[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 10:05 PM Title: August
A really good end to Act I. The transformation of the relationship has been clear, but subtle enough, so I think that’s been very well done.
I didn’t review last chapter, so I will once again point out that Marshmallow is King.
There were two typos I noticed by they were minor and did not distract from reading.
Can’t wait to see how Act 2 unfolds.
Author's Response: The two are definitely entering the next phase of their relationship, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 3:43 PM Title: October
Holy hell, thanks for the delicious chapter! On a completely unrelated note, are you sure it’s not Christmas that’s come early? This left me feeling like a child who just unboxed a PS5
Author's Response:
No, Christmas comes in a couple chapters!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 7:51 AM Title: October
I love how both of them can move past the “tiny and giant” thing and call truces. Additionally, Evan under Eve’s foot was absolutely perfect.
Author's Response:
Thanks! They have a very weird set of internal rules to their "game" don't they?
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 1:05 AM Title: August
lol Eve "what the fuck did you just say about me, you little man? I'll have you know I graduated top of my class in the tiny hunters, and I've been involved in numerous secret raids on shrinkee communities, and I have over 300 confirmed captures."
"I just assume you’re a sociopath, seeing as how you think someone who shrinks should be your slave or whatever" Laurie is very genre aware.
Since this is one of your stories, I'm guessing a harem ending is still an option, but if it isn't I'm rooting for Laurie. It seems like she's been there for Evan through thick and thin and probably has feelings for him. She's also comes across as the only sane person in the story, for now. Evan is a crazy adrenaline junkie, Eve thinks she should be able to own people, and Amber is Amber.
Author's Response:
This one's not a harem story, I know that's a shock from me lol.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2022 12:57 AM Title: October
This story might be slowly turning into my favorite of yours not sure yet but I'm just a sucker for the "enemies to lovers" trope and I really love it here.
Author's Response:
It's an honor that people like my stories enough as a group that there are "favorite ones" hope the rest of the year plays well for you
Date: June 21 2022 12:42 AM Title: October
Love this story. Engaging characters, enough domination talk to make it even more compelling and a central pairing that arent just stereotypes.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to see the main cast is likeable
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 11:26 PM Title: August
I’m loving this so far! I can’t get over the great dynamic! I would love two see how the rest of the year goes. Keep up the great story
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's a fun couple of characters to write
Date: June 20 2022 11:08 PM Title: August
What are the chances of any inshoe action or maybe evan ending up inside one of her socks/nylons?
Author's Response:
Over the course of the whole story the chances of that are pretty high
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 10:16 PM Title: October
I think I'm rooting for Evie! Get your prize, girl! A house and a helper!
Author's Response: Uh, well I guess we've got our first member of Team Eve in this battle lol
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 10:04 PM Title: August
The pacing in this in unbelievably good, a perfect mix of legitimately good storytelling and some nice giantess fetish stuff. This could easily end up as the best story on this site.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hopefully the rest of the year shakes out well too.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 9:42 PM Title: October
let more foot and shoe related activities flourish
Author's Response:
We'll see more, don't worry
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 9:35 PM Title: August
Almost, almost but then...
Thunder! Thunder! Thundercats ohhhhh!
Author's Response:
Evan flirts with disaster a lot, luckily his cat is always around to bail him out.
Date: June 20 2022 9:33 PM Title: October
It is a very nice story, especially the foot scenes are much more beautiful. My advice to you, even it can get stuck in your shoe
Author's Response:
There will probably be an in-shoe scene at some point in the story
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 3:03 PM Title: September
This story is pure catharsis. I've read countless stories where the giant gal basically says word for word what Eve says, then gets away torturing some poor soul who frankly didn't deserve it. And then, along comes Evan, throwing all that back in her face. It's a satisfying chronicle, although we probably know what the endpoint of this story's going to be. But I'm not here for the destination, I'm here for the journey.
Heck, in general, I like the sort of Tom and Jerry dynamic Evan and Eve are both developing. Looks like this will be another fun giantess tale to add to your already impressive collection.
Author's Response:
Thanks, they definitely have a Spy vs Spy or Tom and Jerry thing going on. Evan won't win every single encounter with Eve, but he'll definitely do a lot better than your average tiny guy does on this site.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 12:34 AM Title: September
I'm just gonna say it, Marshmallow is the GOAT
Author's Response:
Marshmallow is based on a cat I had irl, the glue traps thing is something I experienced personally.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2022 12:15 AM Title: September
Hahaha I couldn't stop laughing when I read this chapter. What fun, and it seems that Eve is starting to like the game and Evan.
Author's Response: Eve's opinion on things has definitely changed, and that just makes her want him more. Still 10 months of the lease to go!
Date: June 19 2022 11:40 PM Title: August
I can honestly say you have become one of my "look for an update" authors on this site lol.
Gentle and playful is a niche one to most, but you keep it pretty entertaining. Good job!
Author's Response:
I try my best to bring a bit more to my stories, glad it's noticed. If you like playful this story will be right up your alley.
[Report This]Date: June 19 2022 11:12 PM Title: September
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Let us all strive to be better in September!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2022 9:58 PM Title: August
(Forgot to add a rating!)
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: June 19 2022 9:58 PM Title: August
Once again, wow! The imagination, fun and originality in your stories is incredible! I really cannot wait to see where this goes…
Author's Response:
Thanks, it means a lot. We're just at the start of this one but I think it's going to be one of the more complex relationships in my stories.