This chapter damn near confirmed my theory lmaoo except the imminent shrinking def is gonna happen to the whole gang instead. Eve is def an observant person btw or Amber is just not in contrast. Maybe both.

Also how cruel is Amber? Like would she kill a tiny? Is she THAT cruel? Like fucked up torture n shit? Or is this the full extent of it?

Also hoping Deandra is black🤞🏼🤞🏼

I wander if amber is immune to shrinkees i mean she might not now that girls can get it and i bet she spends lots of time around them torchering them also i hope Charles wife is immune

Oh wow how cruel. Amber is definitely a... well. But I think she gives it that spice that makes the story great. So far it's been a really charming and engaging plot.

Author's Response:

A good story needs a villain, Amber is basically a typical evil giantess in a New World Order scenario being blunted by the fact that this world is (slightly) kinder to tinies than most of those scenarios.

Team Eve disagrees with the decision that Evan won, we'd like a judge's opinion!
But seriously, phenomenal work, the best long form piece on the site currently, and how the heck are you pumping out chapters like this? Your keyboard needs a break!

Love this story man. Keep it up

FUCK. WHY ARE YOUR STORIES SO GOOD? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

But no, seriously. I have to say I absolutely love your stories! I've always liked reading cruel giantess stories that tinies have no hope in (think gtswburg stories) but somehow, you single handedly managed to get me hooked on gentle stories as well. I absolutely love and deeply respect the fact that most -if not all- of your stories have multiple comedic elements, as it makes them very relatable, and up to date of course!

Keep on doing what you're doing, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

I think these two are definitely two lovebirds already. The two of them are liking the relationship and honestly I think we have reached a point where the relationship between these two is just tender. But well, from the experience I have on this site, there is always a factor that puts relationships between a tiny and a giantess to the test. In most cases it always destroys the relationship but let's see how this story unfolds. Keep it up Green.

Hey! I don’t usually review on here but you’ve forced my hand with this story! 

I’m in love with the plot and the characters so far! Evan has such a fun personality for a tiny, and you’ve written him and Eve’s gradual progression towards friends (and definitely lovers) so well ;w; 

I look forward to reading what they get up to in the future months of the lease- somehow I get the feeling Amber isn’t fully out of the picture just yet… 

Holy Shit man!

First of all, dammit, I keep meaning to write my review for "Welcome to Hell" and then write a review here to let you know about that review, but apparently you are the most consistently fast typer on this website and I'll just post my review for that story tomorrow, because I don't want you to start the next Act before I get to review this. Man you can give Speedy Gonzalez a run for his money. Honestly, it's unreal. Seriously, what is your typing speed? (also you definitely use keyboard shortcuts right, it's one very useful thing you pick up from programming).

Now onto this review. Take your goddamn crown right now. Not only are you just killing it in enemies to lovers, but you're killing it everywhere. You can see the chinks in Eve's armor really start to form in October when he explains why he watches that movie. As you continue each of your characters' actions make more sense in the greater context and build on the previous character moments. I love that Evan has always had that fighting spirit in him. His heart will take him far. And I keep wanting to learn more about him and Laurie. It's likely that he will wind up with Eve, but from Laurie's interaction with Eve in this last chapter it seems like Laurie might not see him as platonically as he sees her. Overall, just it's awesome.

One thing you could incorporate, if you were willing to go through the hassle, is to Italicize a character's thoughts. One specific place is at the bottom of November you have "It might still be a fun weekend after all, she decided." Instead you could write "It might still be a fun weekend after all." after her previous line of dialogue. The only issue is that this website doesn't correctly copy Italicizations so you have to redo it when you post it here. It's a source of irritation for sure, but I put up with it because I think it works with my flow. I think it's a way to just improve the overall reading experience of a story when this is incorporated, but to each their own. 

Also, I don't know if you saw, but I wrote a story that was inspired by "Sharing is Caring" and I hope you don't mind that I took some inspiration from you.

This dynamic… Wow! It’s so unique and fun. 

I like your writing style. How the dialogue flows, how the characters - and they are all charming, unique characters - grow and change. Skillfully done, I’m invested!

I consider myself a new fan of yours, and I know I will be coming back. Major, major props. Thank you.