I've been making my way through this story for a few days, because it was so goddamn good I just couldn't treat it like wankbait the way I tend to treat stories on this site. I tend to find that stories with good, nonsexual writing have a habit of failing as fetish material because the authors spend way too much time flexing their prose skills and not enough time doing things that Are Hot Fetish Content, but you've hit such a perfect balance of the two that I think this is probably now my #1 favorite story on the site. I can tell it was the perfect length because even though I would love to see more, I feel totally satisfied with how much there was - an extremely rare balance to hit. Well done and congratulations on producing Peak.

Fair on the craftsman and town, at least food wont be an issues like I proposed. 

And interesting take on demons and succubus and how they relate to gods. And true, one or a few might still be be out there needing to hav their mess cleaned up.  

I also PMeded you a thing on discord, didn’t want potential spoilers for others. 

Good story all the way through. can’t wait to see what you do next!

And yeah, a tiny town definitely needs terrified villagers, suppose some solid illusions should do it, or maybe pseudo polymorph some kid of berry or regrowing things so rampagers could properly squash or eat them. And Zenovia can do the final touchups and behaviours imputing to her tastes and standards. And people volunteering or ”volunteering” to be small in them. 

Then its making multiple one more people come along and who want it use it. 

Could expand to smaller villages, bigger cities, different scaled, difference races or countries, even scenarios like fighting an army or being mercenary giantesses who have to kidnap the princes or princess intact or assassinate someone, or dress up as a dragon girl and kidnap a prince or princess for a night in the ‘Lair’. 

Advertising/pamphlets/invitations will be easy at least, get a normal bit of paper, make the printing press plate as small as possible (easily enough at shrunken size, then copy past with some metal magic along the whole plate, not like its much metal to change in some weird way), then cut the paper properly and then grow them to normal size, and have possibly thousands or them from just once pieces of paper. Could come with some temp or once charge enchantments/spell scroll that do fun things or add to it. Aditinaly would let Zenovia have eyes thorough them all, and if any far older or existing followers are nearby or find them, shed know. And they could come join the temple, or send letter and organize new branches. 

And what next adventures will happen will be a whole other campaign, by then Vann will probably have more precesses(or maybe even more permanent resents), probably more dwarven inventions, maybe even plans for a portal directly to Zenovia’s realm, see how Chadwick’s family and Eletha will continue to work things out longer term, other adventures in the meanwhile. will be by then. Eletha might even invite some other Elf friends of hers if she enjoys all this this much. 

Who knows what will get together again, and what new people will show up along the way. 

So thanks for writing this!

Definitely not a letdown great chapter

Hopefully she stays big and has her way with chidwick

The full Monty Python...

Great climax and payoff for Eletha.

I look forward to seeing how Vann rebuilds and helps 'consecrate' Zenovia's rebuilt temple. Presumably with lots of help from his friends.

Epilogue next? Damn, that ended too fast. We saw Mistress action only in 1 chapter and there was no barefoot play with an elf. I like elfs in this setting because even if they dominate someone they can't make them miserable because of elf's "perfect" body: soft dainty  pale feet, clean because being dirty is against their pride, tender toes that do not hurt even if they push you around.

Another great chapter. It was really nice to see some domination scenes with the orc and Vann, and I especially appreciated the foot scenes with her and Vann, thank you for that.

Interesting development with The Mistress using asteroids to try to cause the apocalypse. Definitely a unique and simple twist on a world ending scheme as opposed to some elaborate spell or summoning some ancient or eldritch horror. As they say, keep it simple lol.

I look forward to hearing more about her past as Zevonias servant, I wonder how she managed to live this long. 

The heros definitely seem to have their work cut out for then. I always look forward to reading more.

Boss battle time! And Vann seemed to have gone first and rolled a good hit, even it it didn’t do enough damage.  

And understanding asteroid are a thing huh, well I don’t think she can keep good tabs on dwarven astronomy from all the way out there, but her nots should be worth a lot to sell. 

Thought a Lich might get some ideas: https://funnyjunk.com/The+comet+lich/wNYoMjA/

After they git her, and maybe not kill her, Carlotta might get to visit Zenovia with Vann when both are unconscious. And Vann sill also get to look at what Zenovia punishments for heresy are. 

And to add to the last reviews thing on vampires, a vampier over the millennia had to have decided to combine known size changing magic with Zenovia’s Embiggen for efficiency to make some ideal candidate bigger while under trance (whatever if the best blood for vampires) and the shank themselves snd their coven and harvested the blood from the now far larger ‘blood donor’. Bet that would allow a truly large amount of vampires to enjoy a full meal. Then the prison is shrunk into a tiny and made to recover for latter.

Thought a different interesting leftover of Zenovia, also using elven longevity, a elf learns the basic set of spells and prayers and such, but not much much in her youth (possibly younger then Eletha), and whatever happen, just kept going it. And so shes been at it for several thousand years, perhaps even in a particular city foe a thousand years directly. And over that she accrued the equivalent of divine interest, it just been sticking to her and not going to Zenovia cause he want doing it completely. 

So nothing evil, just an ultra faithful follower, who probably would have been a better choice for chosen after all this time, and once Vann finds her would get scheduled to replace him once he’s dead. 

Oh, and a fun bonus thought, a sheep girl who’s head of an unrelated cult, Cult of the Lamb and such, if Enid’s cuteness is anything to go by. 

I've been following this one, but nary left a review. I'm going to fix that. This is a real bundle of fun. There's a bit of everything, lore, jokes and of course, the good stuff, in each chapter. It's a real fast, packed story, no chapters are spent just travelling, and very little wasted time. 

Eletha is wonderfully proud and arrogant, Chadwick is an absolute bro, Rumana's real cute with him, and a bundle of dwarvin fun. Tyra is another fun, rough and tumble tomboy, among my favorites in here, and Vann, our main man, has a heart of iron, not to mention, a prickly sense of humor.

Zenovia turned out to be a very likable character. She warmed up to Vann rather quickly, but for a rational cause, because he seemed decently devoted to her. I have to confess, however, my favorite character in here is Razita, but that's just because I have an eye for tall, muscular orc girls. "Humie" is the cherry on top.

You finest moment was Vann striking Carlotta: 

“My timing isn’t great,” Vann called, “but I hope the joke landed.”

I look forward to the finale.