Date: July 24 2022 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story was an Awesome and quite fun!! Mary and Asmodea became my pair honestly,they are a fun odd couple duo😊💙 James and Carol make a nice couple! Mary is a really Fun and Exciting character to read about 😊🌟
Author's Response:
Thanks, this was a fun story to write and I'm glad you found the characters engaging.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2022 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely EXCELLENT Story!!!
I have to say, I can not comment upon it without giving away to much detail; so I shall leave it upon the reader to enjoy.
Let's just say James is one lucky / blessed tiny guy; and Carol is all that and more.
A story well worth reading.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you had fun with it.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2022 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic, thank you very much for this. :)
Aaah and I see there's already a new one started...damn, you just keep churning them out!! You won't hear complaining from me, but you really spoil us! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks I do my best! The next story will be more serious than this one is, but I think it should be fun.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2022 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely amazing story, enjoyed it thoroughly from start to finish. Excellent conclusion too, it’s nice to read a story so consistently published and completed.
Now time to go read all of your other stories!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I try to make my updates consistent, a lot of my stories are more episodic and even if the story doesn't end I try to always make sure the "episode" is over before moving on to something else.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2022 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love that ending!
Also, I wasn’t expecting such an epic finale. All the main characters having their moment and fighting for James was fun to watch.
I was kinda surprised to see Asmodea meet her fate. I was not expecting that.
I’m glad Carol’s confidence is here to stay. It’s so fun reading about her toying with James and she gets to do what she wants.
I think one of the most underrated parts is that the ending isn’t really the ending. Carol hinting at all the adventures in the future just feels good as I finished reading.
Lastly, I love how Carol kept James in her crotch and it seems like she will keep him down there for the long term. So satisfying. I can’t wait to read your next story!
Author's Response:
Asmodea's ending is probably a temporary situation, for the most part she'll probably spend her days out with Mary doing monster and witch hunting and then spend time at home with Carol and James between missions, they probably won't keep her tiny forever either but I think she deserves it a little after all that!
Also most of my stories either have an open ending or one that implies more adventure to come, it's nice to think they kept having size changing fun even if they lived happily ever after. Glad you enjoyed it, hope to see you review again!
[Report This]Date: July 21 2022 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really enjoyed the climax to this one. I didn't really expect Mary to go dark mode or for Asmodea to feel any regret like at all. I really enjoyed the size difference in this one even if it got extreme by the end. If you ever revisit this one I wouldn't mind seeing Carol do good on her promise and have James explore her at minimum height lol.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, Asmodea managed to corrupt everyone like she wanted but she got a little too successful and spooked herself lol. Asmodea is odd, she definitely would prefer everyone be evil or at least more chaotic, but by the end she's too attached to the main characters to want to see it all end badly.
[Report This]Date: July 21 2022 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Your combination of a multilayered plot and James slow shrinkage is an amazing story line.
What ever happens, one wants James to belong to Carol the landlord witch; and perhaps Mary having a tiny of her own, perhaps Asmodea as her tiny familiar.
Your descriptions of James within Carol's panties and pussy are fantastic; to bad he didn't take up Carol's offer of spending the day in the back of her panty {i.e. "front or back of the panties?” She slapped her ass for emphasis.
“Front,” he said without thinking.
Carol shrugged, “your loss,”}
What a loss it must be; yet one Carol recognizes as a place to keep her tiny James.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
We're coming up to the final showdown, Mary and Asmodea have a few cards left to play and obviously Carol's attempts to fix James might get... dicey.
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story is great! I love the interaction between all the characters. I hope that James and Carol have a relationship where James constantly fluctuates between sizes when Carol comes up with a cure. I think I might see Mary willing to take Asmodea as a familiar for herself, but keep her tiny
Author's Response:
Thanks, obviously this won't be the last time James gets tiny if he wants to keep dating Carol!
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. He's really getting tiny now. Looking forward to more micro interactions!
Author's Response:
Yeah he's going to be very small by the end
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Honestly, I’m loving the Carol and James scenes way too much, that I found myself kinda bored with the Mary and Asmodea scenes. Lol
Those moments were good too, but wow, you made Carol so damn naughty, I love it! And that part about being an evil witch, my goodness! That was hot! Perfect way to live.
With James being so tiny, and Carol wishing to restore him, I hope there is some error which leads to James being restored to around 3 inches tall and that’s his new fixed height. Imagine all the fun they could do without having to worry about James shrinking into nothing.
I also liked how Asmodea is trying to convince Mary into keeping James as a tiny pet. It seems like it’s working and Mary might actually consider it.
Lastly, that scene with Carol teasing Asmodea about shrinking her was kinda cool.
For some reason, I had this weird daydream about walking outside and meeting Carol, and then I spot a tiny bulge on her crotch and she tells me that James is shrunken and stuck down there and soon she will need a replacement since James is shrinking into nothing. I look at her in shock and excitement and in response, she smiles and touches my shoulder telling me that I am now cursed and will shrink to James’s height in 24 hours. She hands me her address and tells me to meet her there. I look down at the business card with her address on it, and then glance back down at her crotch. Noticing this, Carol places her hand over her crotch and presses inward, and the imprint of James disappears. Realizing what just happened, I look back at Carol, and she winks at me as she then begins walking away leaving me stunned.
Alright, enough fanfiction, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah Carol is getting naughtier as she gets more confidence, which is part of what Asmodea wanted in the first place, but now that's getting a little out of her control lol. Asmodea has been working on Mary and Carol for some time now, and she's brought both of them around to thinking and doing things they wouldn't have considered at the start of the story, the real question is will they see through it all before the end?
As for restoring James, I think you'll be happy with how it all ends for him.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2022 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the story, such a good depiction of a slightly naughtier but still genuinely gentle giantess. The dialogue is consistently entertaining and your methods of detailing character backstories are well incorporated into the story and keep the plot progressing at a good pace.
Looking forward to see who stands victorious at the end, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
We're coming down to the final stretch, glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2022 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Unrequited love, fun thing to write about. It's a very fun setup you have there. Everyone is hiding something/attempting betrayal. Mary is going to burn the witch. Asmodea is trying to cause chaos. Carol is going to crush James. No one is in a genuine alliance. The only guy without an agenda is James, or at the very least, what he was hiding was his massive crush on Carol, he's not planning on killing or betraying anyone.
James and Carol's relationship is rather sweet. Painting the WH40k figurines was probably the best scene in there.
Mary, however, is best girl in here. Gotta love lawful good, because when they break the law for someone, you know the affection's special.
Author's Response:
There is a lot of betrayal going on in this one, but that's part of the fun. James and Carol have the most genuine relationship here, Asmodea is definitely coming closer to corrupting Carol, with Mary as a bonus.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2022 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
No way! Carol is way more naughty than I thought!
The way she continuously teases James by telling him that she will shrink him and there is nothing he can do is hot! Also, the part about not telling him how small he gets was excellent!
I love the insertion scene! Can’t believe he lost 2 inches! That was actually more height lost than I expected! Well the good news is that he is at the perfect toy size in my opinion.
My favorite giantess activity that I love reading about is panty entrapment, so watching Carol literally trap him in her panties while she does her chores is just simply amazing! While I would prefer James to refuse such a predicament, and have Carol force him in there, this works too since James can’t resist her. Lol.
Interesting to see Asmodea and Mary team up since they both seem to want James now. This is strange for me because I want Mary to fail, but I also want Asmodea to win. So I guess I gotta pick Carol now since Carol is super naughty now and I’m loving it.
Thanks to this chapter, I have added it to my favorites and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
James trusts Carol enough to let her take this to the end, even if he's scared. As for Asmodea she has a lot of outcomes that she'd be happy with, like a true demon she's playing all sides. Mary or Carol could "win" and she'd be happy about it.
Glad you're liking it so far! Not sure if you read my other story Welcome to Hell, but it's got lots of mischievious demon characters.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2022 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder if Mary is actually into James because its obvious that James is just into Carol and Mary is sending some mixed vibes in her interactions with Asmodea. I feel like Mary is gonna end up with Asmodea ngl since Asmodea seems to be into her at this point. Amodea is definitely planning something tho so its impossible to know if shes sincere.
Author's Response:
You might say Asmodea has many potential outcomes that would make her happy lol. Right now she wants to pit Mary and Carol against each other and work with whatever outcome she gets
[Report This]Date: July 12 2022 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
I could read thousands of words describing a woman stating that her tiny man must shrink to nothingness and her getting excited about the never-ending process.
Author's Response:
I know right?
[Report This]Date: July 12 2022 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome chapter!
I love how they planned for Mary to return and then the trap to prevent her from interfering.
Also, I like Carol’s confidence in this chapter. Not only that, she caused James to shrink to 6 inches which is amazing!
When she was measuring him, I think it was a missed opportunity to use a dildo instead of a doll. That would really bring things into perspective and then Carol could have some kinky ideas from that. If Asmodea was there, you already know what she would say to James if he was 6 inches tall, haha!
Anyway, I love this new size and can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah Carol has decided to run with the giantess thing, and James is pretty receptive lol. He'll be going smaller over time and Asmodea will definitely get to speak with tiny James at some point, obviously she has her own ideas of what she'd do with him at that size. Luckily for him Carol's the one running this show, for now...
Date: July 11 2022 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing, love how silly the characters are
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2022 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really liking the goofy feel of this story and its characters. I really like Carol as a gentle witch since its typically not the norm and it really makes me root for her even if seeing her lose herself to her lust is entertaining from time to time. Hoping neither Asmodea or Mary get their ways since I just want James and Carol to be happy lol. Love this story and hope to see more!
Author's Response:
I think you'll be happy with how it all ends up, as will James and Carol. As for Mary and Asmodea, well they might not get everything they want lol.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2022 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
It almost seems reasonable that Mary accepts James devotion to Carol in his shrunken form and leaves them to live out their lives as a tiny submissive and a normal sized Dominatrix witch.
Can't wait to see how this story goes.
Author's Response:
Not sure how much it's come across so far but Mary is not reasonable lol
[Report This]Date: July 09 2022 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Didn't know you uploaded a new story already. I can say this looks like it'll be a thrilling story to read in the later chapters.
Author's Response: After One Year Lease I wanted to go in a silly and maybe even a little bit stupid direction, this one should be fun as James dwindles, obviously we're running out of time for Carol to conceal her role in things.