[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Another fine Chapter~
It's good to see Sarah again. After the Empress Ana, Sarah's my favourite giantness. I kind of like how oblivious and chill she is to humans.
Aside the deaths she accidentally causes, though it's not really her fault. The port doesn't have the infrastructure yet, and personally I don't really see how they could get it. In a existing giantess city, a planned one sure.
Anyways, hope to see more of my favourite fisherwoman~
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Sarah seems to be quite well liked haha, which is a good thing to hear about. Her character does seem to be more localised to the fishing port though so I’m not sure how much she’d appear in other sections of the story. Right now in this current arc, she may appear some more.
Accidental and unaware seem to be the biggest thing surrounding her, perhaps the fisherwoman is a bit clumsy. As you said the infrastructure is to blame…
We may see more of them in the future! Thanks for reading.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Sarah seems to be quite well liked haha, which is a good thing to hear about. Her character does seem to be more localised to the fishing port though so I’m not sure how much she’d appear in other sections of the story. Right now in this current arc, she may appear some more.
Accidental and unaware seem to be the biggest thing surrounding her, perhaps the fisherwoman is a bit clumsy. As you said the infrastructure is to blame…
We may see more of them in the future! Thanks for reading.
Date: March 14 2026 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 27. Towards a Bigger Goal
Wow! New chapter already.
It was nice to see the politics in the first part of the chapter. Ana realizes that many human exploitation and abuse still occurs in the background, and it can cause issues down the line. Sarina looks like she will be in the clear since she has consent. It also appears that implementing any laws could do very little. Glad you show their is no easy solution.
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As for any improvements for the Leon/Anglo vs Agni fight... I'm not a writing but I can share a few things. I think the fight is fine, one thing I guess you can improve one is maybe having Leon attack Agni a few more times, so the fight looks more intense. Like I said not a writer, so you're welcome to disagree.
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I really like the new characters you've introduced. I know I will like Danica the best. Her marriage with Levi is interesting. So is Levi younger than her? And their basically in an open relationship. But is also looks like Danica really does love Levi anyway.
It's good to see Sarah again. I kind of like how obviously she is.
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Great Chapter!
Author's Response:
The politics are definitely the meat and potatoes of this story. The main aspect of it so to speak. I don’t think I could have made the story this long without those issues, of course the next challenge for me becomes finding ways to resolve them haha.
I’ll note the feedback for the fight itself still, thanks for the input!
Danica I tried writing to be quite different to other human characters shown so far. Who often feature fear and worry as their main trait, however Danica has eye set on the prize. She does like Levi, the reasons for and such aren’t quite clear on why specifically she picked him but there’s small hints so far. I’m hoping to return to these characters in the future as this chapter does leave off with a hint of certain plot threads beginning to connect.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 04 2026 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
i'm a simple man making his way through Giantessworld. I love muh feet, muh thighs, muh buttcrush and the common hairless armpit smothering. But even if it doesn't have that I still greatly like the story.
In fact one can say I'm all for the storytelling than horny~
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try my best to keep the story engaging at the very least.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2026 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 26. Expeditions and Research.
Damn that last bit was heard to read a bit, RIP those people may they make their way to the Pure Land safely.
Anyways, the you can make someone's taste buds think they are eating or tasting something sweet such gummy worms like Sarina's feet which are undoubtedly sour, sweaty and rancid. Is wild and much much preferable than being consumed and being ooof out later. Where do I sign up?
Also, i would assume the natural extend would go to your smelling as well. It's supposed to smell awful but it doesn't.
Someone should give that to Leon, imao~ Unique chapter tho on magic~
Author's Response:
Sorry to hear the last part was a bit hard to read haha. Hope you enjoyed the chapter nonetheless. I’m always open to hearing other people’s thoughts on these chapters, and talking more about them in more detail on other places if people are interested. When it comes to a lot of the smut scenes it can be influenced by what people request and ask for on reviews.
Regardless, yes a big focus on sensations and senses. Really opens the door with what’s possible with enchantments as a concept!
Thanks for the review!
Author's Response:
Sorry to hear the last part was a bit hard to read haha. Hope you enjoyed the chapter nonetheless. I’m always open to hearing other people’s thoughts on these chapters, and talking more about them in more detail on other places if people are interested. When it comes to a lot of the smut scenes it can be influenced by what people request and ask for on reviews.
Regardless, yes a big focus on sensations and senses. Really opens the door with what’s possible with enchantments as a concept!
Thanks for the review!
Author's Response:
Sorry to hear the last part was a bit hard to read haha. Hope you enjoyed the chapter nonetheless. I’m always open to hearing other people’s thoughts on these chapters, and talking more about them in more detail on other places if people are interested. When it comes to a lot of the smut scenes it can be influenced by what people request and ask for on reviews.
Regardless, yes a big focus on sensations and senses. Really opens the door with what’s possible with enchantments as a concept!
Thanks for the review!
Date: March 03 2026 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 26. Expeditions and Research.
Good Chapter. Few things to note.
It’s nice to know that at least Vascar’s leadership isn’t unhinged like Marvialasia. They seem serious working with Ranate improving the lives of Vascarians
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So it appears that Ruby’s leadership has finally fell apart. Glad that Miranda called out Ruby’s assistants. They’re just as bad as she is. But Lez isn’t off the hook yet. She realizes that Ruby could taker her down with her.
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So, Sarina is not great. Not suprised. Honestly I think Anna doesn’t realize how bad it can be in her country. Like two councilwoman are committing crimes against humans. And last chapter Emily saw a giantess tormenting humans. It reminds me a few chapters where Leon told Ana that they don’t know how humans are treated behind closed doors.
Overall good chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Those are definitely the actions of note in this chapter. Vascar’s leadership is in a much better place then it was before.
Ruby’s reign is falling apart but maybe there’s more to it than it seems?
Sarina is… she’s a weird one. I’ll clarify that with the archaic model of law that’s set in this time, what she’s doing can’t objectively be considered unlawful. She took precautions, and if Ana found it would still be something she may charge her with. However, Sarina differs from Lisa in that she provides benefits to the empire in the present day. And that the steps and measures she took make her activities seem contentious and morally absent rather than completely illegal.
You’re absolutely spot on that the general idea continues on from what Emily saw from before, and the idea of “what happens to humans behind closed doors”.
One more thing I’d add though is mention of the dwarven civilisation that was also hinted here as a thing of note.
Thanks again for reading!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2026 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 26. Expeditions and Research.
Nicely done on the internal segment. Shame the tinies didn’t survive her bowels no do we see them exit in any way. Felt a bit cut off. Otherwise, solid practice!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah I thought I may as well do a section on it considering the type of content hasn’t been done much in this story yet. I didn’t really want to showcase the aftermath so I can understand why it can seem a bit cut off, but hopefully it was still good regardless!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
I just wanted to say I absolutely loved your story I could truly feel the depth in every scene. You're an amazing writer!
I'm a comic artist, and your story instantly gave me so many visual ideas. I’d love to adapt it into a comic something that captures the slow burn, the dark mood, and the emotional weight you've written so well.
If you’re ever interested in turning your fic into a visual format, I’d be honored to collaborate with you.
You can reach out to me here:
Discord: aeroo_draws (for direct chat)
Twitter/X: [@flumsyartsy] (to check out my artwork)
Thanks for writing something so special. Hope we get a chance to work together!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I may contact you later on for more details.
Date: February 07 2026 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws
[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
[Report This]Date: January 23 2026 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 25. Threads Forming.
Wow absolutely amazing work
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: January 23 2026 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 25. Threads Forming.
Nice work! Hope in a near-future chapter we get some giantess full tour endo perhaps!
Author's Response:
Maybe in a future chapter...
Thanks for the review!
Date: January 13 2026 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Everything ok? You haven’t posted in months!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the wait! I'm truly sorry for how long it's been. I had gotten really busy the last couple months and then ill. I have a new chapter now ready though!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2025 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Eparchy down South.
“...Oh? Leon, honey! Just what are you doing here?” Ana had realised just where he was the moment he had landed. However she chose to play pretend so that she could feel him squirm. His acts of defiance would be met with complete dominance and control. Just as she suspected. It was these constant reminders that giantesses would often do on their tiny counterparts to remind them of the dynamic the two shared. Not of course to be mistaken for cruelty or otherwise, it was an act of love. It was how Ana had always shown her love for her itty bitty partner.
‘I wish I could just keep you in there forever. Away from all the danger in the world, and next to my heart where you’d be lulled to sleep each day and night. Tucked away in warmth where the colder Ranate winds wouldn’t get to you in the winters, and exposed out to see the world from my height. Ah, that’d be the life…’ A slight show of disappointment was worn on Ana’s face, she had to send Leon away on this mission as no giantess would dare head towards the Eparchy. Otherwise, she would keep him nestled in her bosom. His one true home and place of belonging."
Alright, that’s it, brother! I need to be isekai’d into this world after reading this — Leon’s life is the golden goose. Also, Lez is a straight-up pervert, illegally trafficking a man over the border inside her, and she wants a harem of men. My word. I don’t blame her — I’d have a harem of giantesses too. They’d probably end up squishing me one day, but oh well. I’d add Sarah — she’s sweet. I wonder how she’s doing in Lelorum?
Aside the rant, keep it up — you’re doing very well with the worldbuilding. Can’t wait for Ruby the Insane to get taken down.
Author's Response:
Woah thanks for the review!
The world does have its perks but also its horrific atrocities. It’s a mix of both lol.
More details will be revealed I suppose in the future.
Date: October 27 2025 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 24. The Eparchy down South.
Great chapter, I like the story progression.
Curious to know how the Marvialasia plot will go down. Lez says she will handle Ruby, wonder what she will do.
Also wouldn’t Ana be a bit more upset that Lez excuted a lot of people. It seems that a good chunk were killed just because they disagree with the rules and not planning a revolution.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
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[Report This]Date: October 27 2025 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 24. The Eparchy down South.
This chapter was amazing and the story progression was phenomenal and that last section was both shocking and interesting
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 15 2025 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 22. A New Crusade
Kinda surprised we really haven’t gotten any saucy fun with Ana and Leon yet. They need to “consummate” their marriage after all. And Anna seems the type to enjoy anal sex…..
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah. To be honest I’m saving it for a future chapter at some point. Whether what kind of content exactly I’m not sure, but it’ll happen.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2025 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 22. A New Crusade
Nice work, man. I'm finally glad you got to the empires. Look how shady they're being as expected of empires. And yeah, I remember the sister from the other storyline, kinda gross? She's carrying that many soldiers on her, though.
Really interested in the geopolitics and Realpolitik. And how relations with countries can switch on a dime. I'm an Empire newer Kingdom/Queendom. And now you're an Empire, and you're my borders tsk, ask, tsk now your hostile.
Author's Response:
Yeah it took a while but we’re on a new era for this story. Ana’s sister has also been introduced here formally, so she’ll be a character as well now. Allows me to focus on less romance heavy fetish stuff in the future too.
Geopolitics and political relationships between the different lands is very iffy. I wanted to show how if one country increases their power, it can have tremendous impact to the nearby countries. So far, this is just a baseline of what these countries may be about but they’ve been slightly mentioned in the past too. This arc still has a lot of different directions it can head in, but I’ve got a general plan of things I’d like to do. Hopefully I can satiate the curiosity for the geopolitical situation in the story there too haha.
Thans for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 02 2025 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Enjoying your story so far! If I may suggest a scenario for some point in this story, maybe we can have an incident where Leon accidentally gets eaten unnoticed and has to go through the giantess’ body to get out. Can be his wife or someone else.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! A more in depth vore scene can happen later on, however I'd have to come up with an in universe explanation first haha.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2025 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 21. New Beginnings
This chapter was great maintain the string character development that has been a highlight throughout the series and interactions felt super natural and emotional
the pacing was kinda quick but overall was really good great job and can’t wait for the next arc
[Report This]Date: December 22 2024 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Did Lez just up and suck a dude up her ass like a vacuum cleaner? And its a prison, well technically it is he can’t escape. Hey maybe he'll see that other guy coming out from her stomach.
My word. I think being crushed is better. Rather than being devoured and decomposing someone's belly. That's even worse. That's the worst one out of the three. When this eventually gets out this isn’t going to end well.
But its still pretty good, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, the fates of everyone here is in a rough spot. Well everyone except for Ruby.
For now, the plot point seeds have been planted. We’ll have to see where it goes from here.