Date: October 16 2022 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3
Another fantastic chapter! Very well written. Hope the next chapter is soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you! The next chapter is already in the works 😁 I'll try to get it out this week but I'm busier than I thought I'd be
[Report This]Date: September 30 2022 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3
This is a really interesting set up, great imagery too.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, I thought it would make for a fun setting and also provide a background reason for the large ladies to be villainous from the get go!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2022 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Such a great chapter. I’d say that the fun starts now, but this story has been a joy to read all the way through.
Loved the descriptions of the more violent acts, personally I really like the crueler side of things, so hopefully there’s a lot more of it.
Eager to see if someone else is gonna need to get a whole lot bigger now to deal with this new problem.
Also, given that we might now be approaching those kinds of scales, I’d love if the excessive eating required started to extend to more than just the inmate’s food, especially given how much I enjoyed the previous consumption scenes. If hard vore isn’t on the books though, that’s totally understandable.
In any case, can’t wait to see more!
Author's Response:
I'd not even considered vore in this story to be honest. I'm not against writing about it at all, but it wasn't something I imagined. I'll think about it though, haha. I can totally imagine omega Amber eating people in a bid to fuel more growth. Even if I don't go forward with it in this story I'll explore it in another sometime.
I'm glad you liked the more cruel side of things though! Very happy with the response I've gotten since I was so worried initially.
Overjoyed that you've liked everything so far and the 'fun' has been throughout!
Date: September 21 2022 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Wow! This chapter was hot 😈 the growth description was on point and so well done, i persoanlly dont mind the graphic moments u mentioned at all it really helpes portray amber as evil. Seriously i cant express myself enough to tell you how good this story is to me. 😇
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! That really means a lot, I'm super happy that you're enjoying it so much.
And yeah, big, ultra evil Amber is fun to write about. I was going to be more descriptive but pulled back 😂 Still, I'm glad it wasn't off putting as is and portrays Amber as the villain she is!
[Report This]Date: September 19 2022 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Amber is such an evil bitch....
Like when she had Jennifer and was threatening to crush her...
I knew she would be returning, but didn't think it would be in such a big....(that was not meant to be a pun) way.
And damn...now she's chugging down the G37 at such a rate...
Jennifer needs Vasquez, and Vasquez needs to get her hands on some more of the formula too, she has to put Amber in her place (or take her out permanently)
There can only be one biggest bitch in cell block B and it's Vasquez XD
Seriously though this chapter was again well written, did have some serious graphic moments, but with a character like Amber that seemed inevitable.
It was still well written and again you just paint a vivid picture of the growth and actions of these giant women.
I am on the edge of my seat, can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Yeah I took a long time debating about the graphic violence and including it, but as you said, with someone like Amber and a setting like this, it kind of was inevitable. I still tried not to be too descriptive of it all though.
Anyway, thank you again for the kind words! I won't spoil anything, but as you said, there can only be one (highlander refence fully intended) biggest bitch in cell block B!
Date: September 11 2022 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: The start of the end
Another amazing chapter, felt my stomach drop at the thoughts of Vasquez bealive smith about the doses 😭, the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm incredibly happy you had such a strong reaction.
You'll find out if Smith's ploy worked eventually 😈
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 12: The start of the end
Smith is such an asshole!
I hope Vasquez learns the truth about Jennifer's real decision.
He's playing a dangerous game when/if she learns he's lying to her.
I may be having unrealistic expectations, but I want to see Vasquez and Jennifer grow closer and wind up together XD
The scene earlier with Jessica and Jackson was a hot sexual encounter, again you nailed writing the size-sexual dynamic well, and with a new couple (even if just a physical/friends with benefits type setup with them)
Again, hope Jennifer and Vasquez are going to come out ok
And I hope Jennifer is going to be ok! Damn it, Amber is back...
(I'm kinda hoping Vasquez comes to the rescue XD)
So glad I'm finally caught up, loved binge reading every chapter, you've really woven a great story here.
Author's Response:
Hahah, thank you for all the kind words! I love that I got to basically see your reaction to each chapter in real time.
Smith is indeed an asshole! Only time will tell how this affects Vasquez and Jennifer's relationship. With the triangle between them and Trish, I'm hoping to make this interesting!
Also glad you enjoyed the Jessica/Jackson scene! I wanted to have a slightly gentler romance scene instead of the more brutal antics that have been all over the series so far.
So happy you're enjoying it all! There should be a new chapter up this or next week but I'm still planning some of the details!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: G37 Trial - Week 5 Aftermath
YES!
Oh wow!
This was another great chapter, and the choice to make it solely Vasquez centered in solitary was perfect.
I loved the introspection and again learning more about her past (and Maria, etc)
And how she was thinking back to her growth and how much she's changed since she was last in the solitary cell.
I have to say the ending section was perfect!
I loved how Smith was practically pissing his pants over her display of strength.
This was such a great aftermath/tie up to week five, I love it!
Heading off to read the next chapter now :)
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 10: G37 trial - Week 5 part 4
I got the chapters confused XD I thought the previous one was the end of week 5.
But it's still going strong (Like Vasquez)
I loved the section with Jennifer and Rachel (really putting her new height to use)
Vasquez's show of dominance in the canteen was well written, the way she just walked into the other gang territory and started eating their food, a real power move.
And the fight XD It's fun to imagine all of them trying to jump a woman almost twice their size (and with that much muscle!)
Author's Response:
Haha, I won't bombard you with a response to every review but I'll respond to this one specifically! I've had a ton of fun building up the relationship between Jennifer and Vasquez and making the latter a slightly deeper character.
Having Jennifer be slightly corrupted by her Suze has also been a loooot of fun. Her getting little bits of revenge here and there, etc.
I have to also mention Vman2000 was a big help in this chapter, both gifting me with the food tax suggestion and helping edit the fight scene to make much more sense.
I think this and the last chapter might be my two favourites so far!
Really, really happy that you're enjoying this all and invested in the story 😁
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 9: G37 Trial - Week 5 part 3
Ok, I saw the responce to the earlier review and you were write XD I did love this chapter!
Firstly, I loved the scene with Jennifer and Vasquez in their cell when Vasquez was talking about her younger years.
It was a nice softer scene and gave us more insight into her character.
For her, the growth and experiments aren't just a physical/dominant/sexual thing.... (well there are aspects of it there)
But the more personal reasons tying back in with her being weaker and struggling to make herself stronger for so long, and how she achieved it after joining the Lobos.
And now she has a chance to further that strength and not go back to being weak, and vulnerable.
Makes so much sense.
I loved the fact she wasn't scared of Smith's fearmongering, and took it in stride.
And the fact she's now bigger, and stronger (the transformation/growth scene was so well done. You could really picture and imagine her just becoming bigger and bursting out of her restraints )
Trish can be scared all she wants, I am freaking loving Vasquez (as said before, she's my favourite character.)
I just want her to come out on top in the end, and for Jennifer to be by her side (but maybe not as big? XD) but yeah, Vasquez is great and I need more of her, so I am off to read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 7: G37 trial - Week 5 part 2
Another great chapter.
I loved the talk Vasquez had with Jennifer (and the bit of physical domination when she tried to show her she's not a fighter)
You wrote the later cell scene well too, and the sexual content.
The way you express her size and pure strength (as well as describing her body) is always so descriptive, it's so easy to picture her statuesque form.
And again you also wrote the sexual interaction perfectly.
Vasquez definitely has some soft spots growing for Jennifer, hope they continue to grow.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: G37 trial - Week 5
Damn, this chapter was intense.
It's great seeing Vasquez actually has some real feelings beyond possessiveness (or possessiveness may be a part of it but there seems to be affection there) for Jennifer.
The fight scene was well done, really could feel Vasquez letting lose.
Great work on this chapter, can't wait to read the next one.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4: G37 trial - Week 4 part 2
Realized how many chapters I have to catch up on, so I am going to be bingeing the remaining ones now.
This chapter was great, super hot content with Vasquez and Jennifer.
(Vasquez is still my favourite character)
You wrote it so well and just picturing the hulking muscled form of Vasquez and the interaction with Jennifer (and of course, the sexual interaction) was really well written.
Author's Response:
Hey! You gve me my first review :) It's good to see your return!
Thank you for the kind words. It's probably a bit crappy of me to say but it's probably pretty obvious that Vasquez is my favourite character too. I'm glad you're enjoying the interactions and Vasquez being big and mean ;)
You'll probably enjoy the end of week 5 as well, so happy binging!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: G37 trial - Week 5 part 4
This story just keeps up the high quality content.
Love this chapter, a giantess displaying her dominance through excessive consumption is incredibly hot. I hope Vasquez continues to do it as she gets even bigger and needs even more food.
Also nice to learn some more of Trish’s history and see Jennifer get involved in the fights.
Eager to see how Jennifer will eventually decide who to side with and what she can do with her secret keycard.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Ah man, that really means a lot. When I'm making drafts of the story, I'm usually questioning quality, so reading that makes me feel very happy (and maybe a little silly).
Haha, you can thank Vman2000 for all the eating. He gifted me with the idea and I knew it needed to go in this chapter.
I'm going to try and flesh out all the characters a bit more as we move forwards! A new chapter is up so hopefully you can get more of a read on some people :)
Week 6 will be answering some questions too ;) hope you enjoy it all!
[Report This]Date: August 23 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 10: G37 trial - Week 5 part 4
Oh boy ! Vasquez is a monster/ A sexy, alluring, destructive monster ! Go on Jennifer, tame the beast, make her yours with gentleness - and blond hair !
Author's Response:
In the words of Vasquez: "Its not always blondes!" Alright, maybe it is.
Also, I'm now paranoid I've misspelt blond everywhere...
I won't give away what I've got planned for tri-relationship but hopefully Jennifer can work her light coloured hair magic!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2022 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9: G37 Trial - Week 5 part 3
So good :)
i was worried for abit that vasquez would not remain the biggest. Happy she did! Also that moment when jennifer and trish wanted to lock hands and the nurse helped them was adorable 😇
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story 😁
Yeah, I'm trying my best not to be tooooooo biased towards Vasquez, but having her be so massive is a lot of fun while writing.
I've been trying to build up Jennifer and Trish having a wholesome relationship. Warm and cuddly and the other side of the coin to Vasquez and Jennifer which is rough, wild and very lust driven.
So you saying adorable is the highest praise possible for that scene, thank you 😭!
Date: August 09 2022 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 8: G37 Trial - Week 5 interlude
I've been glued to this so thanks for the short chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for being so glued to the story! I'm planning on releasing the next chapter early next week or.... If I can, late this week!
Date: August 02 2022 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 7: G37 trial - Week 5 part 2
I may be biased but I think it’s only fair that Vazquez gets those two treatments she missed once they get that table sorted. Alongside her regularly scheduled dose of course!
Awesome work Kokoji.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm sure Vasquez and maybe some others would agree ;)
Date: July 28 2022 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: G37 trial - Week 5 part 2
Amazing once again
Loved the story from the first 2 chapters but somehow its getting better and better each chapter, as someone that watches alot of prison documentarys this is like the best of both worlds for me lol.
also team Vasquez all the Way!
Author's Response:
Ohhh, I'd love to know more about those documentaries! I may have watched a few but more could always boost the realism :)
And thank you, that really, really means a lot! I've been obsessively writing and rewriting stuff because I'm always worried about standards slipping. I know it's silly but I can't help it 😅
Glad there's a supporter for Vasquez! Villains deserve fans too! With the other ladies slowly catching up, do you think she'll remain queen of the castle?
Date: July 24 2022 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3
Damn man, you are really creating something fantastic here. The way you handle the cast and the character dynamics really elevates things. Can’t wait to read more!
Someone on the City made the comment that they were uncertain on having the main character growing. Initially I shared that concern initially just because imo it’s always so much hotter when there is someone around who is still small for the big people to compare themselves against. After finishing chapter 6 I’m all aboard for Jen’s growth though. Loved her interaction with the nurse.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I'm doing my best to keep standards high and approach this as more than just growing and sexy stuff (I'm not gonna lie that is still the driving force though)!
I was a bit torn on having Jennifer grow but explained a little on GC when/why I decided to go for it. I'm still trying to keep every growth scene different and interesting too!