[Report This]Date: March 29 2023 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 12, The New Age
Well well well, I may not have read your flagship Alpha-Beta story, so I don't know what goes on in that, but you can write a ... uh ... "Tango" scene quite well. Not so explicit that it's disgusting and voyeuristic, but also not so symbolic and esoteric, we had to open up some Freud to decode when Tab J enters Slot G.
Overall an intriguing read that all started from simple lads wondering what having a sea-based waifu with sharp teeth as a giantess would pan out. And now, all us denizens are having to write Tolkien-length appendixes about the trillion-year history of our realms, and which action figure has the mega-ultra-super-saiyan-sharingan-devil fruit to beat the other. So thank you for the reality that anon, Uber, myself, and Kardo when he gets out of his funk, will be chained to this series for as long as Cathay lives. Thank you Viper, for forcing us to give up our dreams for the never-ending trauma machine.
Also, Mumen rider can totally solo Cathay.
Author's Response:
I don't think I even have a scene quite like the 'tango' here. At least nothing as refined (for lack of a better word cause my brain is the square).
It was a fun story to write, one which I'm looking forward to continuing. Let this be a proper demonstration of the power of peer pressure and eldritch waifus, Comrade. The engine of trauma will never sleep, and now neither will any of us Eldritch Sweetheart writers. Prepare thineself for now we serve only the eldritch!
Mumen Rider may best Cathay, but can she outshine Valerie?!?!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2023 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 12, The New Age
Can Gilah still rearrange stars?
Author's Response:
I know I didn't put her in a lot of scenarios where she could demonstrate the skill, but yeah she still can.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2023 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Glorious Gift
While this story has plenty of sexy moments, I can't help but GUSH how you portray intimacy, companionship, and love, especially the final chapter. It was insanely touching to see Gilah and ESPECIALLY Cathay showing vulnerability and internal strife and how much support the siblings were showing them.
The amount of Depth (hehe, get it?) your characters have and the scenarios you created have made this easily one of the best stories to ever grace this site. I'll be patiently and enthusiastically wait for the next installment with these characters. Thank you again for the fantastic story :)
Author's Response:
Sometimes all a monstrously powerful gal needs is a lil bit of love.
Even if that gal has quiet the temper *cough* Cathay *cough* *cough*
I am glad to hear you really enjoyed the story. Always makes me smile to see someone enjoying the stories I write.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2023 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Who We Can Be
Cathay forgot about the power difference there
I haven't commented but I've followed the story for a couple of chapters
Author's Response: Ima be honest, Cathay forgets a lot of things lol
[Report This]Date: February 02 2023 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: To Deal With Devils
I'm getting tired of Cathay being such an ass, if not for the deep dive into her mind and her personality I would probably hate her, I'll settle with someone knocking some sense into her weather with fists or words
Author's Response:
That sense talking might come sooner than expected. There are some beings even Cathay will learn not to mess with, and from the least likeliest of places too.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: At Our Worst We Show Our Best
BREATHTAKING. JUST LIKE THE DEPT- BLURBLURBLURBLURBLUBGLARGHHHHH
Author's Response:
*Insert Keanu Reeves*
You're breathtaking!
But for pun it is Depth's Gulag for you.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2022 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 6: At Our Worst We Show Our Best
This was an excellent chapter, I really love these eldritch sweethearts stories. I'm still wondering when Jason's sister will show up since it seemed like she was getting closer to solving what happened to her brother. I would really love to see Cathy find someone to cure her loneliness, I really wanna see this side of her character explored more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the stories! As for Valerie, she hasn't been forgotten. It's just that thus far there hasn't been a reason to bring her back in. Not like she can just dive in after her brother and into the Depths lol. As for Cathay, she gots a metaphorical shell to crawl out of if she wants to really help herself out. Unlike Gilah, she holds little to no regrets over the atrocities she's committed. That can hamper any relationship she seeks out. Would take a real strong individual to balance out Cathay's crueler nature. That's not to say a soft side to her doesn't exist, it's just that anyone who sees it usually doesn't live to tell the tale XD.
Date: October 03 2022 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Glorious Gift
String Theory is an interpretation of Quantum mechanics that suggests that the superpositions of subatomic particles such as photons are related to the positions of 2 “strings”. This simple interpretation of physics has been able to predict the masses and scalars of subatomic particles to almost 100%. However, this theory requires the existence of 11 dimensions, even though only 4 have been discovered(xyz axis, time).However, after the incidents of Cape Carnival, we have assessed that the cause of the incident was passed 5 dimensions, possibly exceeding 7. After thorough run through of simulations and using electronic microscopes and particle accelerators in the affected area, we have proven string theory and the theory of everything. However due to this incident, we believe that the higher dimensions are occupied with forces of incomprehensible power. These are classified as the Depths, Heaven, and Hell.Yet they made us a fatal mistake. They let us see and prove the true nature of the 11-d universe l. Using This, I suspect we could develop such technologies using this science to beat them at their own game. They think of us as germs and locusts. Yet man has never cured all diseases or killed all pests. We will rise and just as we learned to control the forces of nature on Earth, we will learn to control and eliminate the “eldritch” forces of the 11 dimensional universe. This is Theoretical physicist Max Carter out.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2022 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past
Dang, were those descriptions of Gilah’s sheer brutality and unmatched strength incredible. And with how vividly she remembered each and every bit, I can’t even begin to truly grasp what it must feel like to be her in that situation as she relives it again and again.
Solid work, Viper!
[Report This]Date: September 29 2022 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past
I'm "Love in" this story. Must be getting some McDonald's in here because I'm "Love in" it. Insert one more joke here.
Date: September 29 2022 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past
Disclaimer: I don't know this man at all, he just babbles on about shark waifus, then says "good idea Dive!" while he plasters my name in association with this monstrosity. It's also hard to type this while being tied to a chair.
But with that out of the way, I might as well review the sequel to "A Monstrous Mate." Gilah is as glorious as she was in the previous tale. The contrast between her monstrous power, and her care and tenderness towards Jason is the most compelling part of her character.
Cathay ... is a piece of work, that's all I'll say about her.
This latest installment was indeed a doozy. Gilah most certainly takes after the Klingons, or the Vikings, seeing battle as a purifying ritual. Going up against all those monsters from all corners of the universe is quite a feat ... I wonder what cosmic horrors she could have encountered...
The bloody imagery, and Gilah's bloodlust in the first part of this chapter is portrayed clear as crystal, and it is glorious. Bursting through the head of a shinigami evokes quite the image, I must say.
The scene with Jason was a much needed cool down, although I believe a shorter answer to Gilah's burning, "Am I a monster?" question would have done the trick. The paragraph he exposits felt like a bit too ... expositiony, it kind of took me out of the flow of the story.
But that's my only nitpick, I look forward to what will happen next. And please let me go, I have a family.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Glorious Gift
Excellent world building.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Glorious Gift
Excellent world building.
Date: August 29 2022 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: Even The Best Of Intentions...
This keeps getting interesting.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2022 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 2: Even The Best Of Intentions...
I can't believe I'm just now finding out about this! Mythology, monsters insane power differences, oh it's got everything! This collection of writers really come to gather to make something special. If I could describe it in a word I would say grand, you all did a wonderful job of showing just how anciently immense they are :)
[Report This]Date: August 18 2022 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Glorious Gift
I really liked this continuation of the first iteration in the series! There’s a lot of cool world-building and so much of what Cathay and Gilah look like is left up to a broad range of imagination from the eldritch, otherworldly descriptions. They both feel extraordinarily powerful but also relatable in some regards due to their more ‘human’ characteristics.
I loved how Gilah swims around Jason like a predatory shark, it’s a cute touch that makes her feel like more of a slightly dorky gentle leviathan that can also casually rearrange the stars.
I LOVE giantesses that also have more abilities than just their size, and Gilah really demonstrates a broad set of fascinating powers. I can’t wait to see what else comes up down the road for these two!
Author's Response:
SUPER glad you enjoyed the story!
A dorky leviathan is certainly something Gilah can be especially when around Jason XD. She and Cathay hold so much power and yet if you push the right buttons on at least one of them and they'll break apart leaving behind a stuttering mess that might seem too human to be a walking apocalypse. They, of course, have their own habits which set them apart from humans, as you saw with Gilah's circling. The poor girl's still getting used to these feelings of love.
She has so much power and yet is still new to the relationship scene. Who knows just what else she might demonstrate for her Jason?