[Report This]Date: September 25 2024 9:27 AM Title: World-ending Proposal
I read this something like 5 times, but i always forget to review it. Anyways, that was a great piece! Loved the concept, the descriptions, Sathanastia's visuals in particular, and your management of the dialogue is top-notch.
Always a fun vignette
[Report This]Date: September 22 2022 3:27 AM Title: World-ending Proposal
I'm a sucker for giantesses that inexplicably require tiny men to reproduce. I really enjoyed your descriptions, particularly in Sathanastia's physiology, and your dialogue easily gives the two main characters very different voices. I also really like how her origin and purpose harkens back to the truly eldritch gods and monsters of the past. I'm not usually into gentle stuff, but I can't wait to see how heartwarming and wholesome the Charcoal Queen can be.
Author's Response:
I too, am in love with "beeg gurl needs tinies for a whirl" to keep the bloodline going. It's a convenient excuse for the usual hijinks. While Sath's humanoid, I definitely wanted to portray that she is most definitely out of this world, hence the rather technical dialogue and dark design. This alien understanding of humanity, I suppose, is a form of 'innocence' that can keep things cute, with a cosmic twist.
I'm stealing the name Charcoal Queen by the way.
Date: August 18 2022 10:15 AM Title: World-ending Proposal
I love this concept, and I love this already.
Author's Response:
Good to hear! We'll see what comes next, won't we?
[Report This]Date: August 18 2022 2:32 AM Title: World-ending Proposal
Can't think of much better than a devoted apocalyptic eldritch sweetheart. A destined beloved who is given the choice of being with such a powerful beauty. Who could possibly say no?
Author's Response:
I can, if I was promised a flustered, muscly shark grill that can bend space and time. And who's name rhymes with "Zilla".
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 1:04 PM Title: World-ending Proposal
Very sweet story idea being done here. Also excellent use of vocabulary and literary language in general. Description was on point too. Of course it’s too early to judge any character with how little we know about anyone right now, but this is a solid start. One written extremely well.
Author's Response:
I forgot to mention in the intro that "His Soul in the Palm of her Hand" with the concept of, "powerful spacefaring babe scouts out her soulmate" was a huge inspiration for this. You're making a splash around here!
That being said, I'm flattered by your review, hopefully it doesn't come across as pretentious. I'll see what I can add on to this, if I get the time and inspiration to.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 11:19 AM Title: World-ending Proposal
Gosh this is too cute, especially with how massive, yet flustered she is. Really hope you continue with this!
Author's Response:
I am performing something of a juggling act with these stories. But there may be something down the pipeline eventually.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 3:14 AM Title: World-ending Proposal
Awesome introduction chapter! Excited to see how meeting the parents plays out!
Author's Response:
It's gonna be a fun one. Not even cosmic horrors can resist the sheer terror of a scolding Mother.