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Reviewer: Lupin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2022 11:51 PM Title: Getting to know the landlord lady

Seems like Anna has a crush on our protagonist. Must be weird crushing on someone whos up your ass and vice versa. I'm intrigued to see how their relationship would work out lol.

Author's Response: You´re making a good observation over here, but as a matter of fact, Anna tries to imply that she tends to forget about the people living in her ass
the explanation on why Anna has some kind of interest in Nathan is already planned out as well, I hope you like how this dynamic will progress! :D

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2022 5:43 AM Title: The descision

The idea of this article is really great and I can't wait to see the updates



Author's Response:

Thanks! I´m glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 12 2022 3:11 AM Title: The descision

Nice story, though I'm with Clover.  They need to get out and explore Anna's ass.

One thing, just to be clear, the anal beads are not inside of Anna right now?  For the weekend?  After all, they can see her in the room with them.  Sounds like she doesn't have them inside for now.

You might be interested: https://aryion.com/g4/view/801974

I did those years ago; but your story reminded me of them so I posted a few of them.

You do have a lot of grammatical errors.  They do not take away from the story however.

Well done, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!
I know I have some grammatical errors, I try to avoid them but English is not my native language, I hope is not a big inconvenience

Reviewer: Carl2796 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2022 8:19 PM Title: The descision

Love this story it’s pretty good 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Waizing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2022 9:03 PM Title: Welcome to AA Apartment Complex

Good 

Author's Response:

Thanks? x´D

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2022 4:26 PM Title: Welcome to AA Apartment Complex

This is off to a fun start! When they got in the lift at the end and were describing  the spheres I was hoping so hard it’d be anal beads. I’m so happy it was! 


I really hope you continue this. Maybe explain the tech of how she communicates with them a bit better and how they get in and out? Maybe even a giant Beatrice teasing them? 

I’d also like to see things from Anna’s pov maybe? Like how it feels to have them living in her. 


Regardless this was a lot of fun and I hope to see more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for this review, it´s really nice coming from you!

And I´m will keep writing this story and already have plans for some stuff to happen already, so expect is gonna be finished at some point and maybe touching some of the points you just wrote here 

I´ll be posting a new chapter each week probably so I hope you can continue to read the rest! :D

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