Absolutely outstanding story! Rare to see something that can seamlessly incorporate an engaging plot with the kinky stuff. In the future, would be amazing to see a spinoff in this setting. Would personally love to see something exploring the lives/backstories of Warren and Deandra or Charles and his wife. The overseas black market could also make for an interesting spinoff 

Author's Response:

Like I said I'm not opposed to revisiting this world but I don't know what that would look like, maybe an anthology or some one shots. Glad you liked it!

I said most of the things in my previous review, but once again I have to say I loved this story! the pacing was great, the settings were clear and properly written, and most importantly (in my humble opinion) it was regularly updated! I love many authors on this site but some people do take a while to update their stories. Everyone has their own pace, but I definitely appreciate the more often updated ones! 

Looking forward to your next story!

P.S. I gotta say, with as many times as Evan ventured into Eve's nether regions, let alone finished inside them, I somewhat expected a pregnancy plot twist at some point in the story xD

The pure novelty and humanity of the very concept is remarkable.

There is humor, suspension, some good exposition and world building... All good tings!

But in the end, as with most good storytelling; it's the interplay between the characters, and the details of their personality that connects the most.

This story is entertaining from the start and just when you think the character's have plateaued their development, a side interaction or surprise twist reveals hidden depths.

As for the intimacy; it gets emotional, it gets sexual and, at times, it gets cruel.
While featuring, and sometimes allowing the reader to revel in, cruel acts or fantasies, the story always keeps us ground with reality - taking care to portray the harm that can be done. Not only does this bring maturity to the work, but it makes those acts all the more tantalizing.

A great read, and one to remember - heck I've archived it!


Minor spoilers ahead:
If there is any room for growth here I'd point towards the main protagonist who never quiite transcends into being something more than a vehicle for the plot, though it's a close call at times!
My recommendation would be to hint through some interaction at Amber's private feelings - we almost always see her through the lens of Eve. As such it's never quite clear if it's about status, fear, pleasure, or all of the above.
A single, unfettered, scene showing Amber as she is in private before going of the deep end would really drive the character home I think.

Thanks Greenanon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words. I'll take the criticisms under advisement, they're all pretty fair. I will say we will see a bit of Amber in the final chapter, though obviously far her height, no pun intended. Overall I'm really glad that people enjoyed this one, it was a bit of a different one for me since most of my stories are fairly goofy over the top adventures or straight gentle stuff.

Well that was a really well done climax, probably one of the most action packed ones I've read in your stories. Aside from that, I really appreciate how this story feels like it treads new ground for your stories(like with its month-a-chapter format, minor male antagonist, shrunken female character, etc). I think that's partially why its quickly become one of my new favourites of yours(aside from your great writing/character dynamics, of course).

Oh man, finally get to see Evan’s anti-hunter traps in action.

oh, interesting! I thought Amber might call a hit on our protagonists with her tiny-hunter bf, but I wasn't expecting it to tie into the shrunken Amber plot line. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where the next chapter goes. 

Another great chapter, though I don’t think this is will be the last we see of Amber. 

The only critique for this one I have is that it seems out of character for Evan, when he is defending Even to Deandra, to also start to include she likes having sex with him.

Deandra and her husband are strangers to him (and vice verse), and Evan doesn’t seem like the sort of person to just say that out loud to strangers in an office setting.