[Report This]Date: November 05 2022 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Conclusion.
I could read this story for ages. I hope it continues!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2022 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
Wow, the descriptions are very much so on point. Perhaps I find them a little bit too long at times personally, but objectively speaking, I think they’re near perfect in terms of quality. Characterisation of both our male and female lead is quite strong too. With descriptions about them giving us a general idea, and they’re actions directly showing us. Little to no spelling or grammar issues from what I can tell too.
There’s also a greater world at large and a threat that needs to be kept at bay. I’m interested to see how these specific plot lines will interact with our main characters.
Overall, this seems like it’s going to be a great entry.
Date: November 04 2022 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
I absolutely loved the story. I'm so glad it got finished! I've been silently waiting since August for this chapter. Great job!
I'm also an infantry vet, So I really liked chapter 4, got the military vibe down pat.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2022 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Conclusion.
This was a great and heart pulling story. Short, sweet, great descriptions, emotions, and some sexiness slipped in for increased flavor. Honestly, it could be a short tv series or a movie. Congratulations to Jennifer and Francois as well for their happy ending. As for the other women, part of me wonders if they ended up so cold because they didn't have someone like Francois in their lives. Either that or their power went to their head. Anyway, great story!
Date: August 13 2022 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Out of the dark
Ya sabemos más o menos como se conocieron estos dos aparte de eso quiero saber cómo funciona el crecimiento de las mujeres, además de porque elegiste solo mujeres y no hombres también digo es lamentable que Jennifer solo tenga el poder y Francois nada, a menos claro que eso cambié si le ocurre algo interesante que le dé poder
Pd esto más o menos me recuerda a una historia donde una mujer podía hacerse grande a voluntad y su pareja se le otorga el poder, con la diferencia de que enfrentaban otras mujeres gigantes y no kaijus
[Report This]Date: August 13 2022 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Out of the dark
One of my favorite chapters so far! Not only do we get an origin to how they met but also an update to the present. I legitimately teared up at the end and I can't wait for the next chapter after this.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2022 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Facing the Abyss
What a chapter! I'm hoping Francois is somehow alive because I didn't expect to get my heart ripped out so soon. It's not clear on whether he's dead or in a coma so I'm still hopeful for the most part.
Date: August 10 2022 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Facing the Abyss
l'm sold, now l can't wait for the continuation.
Will like to see more of Fran and Jen together (if he made it) but also read more about the other giantesses.
Date: August 10 2022 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Facing the Abyss
Okey eso fue una gran exageración incluso con un poder que viene de la ciencia, hablando de eso estás mujeres tienen alguna modificación genética en sus cuerpos o es entrenamiento físico, porque si fuera una Giganta normal de un tamaño considerable entonces el kaiju ganaria
[Report This]Date: July 29 2022 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Change of Plans
Francois needs to learn to say no to work, that or set his Titaness up a crowdfunded income source, not sure how that works for a monster fighting superheroine though, like do contributors get to name monsters she kills or... Anyway, great continuation, keep up the good work.
Date: July 28 2022 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
Interesting start, not gonna lie l wanna see how these two meet and how in earth they become a couple.
Keep going, you got something with potential.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2022 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
Wow, I am absolutely amazed by this story! Love the character writing. Absolutely LOVE the setting (a superhero girlfriend is one of my favorites!!), really like the kinds of conflict we've seen so far, but especially also the endearing and wholesome interactions. I really enjoy how Jennifer uses (and abuses) her growth powers up to this point. The writing style is very vivid and paints a clear picture in my head.
Can't wait to read more and see Jennifer in action as a heroine <3.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2022 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
Really interesting introduction, especially as a proof of concept for further work.
I think the personality of the characters really shines through here. Love seeing a size-shifting giantess playing with her power too.
This looks like it could work really well as a ‘slice-of-life’ style story, with the action occurring as you’ve done here on the TV.
Hope to read more of this!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2022 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
Love the contrast between the superhero lifestyle and the normal day to day living. I have to say Titaness deserves a raise, then she can buy a sturdier couch!
[Report This]Date: July 27 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The weekend ahead
Really excited to see how this story develops! I love the interactions between our protagonists and I cant wait to see more of them. They were just hanging out in the living room this entire chapter and you had me hooked.
I'd also really like to see more world building and information about the whole monster and bio weapon situation and how/why Jennifer got her powers. The world you set up here is really intriguing and it has me curious about the backstory even about how Jennifer and Francois met.
Keep up the good work! Hope to see more!