Waiting for bounty hunter to culture the princess and show her how to educate someone properly

Really liking the story and world so far. It's a nice sci fi take on the giantess genre, and I think you've done a great job with the world building and character interactions so far.

I also like the concept of basically Amazon space orcs, but with a slight twist, and specifically the characterizations of the Zetans. 

Interesting to see Kurt's reaction with the princess and her demands/teasing, and his reactions, especially with her feet. Hoping to see more interactions and/or possible forced sweaty foot worship between Kurt and the princess or with other Zetans.

Looking forward reading more, I'm definitely excited for this story. Keep up the good work.

I’m invested. 

What's to say beyond the obvious? Another slam dunk start to another one of your series. 

Love that Telmas point of view is getting some development even if she wasnt as extreme as Nea in her distaste for humans, Im excited to see how her relationship with Joey affects her perspective now that hes got his cool back. Also I find myself relating with Kurt especially when he mentioned hed be willing to die for his pride. That hit too close to home for me and its exactly how i felt throughout that scene. Probably not a good thing survivability wise but id wanna go down with some fight in me. Cant wait to see how or if Kurt gets her back!

Really good story thus far!

In terms of raw narrative complexity, this is definitely the best one you’ve done. With multiple puzzle pieces moving, and it’s all shown to us rather than being explicitly told. Good detail given too, with a nice set up for a classic enemy to lover style arc.

The biggest weakness I’ve found with any space intergalactic stories is the way they’re described usually; it’s hard to translate a picture from an author to the audience, With how these things look. I know it isn’t a focus for this story, but I do think it would be beneficial to have a small segment or to even further extend the description for these things some more. Would go a long way.

But yeah, keep it up. It’s going great.

This, this may be your masterpiece.

Welcome to Hell was rather fun. I was alright with One-Year Lease. The witch story got a few laughs. But this story is going to get me refreshing the "Most Recent" section of the site everyday. "We help each other get by" has stood the test of time as my favorite of yours, but this story right here may exceed it.

I most definitely appreciate that this is more focused narratively than "The Conquest of Earth." Heck, it even has some of the same archetypes, with the human diplomat, the rugged, rural main character, and a domineering, somewhat condescending race. The Zentans appear to be an amalgamation of the Alemari and the Ghalans, combining both the conquering warlike tendency, with the "make humans pets" belief.

The crux of this, is that Kurt hates Zentans, and Nea wishes to establish dominion over the humans. You've set these two opposing viewpoints on a collision course, with both heading at full speed. I think this is a more compelling conflict than "One year lease" even though that was played out as more as a light-hearted Tom and Jerry dynamic. Unlike Eva, Nea is completely all-in her beliefs, while I felt Eva's were a bit contrived. Perhaps the reason is that Nea defies the authority in her life, her mother's, while Eva tried appealing to the authority in her life, Amber.

Anyways, I look forward to seeing how this will develop.

I really like Nea. Sure she’s a bit of a brat and definitely bigoted, but it seems like she’s had little exposure to humans outside of the guards. Even seeing one that was attractive and defiant had her calling him perfect and taking interest in him. Definitely great so far!

Author's Response:

Nea doesn't know nearly as much about humans, or even Zetans, as she thinks, she's very sheltered and spoiled so she's in for some culture shock.

Dang you did a pretty good job of making Nea morally reprehensible even moreso than Eve at the start of One Year Lease. Really makes me want to see her suffer some karma even if it takes a bit. I really enjoyed the side story with Adam and Kira even if the past relationship between them is still a bit mysterious. Like why did they split or how do they know each other? Didn't expect another chapter so soon but it's always welcome!