Date: August 18 2022 8:39 AM Title: The Goddess Awakens
To previous guy: cute girl fox that is over 100 y o is not a beastkin. It's some kind of fox spirit. Beastkin are usually human experiments or descendants of spirit and human while spirit is naturally evolved beast that is a lot more magical than average human and it's very hard to find one.
To Author: cute barefoot loli is always a good addition. Hope next one is a constantly flying witch that doesn't like shoes.
Author's Response:
A little bit of Enid's nature will be explored in the next chapter, she's a little bit of a mix between the western, more particularly Anglo/Scottish idea of the Cunning Folk (NOT the fey/fairies), and of course the Japanese spirit which is ironically more well known in the US despite our heritage. This is reflected both in her disguise as a western crone style witch, and her true nature as a fox-girl, while her actual abilities are a sort of mix between what both are said to be capable of.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2022 1:17 AM Title: Enid of the Wilds
Well that answers what kind of ‘beast kin’ (if the is the term) people are around, unless there are also Catgirls/fox girls of the Khajiit/Tabaxi variety.
Either and both could work.
But Vann really does need to read more into the books.
Author's Response:
This story is a sort of parody of DnD style adventures and RPGs in general, so yeah there are probably furrier girls out there, I'm definitely into monstergirls but the full on anthro/furry kind like Tabaxi don't really do it for me, so it's unlikely that one will show up in an erotic sense in one of my stories. Nothing against anyone who is into that, I certainly won't claim a moral high ground with how many monstergirl stories I've done, but that's my personal taste lol.
Vann definitely needs to read more into the books, more will be explored as we go along.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 11:33 PM Title: Enid of the Wilds
Another great chapter, I greatly appreciate the regular and steady updates.
I didn't expect the twist with Enid, its nice to see some different fantasy races and characters. I liked her mischievous and bratty attitude. I'm interested to see how she will factor into the story and the party going forward.
With a foxgirl coming into the story, is there potential to see other fantasy races come into play? I would love to see an orc girl dominate Vann with her sweaty feet.
It was also very endearing to hear Vann's proclamation of him loving being her champion and saying she's perfect. I'm eager to see how that relationship develops as well.
A minor detail, but I also found Chadwicks uncomfortable reaction towards the end with learning how he got Enid to agree to join them to be amusing. He makes a good straight man to all of the silliness with the shrinking and women using Vann.
I always look forward to reading more, great job again.
Author's Response:
You might say that it's a standard DnD/Warcraft style fantasy world with a ton of possible races. Not sure if there's room for an orc lady in the plot I've got planned, but I'll see. I did have one in A Diplomatic Mission if that's your thing, along with lots of other monstergirls.
Zenovia and Vann are becoming closer, he's something she hasn't really encountered before, even a femdom goddess has room for infatuation in her heart.
Chadwick is our straight man, the normal player in the magical realm lol. I think of him as someone who genuinely just wants what makes his friends happy, if Vann wants to do what he's doing, then Chadwick will go along with it even if he doesn't necessarily want to see it firsthand.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 2:45 PM Title: Setting Out
Really liking the characters in this story so far even if I'm not really into humiliation. Kind of hoping Vann performs the growing spell on Tyra instead since it would make more sense with her physical strength and also because I wanna see more Tyra action but you didnt hear that from me. Also is it me or is Zenovia slowly becoming attracted to Vann?
Author's Response:
The growing spell is definitely the Chekhov's Gun of the story, like Tyra said the growing spell on her makes a lot more sense, but Eletha just wants to be big and mean so bad lol. Yes Zenovia is coming around to her new champion in more ways than one.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 6:23 AM Title: Setting Out
Another great chapter, I enjoyed the world building and character development, specifically with regards to Dwarven society and their advancements, as well as Chadwicks other ravings. It helps the world feel more fleshed out and lived in.
It was also nice to see that party work together as a team and too see how they interact with Vann on his first adventure. I wonder if they will meet their match soon, even with Vanns new power.
I also appreciated the reference to your other story "Abduction", perhaps the toxin helped him see into other universes lol.
The scene with Eletha and Vann was also nice and steamy, it was great to see her dominant side, and a nice cherry on top with him begging for her panties.
Loving the story so far, I'm always eager to read more.
Author's Response:
Like most RPG adventures you rarely see the most powerful enemies first. Most of the girls in this story will get to show their dominant sides with Vann, it's how he powers up! Anyways as always thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2022 9:16 PM Title: A Taste of Power
Eletha is wonderful
Author's Response:
Isn't she?
Date: August 16 2022 6:49 PM Title: The Goddess Awakens
I created an account just so I could gush and say thanks. I'm 45 and have consumed an embarrassing amount of GTS erotica. This is easily one of my favorite reads and I'm eagerly anticipating new chapters. Yes, we're here for the triggers ( feet, size play, domination/ humiliation) and you incorporate these expertly; yet it's everything else that elevates the story into masterpiece material. The world and the characters who inhabit this fantasy domain. Their personalities and interactions with one another. The action and flow of your writing style. Your understanding of the space and it's tropes and your deft weaving of the fetish into this fantastical fabric. What an impressive work of literature thus far. Please make more.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have plans for more, so don't worry. If you're into fantasy tales I've got a few others in my catalog, both A Diplomatic Mission and Saving the Kingdom for Dummies take place in a fantasy setting, and The Landlady is a Real Witch is a more modern urban fantasy.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2022 6:03 AM Title: Setting Out
Now that was a fun 4th wall break.
And the various things dwarves are evidently up to. Quite advanced getting to germ theory and it being heard all the way out there, if they even visit a truly big city or capital, bet all the doctors and healing will be mentioning it and how to have healing spells with it in mind. If they need to get new healing spells. And more of the dwarven ‘nonsense’, plus what others may have come up with that's similar.
Rumana’s going to be important later isn’t she.
Back sith the rituals thing, Zenovia must have come up with so many rituals during her horny has about her followers, it would be curious enough to eventually learn what she removed/left out of her book, and what she left in, considering what rituals are already there and how her followers acted back when. Some could have even taken that magic for a different goddesses or demons or such of their own use. Means some divine legal battle has to happen over taking her spell for a different high being used. So that's another task for the pile , destroying those ‘corrupted’/heretical versions’. In some way. And other divine catching’s up she’ll have to do now that she's awake.
And other leftovers, if someone is killed after being Embiggen, would it leave their giant corps, or would it undo? That will have to be learned naturally later, probably part of the scars of some city from when that happened. Or some lakes in the vague pattern of footprints, even if eroded they still line up. Their clothing might even still be around, if it comes with the ritual. Add that to artifacts of Zenovia’s, old tower sized armoured heels left somewhere, or a full suit, or such.
And I do recommend looking up any dnd store channels on Youtube or r/DnD so you can get more inspiration that I could probably fit into a whole story’s worth of reviews. Get stuff for the background or encounters. Whatever you think is cool or good.
And a patron avatar of Tiamat art, cause it looks good, spent ages looking for it just for this, cause it what made me think of whatever dragon deity and Zenovia discussing about their followers overlapping:https://nitter.net/ishton/status/1385648294853029898
Author's Response:
The dwarves here are sort of steampunk/science focused relative to the setting's other races, though far on the frontier their more impressive achievements aren't visible. Of course try convincing people of germ theory in a world where evil spirits and curses actually exist, I imagine those dwarven medical pioneers have many frustrating talks with the setting's priests and mages.
Rumana will appear later in the story yes
Obviously there are some heavy DnD and general fantasy RPG tropes heavily influencing this one. I'm well familiar with them, so don't worry on my account!
Anyways as for Embiggen I imagine you'd go back to normal if you got killed while it was active, though the giant footprints might still be out there from whenever it was last used though. The giant growth thing would be a rarely used thing even for Zenovia's followers, as Vann notes it's extremely lengthy and difficult to pull off.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2022 9:34 PM Title: A Taste of Power
Oh yeah time ill tell if it was worth it. Hopefully magic grows with usage and time. (and sorry everyone for the long review)
With what kinds of people Zenovia’s followers were, some obviously there the Big Band Evil Guy/Gal(BBEG) of some people's adventures, and all the way down to the cult that runs a brothel or something. What interesting conflicts or interactions between them and the other deity(ies) of love or similar, back when they were more common.
There's gadda be some full sapient(more inclusive and expansive than human) sacrifice rituals in there that he and others obviously couldn’t do, legally at least, and cause Vann would die. But two could be comoed, in a ritual circle crushing a shrunken men with high heeled shoes makes the high heels no longer cause any balance concerns, running in a stiletto on a muddy battlefield would then the possible and only left to the person's own skill or balance. Crushing them inside the shoes makes the shoes perfectly fit and perfectly comfortable, and probably make it so the wearer and Zenovia has controls of the inside so tinies can be held inside, like what Eletha is doing but better in every way, more convenient, or give more options. Subject as well to the quality if the footwear and now of Zenovia’s iconography is on it, and what she thinks of it. Also another one of crushing under barefoot to give some super agility, dexterity, divine sure-footedness, or never-ending perfect food health. And probably some other version that uses women, cause some be traitors and heretics or such (better to have a way of dealing with such, maybe something only Vann can see, cause he’s choose), or just women were used, Female Domination can be a female dominating another female too. So the sacrificing of both a man and a woman in those rituals, 6 men and 6 women, was ultra overpowered to whoever managed it. (and IF that's the case, the enchantments Zenovia’s book has for these (when the sacrifice rituals aren’t used, or instead use a tiny as a constant source of power) might be interesting to compare with normal balancing, sure-footed etc. footwear enchantments that are used, or that nobles use because they can)
Or some rituals might get some maxing out or bonus from being done to a death. Probably highly variable, only some, and it is probably Zenovia’s call at that point.
And there could also be similar rituals for boobplate, bikini plate, and others. Maybe some done in a ritual circle (or shape), or a piece with a different effect applied, prevents true death within that aria, so some of the rituals could get real nary without real death, but cannot do the sacrifice rituals (cause no death). Or a building enchantment that shrinks men on some premises or aria or building. Or allows for the shrinking and growing of space, a more conceptual way of making bags of holding or TARDIS spaces. Far from real spacial magic and what it can do, but just good enough.
More back to what some her followers did, some noble lady and her the female members if her clan, did the high heels and various clothing ritual on their entire shoe collection and wardrobes, and with their maids and servants too, got taken down by someone, or maybe the place got cursed, so there useful materials from that mansion or castle, and some of their shoes and such are artifacts laying around. Or a female knight made an order and they used her enchantments for their armour. Or an all female merc/bandit band, ambushing caravans and even having princesses or queens for ransom, besides the men. And with all the other leftovers of Zenovia’s followers from back when. Probably even some hidden valley or place that a follower teleport shrunken villages and a city or two to play goddess with, heresy probably but Zenovia was asleep, and maybe that follower died, and now its a tiny land with several tiny kingdoms.
With being 500 feet (152 meters. 300 ft is as tall as the statue of liberty, so 500 is tall) of Embiggen (besides what stories or records say back they’ve happened), and depending on how big dragons are(if they exist, from just DND kins, or bigger (thought hopefully not as big as Ancalagon the Black), you know some of her followers use her rituals and spells on dragons (or tried). Cause they could use Embiggen to maybe stuff a dragon down their underwear, or shrink them for the same and use them for even more power. Or a female dragon decided to try Zenovia out, the whole politicking/drama between the dragon god(ess) and her when their domains or followers overlap/interacted would be an interesting story, if it ever gets motioned or involved (besides the dragon one, deities or smithing or craft, and the one of love/sex for the brothel thing. so many) . If Embiggen increases size by scale and not to a size, a dragon or existing giantess might try these. Whatever happened to the ones that did.
Two, more practical things: first, with dragons as an example, and other races might not be mammals, for females don't have boobs, and I can guess Zenovia likes those. So some "womanizing" (by humanoid standards) ritual might be a thing if she deems it needed for that follower. For lizards, insectoids, fish/aquatic that aren't' mermaids, maybe dryads/trees (depending), or even non-humanoid sapients. Goda think of theses things as a diety, can't be too exclusive.
The second one is that since its female domination, then Zenovia had to have rituals, or a few, for shen women wanted to have children but not have men involved. Either between two, bick one or the other both to have kids. Or be a "virgin" birth (of course it won't be, this godess loves sex), or some bigger one what brings Zenovia directly to help, makes some charecter creator like dream for the daughters(s). Or and orgy ritual needing at a bare minimum 10 women, whatever it does, And maybe some particular for sons and such, have to keep up the populations of both. Perhaps the two-women-mating ritual or spell was taken after an all female noble family or two had it for a while, Zenovia's influence was removed, and now is something for the court physician and mages of royals and nobles houses have just in case, cause it's not a bad precousing is two houses are need to marry and only daughter are available, or two women fell in love but an heir is still needed. Noble dynastic arranged marriage management, probably pretty boring in the end.
Well this was another long one, hope it gives food for thought. (Again, sorry to anyone reading the reviews and seeing this thing)
Author's Response:
Zenovia is probably more of a chaotic neutral aligned deity than outright evil. I like to think she intended her followers to do good in the world but just got caught up getting horny watching all the chaos they were causing. Her followers definitely ended up as villains in plenty of other people's adventures.
As you said for obvious reasons Vann doesn't want to do any of the lethal rituals lol. That said Zenovia has plenty of enchanted artifacts floating around which we will see later in the story. Also Zenovia definitely accepts women dominating women as part of her worship, though men are her preferred targets.
Zenovia can probably do all things to help out if a woman really desires not to have a man around, that said bigger rewards demand bigger service.
[Report This]Date: August 15 2022 8:24 PM Title: A Taste of Power
Another great story, I'm glad to see another one from you.
I'm definitely a fan giantess of fantasy stories and this one has been great so far. I like the lighter hearted tone of the story so far, it's been entertaining to see.
The characters also have great interactions. The blowjob interaction with Tyra and Vann making Tyra grow was a creative touch and their playful yet affectionate and domineering relationship is nice to see. I also liked the in shoe foot interaction with Vann in Tyra's boot. Hope we see more with both her and Eletha.
I also like Eletha's haughty and arrogant attitude. That has a lot of potential as you outlined in this chapter.
I also want to give credit to Chadwicks character. He helps bring levity to the party and the story and helps keep things light hearted. I also appreciate his encouragement and belief in Vann. He plays a nice father like figure for the party.
The mind control command like ability also has a lot of potential. Do you think we could see Vann forced to lick clean the insole of Tyra's sweaty and grimy boots while inside?
Loving the story so far, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks glad our main party works well together. Don't worry Vann will see the inside of plenty of boots lol
[Report This]Date: August 12 2022 1:43 AM Title: The Goddess Awakens
Excited to see where another one of your amazing works takes us. I really enjoyed the first chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, this one is going to be a silly rather than a serious adventure, but it'll be fun I think.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2022 8:21 AM Title: The Goddess Awakens
Amazing as per usual. I love a fantasy world, especially in this setting. The characters are about what I’d expect too, having their usual character traits. Although I’m not a huge fan of some of them, but that’s just my own personal opinion. Regardless, this is setting up to be another great one. My only criticism would be that, as it’s a fantasy world, a bit more detail would be nice around it.
Author's Response:
I'll try to give a little more info on the area, think of it as a northern forested frontier, lots of mountains, boreal climate, etc.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2022 2:05 AM Title: The Goddess Awakens
Really nice and entertaining story. Will be interesting to read where things lead to.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hopefully good places!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 9:37 PM Title: The Goddess Awakens
An amazing start. I am very much interested in seeing how Vann is going to grapple with the give and take of his newfound power, especially with the likes of Eletha.
That line about the ritual of belittlement makes me hope that Zenovia is potentially eyeing up best elf as a new priest/follower.
Very much looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Zenovia will be taking an interest in her given how often she'll be "helping" Vann out. As for Vann, well spending some time as his friend's tiny plaything seems worth it for magical power, right? Next chapter will explore some more of the "complications" lol.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 8:26 PM Title: The Goddess Awakens
Agreed with @DcZ
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 7:22 PM Title: The Goddess Awakens
Oh this seems the like start of another good one.
Author's Response:
Thanks!