[Report This]Date: September 17 2024 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3- Three Indonesian Titans (Part 1)
Hoping you're doing well. The entire series is amazing that I keep reading it again. Just the "unaware" theme is hot and amazing, innocent and clueless girls torturing and killing tinies is the best.
Maybe at some point, they mistake the tiny as a toy or bug and purposely use them for their feet. Like they see them but doesn't recognize them as humans xD
Still, looking forward to any updates on this story
Date: June 11 2024 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1- The Secret of Fortress Pip Ash
Hello, I love Unaware content and your story is by far already in the top 10 for me
What my suggestion is is something with socks and workout like and what I leave up to you but of course the girl has to be Unaware
[Report This]Date: June 03 2024 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1- The Secret of Fortress Pip Ash
Really good! Keep it going
[Report This]Date: May 29 2024 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 3- Three Indonesian Titans (Part 1)
Wow, things will be more exciting for him. With this technology he got, he can make the fantasies in his mind a reality with a lot of clueless women.
Hope at some point, he can adjust the size as well, maybe doll size is still possible if the women can't see what they're stepping on. Maybe in a club or concert. So many possibilities, already excited for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 29 2024 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2- Murder by Omission?
So much potential and knowing the theme of the story, it will even get more exciting with clueless girls torturing tinies under their careless feet. Already excited on how creative Dean will be in his upcoming developing "candid crush" hobby
Date: June 03 2022 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1- The Secret of Fortress Pip Ash
Hello Kyle,
Your introduction has truly established the ultimate goal of a good work of fiction, which is to let the readers see the events.
I would imagine that the next chapter would be more challenging to write, as the test is to describe a photographic depiction of each character. It’s easier said than done, as many novices would like to describe a giantess with awfully big bosoms. To me, that’s silly and distasteful, as that would denote that a lady with small breasts is off-putting.
Another important note is to give the protagonists realistic motivations, that can be tailored and revised consequently. For example, in my story, I consented to be shrank because in exchange for the usage of the Nano Intelligent Cells to cure Jessica’s illness. Subsequently, my motivation revised to become accustomed to the way of life of being a tiny.
Tess
Author's Response:
Tess,
Thank you for your kind words
I tend not to describe someone's breast size because it isn't something I really pay attention to when meeting someone, it just isn't my interest. To a tiny person anyone's breasts are going to just be beyond their normal ability to comprehend and scale, it would be like seeing a mountain next to a slightly smaller mountain. Without them being next to each other it would be difficult to tell the difference between them.
Dean's motivation is that he has nothing, nothing at all in his life. He has proceeded too far as a loner to be able to make friends and as such he now lacks the social ability to function with others. He'll feel bad about it at first, but of course he's going to shrink other people, it's the only enjoyment he has in an otherwise very bleak world. His motivations are certainly less than admirable, and it's only a matter of time before the police or some other group catches on.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2022 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1- The Secret of Fortress Pip Ash
Hello Kyle,
I sincerely enjoyed your introduction, as you’ve written a sophisticated plot. I’m glad to see that you’re writing your own story, to express your thoughts.
Tess
Date: May 29 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1- The Secret of Fortress Pip Ash
Very good story ! I am eager to see the next chapter.