Reviewer: Wizalex Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: G37 trial - Week 5

Great story, well written and with some very engaging and some very vile characters. You mentioned it in a response, but the attitude you have conveyed with each of your characters is one of the most enthralling aspects here, I don’t even know who I want to be the biggest at this point.

Hoping the growth arms race continues to escalate and Jennifer gets some opportunities to stand up for herself in the future!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment! It means a lot to me that you're enjoying the characters and their dynamics so much!

I'm trying my best to make the villains (most of the cast) kind of relatable/understandable too, so I hope that comes across.

Escalate is the precise word for what's going to be happening very soon. Jennifer may or may not be able to stand up for herself. Let's just hope she doesn't get corrupted by power....

Reviewer: GTortoise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2022 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 3: G37 Trial - Week 4

Wow this is great. 

Your descriptive language is great, concept is great. Not sure where the story is headed but I hope you take your time getting there. At the risk of sounding like a back-seat writer: its always disappointing when stories with such interesting character dynamics (rival gangs, tenuous power balance with the prison authority, etc.) devolve into a rampage story as soon as the giantess becomes big enough that they cant easily be stopped.

 

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

And nah, no worries. I don't want that happening anytime soon either. Part of the reason I enjoy the setting so much is because it IS still a prison. I won't go into spoilers but they'd need to be pretty big (or have multiple big people) to really rampage!

Reviewer: fosmat Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2022 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3

This is great so far!

It’s an interesting premise that lends itself perfectly to that slow Amazon growth. 

And goddamn Vasquez is hot. I mean I’m a bit of a sucker for giant muscular ladies but still her attitude is what really elevates her. I’m assuming somewhere down the line Jennifer is gonna get pretty up close and personal with her or maybe with Trish, who knows.

Either way, keep doing what you’re doing, your writing is fun and I’m excited to see more! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Yeah, in a lot of the stories I've read, it's the attitude that gets me. I'm really happy I'm able to at least emulate something similar!

Oh, and up close and personal is right. Maybe with both Vasquez and Trish 😈

I'm in the process of writing chapter 4 so it'll hopefully be up soon! 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2022 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 2: G37 Trial - Week 3 part 2

This is a really interesting idea. 

I can't wait to see where it goes, you've gotten me invested. You've done a nice setup with these first two chapters.

I love Vasquez, hope she gets bigger (and has some fun XD) 

Author's Response:

Hey!  Thank you for the kind words :) 

Yeah, i think it's a fun setting that hasn't really been explored much in gts stuff.

I don't want to give too much away just yet but Vasquez for sure is going to be getting even bigger (and having fun).

I'm thinking about making some polls to decide things in the future on my twitter.  So if you ever want to get updates, or, (at some point) impact the story, etc,  follow me there :)