I honestly never expected a sequel, further more I never thought I'd be visiting the site every day for the past week waiting on a new chapter upload. I'm truly blown away by your story telling skills.

I welled up a bit at the end. Not gonna lie. I can't wait to see what other stories you have in mind!

Dang it crow, your release schedule means that I'm going to have to look like I'm spamming.

You have a knack for plot progression, revealing surprises that we should have known all along from details revealed in earlier chapters. Himba and Tom's relationship developed exactly the way it should have. I believe there was really only one way it could have gone, and you drove the path with frightening precision. The turning point with Himba going unconscious and Tom rescuing her, I think was the best transition it could have been.

There's a lot of interesting details with this world, including the worldstone, worldtree, monsters and humans and such. I don't believe I have it all figured out, because I was kind of speed reading to get to the next plot progression, but I'm going to have to reread this at some point to get all the details. It would have been tragic if this was the true end for Darth Thomius the Wise, then we wouldn't have him to explore even more of this world.

There was a most profound detail at the end between the Worldtree and Worldstone, in that their relationship mirrored that of Himba and Tom. This would have been a nice tragic story, but with the epilogue, I actually feel the story became even more poignant, especially since you wrapped up some of the themes throughout the plot a bit more nicely.

I guess in War, we'll find out who captured Himba's villagers.

I'm going to give my opinion on the story as a whole, and then a critique afterwards.

Firstly, let me say that this story and it prequel were good enough to get me to create a new account on this site after deleting my old one almost a decade ago, just so I could leave review. Each new chapter has been the highlight of each day over the last week, so kudos for crafting an engaging story with compelling characters. This story and its prequel have managed to thread a delicate balance between plot and smut, and I think that you handled incorporating the two elements together excellently. The relationship between Tom and Hinba has been an absolute delight to read. 

From the way the previous chapter ended, I was afraid that this might be where our two protagonists fates might be headed, and seeing it turn out this way actually brought me to tears. If this is how this story is meant to end, then congratulations on crafting something one of a kind. For me personally, I'm desperately hoping there a little magic left in the world that can reunite Tom and Hinba (if not to stop my tears, then because I would be over the moon to get a third story with these two). 

In terms of the writing itself, I think you done an excellent job with character development, world building, and story structure and so I have no comments there. There were a few typos here and there, but they were rare and never distracted from the story. My only real critique is as a reader, I was a little unclear how Tom figured out (or guessed) that the townsfolk were trapped in the Worldstone, but I have missed something that second read through will reveal.

I'm at the edge of my seat to see what you make next.

Such a beautiful chapter and perfect conclusion. I was legitimately brought to tears by the ending. 

It was a perfect bittersweet moment though. This whole story development from unwilling prey, to willing but sad, to now willing and fully accepting it only to have her no longer find any enjoyment from consuming him is one of the best culminations of a vore relationship stories ever in my opinion.

Hoping Hinba will find some solace in the epilogue. It would be a dream if there is some magic left in the worldstone that can save Tom for a true happy ending, but either way this was a very well done emotionally affecting story. Excellent debut for your first time writing!

I SO LOVE THIS STORY. 

You've kept true to the up the characters of Hinba and Tom very well this whole time. At the same time the relationship has totally been developing. We're back to only getting Tom's perspective on each chapter since the epilogue of part 1, yet it comes across very well that Hinba's care and attachment is building. It would be way to simple and would end the dynamic if she went full gentle anytime before now, and keeping to her demon tendencies while protecting and caring about how tom perceives her as not abusive has been perfect. Every chapter whether its plot or sexy based has been top notch.

For what's coming next, I am eagerly anticipating Tom's upcoming decision on if he's going to break the Worldstone on the earth or demon side. Its a huge climactic moment in him trusting Hinba long term, and she better damn appreciate it if he chooses to stay with her.

The plot thickens, it seems like Hinba isn't the only one going back and forth between worlds. I have to say Tom is a pretty good guy, even in spite of everything he's always trying to save everyone. I don't know how much time I'd spend arguing for the bandits under the circumstances, but then that's probably part of why Hinba likes him in the first place.

Tom is definitely enjoying himself more than he'll admit I think. The dynamic between the two is fun, Hinba is definitely making good use of her reality warping powers for this one.