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Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2011 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

I enjoyed reading this story. It was a nice twist on the "No good deed goes unrewarded" thing, and very considerate of the genie to take care of his obligations in life. I you intend to continue this story ("Fin (?)"), I'll be looking forward to reading it. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2009 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful conclusion! I especially loved the thorough way she used her magic to make sure no one ever came looking for him.

You might say that, to his friends and co-workers, his entire existence is now just...a "foot" note.

Author's Response:

LOL!  A "foot note" indeed!

Glad you enjoyed, Carycomic!  And thanks for the comments! ;)

Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2009 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing. I love it, too bad you didn't decide to continue it :(

Reviewer: Solar Crimson Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2009 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was a nice start. I'm interested to read more of then whenever you get to it.

 And lol Cary. That would be very interesting if the two girls were in cahoots with each other, wouldn't it? ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2009 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmmm! I wonder if this girl knows Parvati?

Reviewer: TinyMan23 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2009 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, amazing story!

I just wish it was real, it was as easy as that.

Look forward to an update.



Author's Response:

Hehe, I am glad you enjoyed it, TinyMan23!  I plan to write another chapter on this, and hopefully soon, too.

 So stay tuned! :D

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