Reviewer: Pinobr Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2022 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 & 2

I converted by "GOOGLE TRANSLATOR" hope you understand: First of all, I love your story and I would like you to put the "Great change on education" again, I believe the name was that, it is a part of the same universe, as a suggestion I think it can even merge the stories. I like your idea of r03;r03;slow changes, I love seeing how evil female characters can be. For the suggestions you asked for: I love seeing believable stories, in this case assuming that shrinkage can actually occur of course, I don't think all women are going to be mean to all men and I don't believe that just because they are shrinking they will stop being politicians, programmers, engineers and other professions that do not depend on their stature, it would be interesting for this to happen. On the other hand, there are professions that would be impossible for the shrunken ones such as police, firefighters, construction and others in these it would certainly be necessary for women to occupy them. It would be nice to see the transition in both cases. Having said that men can occupy certain jobs regardless of their stature, I think that bad-intentioned women can get in the way and even prevent their work would be particularly interesting if it occurs in politics. Another funny thing would be the locomotion of men at a given moment they could not use a car at another time they could not use public transport and finally would depend on women. I think richer men can hire women as personal bodyguards. Another worrying thing for men would be animals at a given time domestic animals would be a danger to them later on birds and squirrels and dogs and stray cacti could be a problem and finally insects.

I would particularly find it funny to see men scared of a chihuahua from a preppy girl on the street. Well, as I said, I don't think all women are going to be mean and I don't think they're going to act mean right away. I think the first cruelties have to be done without witnesses or with a circle of women who think it's right, if the events become public it could have negative repercussions for women I like to think that changes with women will be slow: Women will tease men in an idiotic way, accidents will eventually occur, men will start to be afraid which will lead to more women playing with men and finally serious accidents. At this point I think society will try to impose laws to prevent such accidents which will consequently take away men's freedom. Finally, I think that women would abuse power in general but without admitting it or simply wouldn't help because they think it's too much work, It would be nice to see a character transition Good women go bad and bad women go good. I hope it helped you.

Reviewer: NaastyDarkness Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2022 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 47

Hello fellow readers! This story is in a kind of hiatus. I have the whole story written but a few months back I got feedback that that part of the story felt rushed and there were too many men being eliminated too quickly.

Let me know about your ideas: plots, subplots, scenes, character development.

Ultimately, this world will become very mean towards men but maybe I wrote that transition too quickly.

Your feedback will be highly appriated, don't get mad if I don't use any of your ideas or the story doesn't go were you want it to go.