[Report This]Date: July 09 2022 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Was that an Elsira reference with the elves?
Author's Response: Elsira and the surprising number of fantasy stories where the elves seem to like shrinking humans lol. Obviously my stories are all fairly lighthearted affairs in comparison to their native canon.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2022 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow it's fun. I saw some references to the Malleus Maleficarum or the Hammer of the Witches, some historians classify it as the most bloodstained book in the entire history of mankind. It instructed how to locate, torture and kill women who were considered witches. I guess a witch hunter would have something like that but it's funny the fact that Carol touched the blessed steel and didn't get burned which perhaps implies that she isn't possessed by evil. James trying to get away from the reduction source. I'm dying to see when James finds out that his landlady and source of his love is the cause of his downsizing. It will be exciting. As exciting as another of your stories, Green. You really do have a knack for this. Keep it up.
Author's Response:
Carol isn't evil yet, obviously Asmodea wants her to be, and Mary's biggest problem is she hasn't considered that there would be a witch that wouldn't be evil. How will it all play out for James? I guess we'll see!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2022 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is a real fun story. I like all the characters and dynamics that each one has. James trying to figure things out and it causes him to lean on Carol more which is the source of shrinking. Excellent!
I do hope that the solution or attempts at a solution is Carol breastfeeding him or if he gets really small, to put him in her womb
Author's Response:
Yeah the curse is a vicious cycle, if she were an evil witch he'd be in some real trouble!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2022 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story!
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2022 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
A truly great, multilayered story. There are so many different things going on that the reader is left guessing the next chapters of this terrific story.
Very well done. BRAVO!
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's going to be fun
Date: July 05 2022 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story as always, and just wanted to say that One Year Lease was an amazing saga. For this, could there be a chapter where Carol fears that he is getting too small, an in an effort to stop him from finding her attractive, she neglects hygiene, and while it works at first her scent inadvertently leads to him discovering a new lust, and shrinking more? Just an idea, love the story, can’t wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked One Year Lease, that was one of my more ambitious stories, this one by contrast is mostly going to be sillyness and smut.
As for Carol getting dirty and sweaty, it'll happen at some point, probably when James is smaller.
Date: July 05 2022 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story as always, and just wanted to say that One Year Lease was an amazing saga. For this, could there be a chapter where Carol fears that he is getting too small, an in an effort to stop him from finding her attractive, she neglects hygiene, and while it works at first her scent inadvertently leads to him discovering a new lust, and shrinking more? Just an idea, love the story, can’t wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2022 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh, this looks, and looks like a fun read so far. Hopefully it's as fun to write. Also, ooof. You really had to call out the warhammer fans like that?
Author's Response: I'm having a good time lol, Warhammer fans are usually pretty good sports luckily
Date: July 04 2022 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
"Miss Adams herself, or Carol as she vainly insisted she call him"
Typo, also cool story so far!
Author's Response:
fixed, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2022 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome premise and loving the four main chars!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2022 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa!
This story is super interesting! I mean, there’s a lot going on with a lot of fun dynamics.
I love James and Carol’s relationship. They both like each other, but are avoiding any romance. Then there is Mary with her own agenda of being skeptical of everything. She would be a great detective. Then there is my favorite character, Asmodea! Her ideas and suggestive comments are super entertaining! I wouldn’t be surprised if she has her own pets to play with.
I would love to see James shrink down to a few inches hopefully and maybe by then they find a way to stop the shrinking at least so he’s going to be stuck at that fun size.
In addition, I like how Carol is balancing her professionalism as a landlady to James while also controlling her lust for him.
This story is exciting and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
James will definitely make it down to the few inches mark, probably smaller by the time everything is over. James and Carol have a mutual crush going on and both think the other would never be interested, it's a fun dynamic.
Asmodea doesn't have any tiny pets at the moment, but over the course of her long career of evil she's definitely helped plenty of other witches get their own and she's probably going to get in on playing with Carol's. Asmodea technically has to obey Carol, that doesn't mean she won't use her own interpretation of those orders to get away with some naughtiness.
Mary is supposed to be learning how to live in the normal world, but obviously she'd prefer to hunt monsters and witches. Thanks for the review, next chapter coming soon!