 2
Great to see you back!
And good chapter!
Date: September 27 2022 3:11 AM Title: Girls night in: part 1
This story is going from "Great" to "FANTASTIC!"
Love the tiny in Carrie's panty.
Date: September 17 2022 2:59 PM Title: The Foot Shoot
Love where this is heading.
Date: September 17 2022 2:46 AM Title: The Foot Shoot
Really fantastic story. I am loving it.
One has to wonder, will Sam bring over the bin full of tinies, or at least a few of them for her night with Carrie?
Will Carrie finally just give in, and admit she loves crushing tiny men?
On a side note, could the secret admirer of Carrie, the one ordering all the photo shoots, be a woman with a crush on Carrie?
Date: September 16 2022 10:34 PM Title: The Foot Shoot
Well all of this is going pretty well, and now same is coming over. I suppose the best, or even sexiest, way for her to maybe smuggle some tinies for Carrie would be some wedge heel (sandal, sued, or boots of some kind), and have a compartment in the wedge.
Or wedges could be the next set of heels she gets, they have more stepping aria for crushing unlike the gap normal heels have between the heel and ball, have the compartment ability like I said, and they are also easier to walk in. Maybe Carrie finds over a longer time that the heels hurt just a bit much, and so Sam gets her a better pair of wedges.
And oh what Sam and her will be doing will be interesting. Maybe some more other models get to be introduced, it can’t only be Carrie. And maybe other new studios, scenarios, or locations come latter.
Date: September 16 2022 12:13 PM Title: The Foot Shoot
Loving where this is going! I'd love to possibly see some crushing action from Sam as well ;) I'm a suckered for boot crush, let alone docs
Also really glad we'll be seeing some action between the girls!
Date: September 13 2022 5:55 AM Title: Return to the studio
Hoping she gets to use her exterminating skills on these shoots
Date: September 10 2022 2:30 AM Title: Return to the studio
Nice chapter. I like how Carrie is starting to look at this as more as a fitting justice for criminals than merely shushing shrunken men.
Squashing two shrunken men beneath her massive breasts was great; but perhaps she could crush another two stuffed up, underneath her breasts like the underwires of a bra {i.e. tucked completely under her breasts, between her breasts and her torso}.
Her shoes / feet possibly being the next crushing zone is interesting considering how she indifferently, then domineeringly crushed the bugs in the restaurant.
Carrie obviously has her entire body to use as an arsenal of destruction, her armpits, her hands, her butt / butt crack, her mouth, her pussy; the possibilities are endless.
Sam seems really hot, will Sam and Carrie ever do a girl on girl photo shoot {plus shrunken men to smash between their embracing bodies}?
Speaking of photo shoot, why are these photos shoots rather than videos? Or are they both???
Date: September 10 2022 1:39 AM Title: Return to the studio
You're on the right direction! The amount of smut and plot is very balanced, even the descriptions about Carrie's psychology were on point!
Now that Carrie knows that the shrinkees are prisoners, having one of those prisoners as Carrie's acquaintance/friend could be exciting, perhaps the Sheriff could be charged with corruption, or her landlord.
One more suggestion, how about making Carrie interact with a city model and play hide n seek with the shrinkees? ;)
Anyway, keep up the good work, there's so many exciting ways to branch out this story! And can even possibly end it with some growth 👀
Date: September 09 2022 9:48 PM Title: The start of something new
love how Carrie goes from killing bugs to killing men without any hesitation. good job
Date: September 08 2022 4:19 AM Title: Return to Normalcy?
Wow the writing in this second chapter is SO good. The way her actions are described and the bugs are personified is my favorite. Hope she gets some more shoots soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! She certainly will!
Date: September 01 2022 1:26 AM Title: The start of something new
Wow! This is an interesting premise. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm continuing to work and develop the story as time allows!
Date: August 31 2022 7:21 AM Title: The start of something new
I like it! Carrie's reactions sounded like what an ordinary person would react to a real shrunken man. You also captured the setting of a newbie in a studio really well!
Excited to see what'll happen next! Perhaps Sam could give a broader explanation to Carrie about size fetish or the man justifying her actions that the shrunkees were bad-doers. :D
Author's Response:
I really appreciate your review and kind words! As a newbie with writing GTS stories I really didn't know how this would go, but your review (along with all of the others) has been a source of motivation for me to continue! Thank you!
Date: August 31 2022 4:13 AM Title: The start of something new
Fantastic Story!!!
Can't wait to read more. Carrie's tits seem like Gods. Would be nice if a few of her future "victims" applaud her breasts for crushing / smothering them.Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate your input- I am working some of that into future chapters!