Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2022 3:56 PM Title: Prologue part 8

So some toy worlds are in an earlier technological and culture state, with the mention of a 50s-60s look, made me think that some will be in the victorian age, would really let the someone play with destruction and not have any worry as to the locals really fighting back, and prevent mass knowledge that this is happening. 

Could even try and steal some sea ships for ultra easy collection. 

And it goes future with toy worlds that are still either in the medieval or earlier state, a whole resort could get made on one of those with the ancient Greek aesthetic to stone age, everyone visiting being the gods and the tinies make whole culture for their use.  

And with mention monster films in the 60s part, a woman can put on a full swimsuit costume, port out into the water, and to and attack as city like classic Godzilla, or multiple. Plus imagine how scandalizing to that culture it might be if its two women go on sexy rampage for their honeymoon. 

Author's Response:

The idea is that the further away in time the toyworlds are, the more difficult it is to locate them both in the future and in the past, although you have had some interesting suggestions.

The point is that before locating a Toyworld the quantum computer opens thousands of microportals to worlds where there is no life or if there is life it can take forms unimaginable to humans.
There was a scene in the briefing in which Dr. Niven commented on that, that he had seen worlds with things he wished he had not seen, and that it changed the way of examining each new world, because his whole team had felt that one of those things had seen the microportal, but in the end I didn't put it in.

If you go to my user, you will see my Deviantart page. There I've put pictures of how the characters of the story could be, although I still can't find people suitable to the features I've more or less imagined and I might still change some pictures, feel free to give your opinion.

Best regards and thanks for commenting

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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2022 11:44 AM Title: Prologue part 7

Glad to see Alice again! It’s so entertaining to watch her manipulate that boy. Part of me was hoping she secretly keeps him to herself and doesn’t return him. 

I love the recap of all the activities she did with him. Now I see why she picked him. He’s got that youthful spirit which compliments her lust that never ends. 

Then we have Patrick whom I am starting to dislike now. This man is imagining Alice being shrunk and now I’m rooting against him. If Alice is shrunk, then I don’t know what to do. Maybe if Patrick is shrunk, the tables could be turned. 

However, I still like seeing Alice play with the more naive, innocent tinies instead. 

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I don't think there's shrinkage in the story, just giants doing their will with the specimens of those little people worlds either right there or by capturing them.

Keep in mind that Alice takes good care of herself, she is very sexy and attractive, Patrick fantasizes about having her at his mercy, just as Dr. Vaughan has fantasized about Patrick.

As you may have seen Alice is a good mother who cares about her children, maybe those feelings, mixed with the power that overwhelms everyone when you can do whatever you want with those little people makes her choose that kind of toys, although it seems that people are getting more and more used to see them as things that give pleasure to the sight, touch and everything, and every time they get more and more carried away by even more visceral impulses when they have in their hands those little people, which after all exist to be used.

In my Deviantart page I'm putting the pictures of how the characters can look like more or less, I have an idea of Alice but I still can't find a picture of her.

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Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2022 2:15 PM Title: Prologue part 5

Another good chapter. 

Good mention on what hazards can happen during the collecting process. 

And of course finally the wedges heels, so I applaud you for that. Didn’t know she had them until the first mention, and easy writing strategy is for the first descriptor of some section you could describe it in detail that would then be carried in after, like that they were wedge boots earlier. But you could also describe the wedge hight, it is a short half inch, or is it 3 inches tall with a an inch platform and two inches from toes to heel (there a certain conformable and walkable angle for high heels), or are there variations, say higher ranked get taller ones for their collection suits. 

Plus there actually describing that all of them have this, some new intern or employee could be shown around or given their uniform, so they ask why there wedges. 

Then further from that, not everyone is good at walking in wedge heels, or at least at first, so there could be some mini course or training class/classes to do that. Or maybe engineering, or getting it from an outside dedicated shoe company, make heels that are like this:(Image 1,Image 2), but many more and thiner blocks or slices that are still connected so its on continuous but flexible wedge. Maybe even breaking up the tow part into even mallet squares and get even more flexibility. 

And since crushing tines is goes and soft, there could be some simulator made to get interns and new employees used to crushing them, and use collected cars for crushing as well. Or those tiny vehicles and some of the course could takes and crushed in commercials, or sold to those youtube giantesses that make car crushing videos. 

And way later, if the tinies could be gotten even smaller (some new smaller toyworld is found), and the toe platform of the wedge boots would be taller then buildings (or even skyscrapers), tinies/dolls from now who have not only been broken, but wound up joining the company and helping convert or manage new tinies, could then go into the even smaller world and collect for the company. They could even have normal sized employees cary them in the wedge heels and deploy out of the compartment them.

Your doing great so far.👍

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. They are always welcome.
The story, in principle, is long, so I don't know everything that will or won't come out, but suggestions are always welcome and maybe some ideas will come out of it.

Regards.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2022 2:57 PM Title: Prologue part 3

Something I always suggest, purely cause is my thing (someone else might be annoyed by now with how many time I’ve done it): when other products/accessories/additions start being made (wether by the main corporation some third party), some of thens is wedge high heeled footwear for the rampage sessions, and for other activities. 

I say wedge cause, beadies IRL being more stable and healthier then stilettos and other apparently, the larger footprint not only give more stability but also means any tinies/dolls can’t escape the crush, if thats the intent, and cause more property damage. Plus, wedges could have a full compartment to store them in. 

There is also the entire cos/roll-play thing people can do. Dress up as invading giantess with form fitting sexy armour. Or with medieval boobplate and having elf eats and pretending to by that. Or having a full scaled suit and being a dragon. Or as an aliens like Asari or some other one. 

Then theres the possibility of people making a competition out of the toy worlds, having to destroy, kill or capture a certain amount of tinies and city scape against some opponent that came fro the other side of the room. Theres other potential games. 

And of course, someone people will use them slave just because, like a team cleaning their shoes, or their mouths, some actually trained to be inserted, so thats a whole other bullpens if taking the toys/dolls/tinies and training them to do things. 

And then theres the media an culture effect. Combing with the costumes mean some shows will happen that could only be filled in the toy worlds, whatever it is, so thats a whole other thing. 

Hope theses are interesting. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for your interest and I hope you continue to enjoy each chapter of the story.

The thing is, when I thought of this story I didn't think that the details of how the situation came to be would be so interesting. That's why I'm putting in the prologue parts.

The wedge high heel boots are already being tucked into the next chapter, as they seem to make less noise than heels and don't dig into the grass when a female member of a collection team is collecting specimens in their homes.

As for the other recommendations, the story is not yet advanced enough to know what will happen. As time goes by, we will see.

Thank you very much for commenting and don't forget to tell me what you like about the episodes.