




Date: April 02 2025 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Enjoying your story so far! If I may suggest a scenario for some point in this story, maybe we can have an incident where Leon accidentally gets eaten unnoticed and has to go through the giantess’ body to get out. Can be his wife or someone else.





Date: March 29 2025 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 21. New Beginnings
This chapter was great maintain the string character development that has been a highlight throughout the series and interactions felt super natural and emotional
the pacing was kinda quick but overall was really good great job and can’t wait for the next arc





Date: December 22 2024 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Did Lez just up and suck a dude up her ass like a vacuum cleaner? And its a prison, well technically it is he can’t escape. Hey maybe he'll see that other guy coming out from her stomach.
My word. I think being crushed is better. Rather than being devoured and decomposing someone's belly. That's even worse. That's the worst one out of the three. When this eventually gets out this isn’t going to end well.
But its still pretty good, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, the fates of everyone here is in a rough spot. Well everyone except for Ruby.
For now, the plot point seeds have been planted. We’ll have to see where it goes from here.
Date: December 21 2024 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Wow, the irony here is that everything Lez is being forced to do would be reprehensible to Queen Ana. I am sure that Ana would put a stop to it, and probably replace Ruby with someone else herself. Too bad Lez doesn't know Ana better. You would think Ana would have chosen someone in such an important role to be someone she knew better.
Author's Response:
Absolutely that Ana wouldn’t be pleased to hear about this. We’ll have to see how it goes in universe though as the chapters progress. The Marvialasian plot line will be less of a focus and more of a background thing I reckon going forward.





Date: December 20 2024 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
I am super happy for the AV. Thank you.
Author's Response:
It was due time for new fetish content anyway, so yeah glad you enjoyed





Date: December 20 2024 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 20. The New Marvialasia
Great chapter and insight into Lez and her semi new life in Marv and its people and the aftermath of the war. The new characters were great and the smut scenes were great too!
overall great work
Author's Response:
Thank you!





Date: July 19 2024 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 18. The Failed Port
Wow that was actually kinda sad. Its seeming to me racial segregation might be needed to avoid such horrific deaths for humans whether friend or kin which will naturally vendettas against giants like Sarah. Who appears to be a great woman but that is immediately overshadowed when her being is a threat to your existence.
Yikes.
Author's Response:
It’s a sad sight to see for the town. Without proper planning or aid given in terms of infrastructure and rules, this is the picture of what a town ran by giantesses without regard for humans may look like. In this case, it doesn’t matter how nice Sarah is, her existence is a threat to the humans simply due to her overwhelming size and power.
As such, welcoming more humans to here would be a disaster in the current state. At least that’s what I wanted to convey. Egulba is better with infrastructure for humans but it’s still somewhat problematic. So, a mixed size society and the problems it faces is really the issues Ana has to try to solve in her reign.
Date: June 04 2024 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 17. Without and With Love.
Very nice! How abut maybe anal vore in a future chapter?
Author's Response:
Perhaps in a future chapter. It’d depend on where the story goes and who would be involved. Though some new tags are definitely in order, so yeah good to consider.
Regardless, thanks for the review!
Date: May 24 2024 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 16. End of an Era.
So I guess the one big question I have is why did Ana give the prince to Lisa? Isn't that really a kind of reward for Lisa? I thought Lisa was being punished, and now she gets her own boy toy?
To me it would have made more sense to give him to the giantess who had been captured under his rule for a long time.
Author's Response:
Really? Personally I’d disagree there to some extent. Giving the Prince to the tormented giantess as if to fuel some sort of revenge lust isn’t really what the story was going for from my perspective. If that was the case it’d have to beg the question of why Lisa is being punished at all then. She’d simply be savouring her revenge against the Marvialasians in that framework. Hence, for me personally it didn’t really make sense to have the captured giantess get the prince. (Also more importantly, said captured giantess would have more important things to he doing at present anyway.)
As for a more in universe reason. Simply put, the prince needs to be punished. Lisa is someone under house arrest and other restrictions, making her and the Prince easy to monitor. And easy assurance that he is actually going to get punished. As for it being a reward for Lisa, you could momentarily call it that. Personally I view it more like the more like the Prince joining in on her sentence. Lisa’s punishments extend more so towards her position of power and her reputation which both have been stripped away from her. As well as removing innocent humans away from her grasp. All of which has happened, leaving people like the Prince left to her whims. In a sense you could say she got off easily, which I believe Ana also states within the chapter. It’s true, she does. All because she stems from a position of power.
Thanks for the review.





Date: May 20 2024 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 16. End of an Era.
Yet another fine chapter and end of the Marvialasia Arc. Hope to learn about this Josh the Giant Slayer, man sounds like a formidable beast. I immediately think of a spellcasting Guts for some reason.
And since its an empire now, I suppose we can call it the "Federal Empire of Ranate" because Marvialasia is able to be autonomous to a degree. I'm sure the other empires will be happy that another empire has formed. Totally no Great War will happen, naaaaaw.
And the Lisa-Marco duo, you bastard, didn’t think of that one. Won’t they have fun? Well Lisa sure will~
But i'm up to seeing how that goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, there’ll be some conflict coming up with how the new political climate will be shaping up with a new empire being formed. More on that in the future though as I’d like to take some more time on exploring Leon and Ana, as well as various other characters and settings. Things I think would be important to talk about before moving on to the next arc.
Which yes, that involves Lisa-Marco. Wonder what they’ll get up to… or what Lisa will get up to.
Thanks again for the review. Appreciate it!





Date: April 07 2024 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
I like It
Author's Response:
Happy to hear!
Date: April 06 2024 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
So I looked at your self analysis of part IV and I have to agree that Josh needed more work. What I would have liked to see was Josh thinking about his training as he became helpless after the weapon hit him. It would have been nice to know more about the why's and details of how Josh came to be. As it was, he was just kind of out there from left field.
Personally I would have liked to have seen a more direct punishment for the prince, maybe have the captured giantess released and let her do what she wants to him for her own retribution.
I did find one grammatical error
The past tense of cast, is also just cast, not casted.
jiggled as it casted / jiggled as it cast
Author's Response:
Josh is more or less a small tease for the future. I didn’t want to reveal anything too big about him or his organisation just yet. Before I started this batch of chapters, I didn’t want to even include him in the story but I decided it would be better to have a tease about this organisation. That there is a force out there that currently is way stronger than the giantesses.
As for the Prince, his punishment and what it will be is going to be revealed in the next chapter. I’ve already planned it out somewhat (I’ve had it planned for a little bit actually.) So look forward for that.
I’ll try to sort out the few grammatical errors when I get the time. Thanks for letting me know about them.
Date: April 01 2024 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 14. An Avoidable Conflict III
Part III was very interesting. Liked it!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it. Hopefully you’ll like the last part of this series of chapters dedicated to the conflict as well!
Date: March 25 2024 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
What an incredible story! Thank you so much for sharing it. Your narrative has undoubtedly left a profound mark on my writing journey.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Glad to hear you’ve liked the story so far!
Date: March 24 2024 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 13. An Avoidable Conflict II
So yeah, I did like this chapter a bit more. Even seeing Ana and Leon at the beginning of the chapter helped a bit. Maybe the other squad just put me off more.
Author's Response:
By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily.
Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting.
Author's Response:
By other squad I’m assuming you mean platoon 3? If so, yeah. That’s fair enough. They’re made to be more rebellious and less prone to Ana’s ideology and way of thinking. More so representing the already present ideology of Ranate's culture that existed before. This chapter didn’t feature them, and Instead depicted platoon 1 and 2, which lack characters that are overly cruel. It’s understandable in disliking the platoon 3 members in that way. Though I will say, the next chapter will feature them heavily.
Also, glad to hear you liked the Ana and Leon scene at the start. After these batch of chapters we should go back to the two! So that’ll hopefully be exciting.
Date: March 18 2024 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12. An Avoidable Conflict I
Hmmm, I must admit I didn't like this last chapter as much as the previous ones. I don't think it was the perspective shifting, but I really missed Ana, finding people like Rashtahl and forcing them to do what Ana wants. This was one of the things I liked so much before is that Ana was even able to outdo Lisa. So yeah, I missed that narrative touch of Ana's command to her people not being avoidable by them. I did enjoy that Lavial was getting possessive with her little human, so I liked that bit.
Author's Response:
That’s very understandable. However, it is a big conflict with multiple moving parts, I didn’t personally think it would make sense for Ana to have the main spotlight here. Overall, I do like having big conflicts as opportunities to focus on other areas that aren’t the main cast. Which I think is fair, considering the previous chapter was very intense with Ana. In that note, the next chapter also won’t feature her too much.
The last chapter of the batch probably will though.
Thanks for reading! I know I took way too long with releasing this.





Date: February 19 2024 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 5. Mana, Magic and Magecraft.
Nice work building man. I like how you make a lot of the giantesses feel so human, with their attitudes, ideals and personalities. Whether its the cruel bigoted Lisa, who'll probably be forever stuck in the pass or Ana (I absolutely adore my giant Queen she’s better than most) a hopeful queen of the future of the state but will slay you if you absolutely force her hand.
I'm just curious of how the Empire's of the continent will react to all the wars in the center of the continent, because as we know Empires always look to expand and conquer and that includes the giantness kingdom.
While I read this, i think would I have giantess wife over races like elves. An Elf! Probably not, way to dangerous even with magick enhancers or especially a Size Alteration Device so they can be altered to my height. That and why it'll be a absolute dream to me to be thrown in the shoes of Ana or Maria and smothered by their feet, chest, etc.
It's not that I don’t trust them to be gentle with me, it's more that i'd prefer to maximize my life expectancy. And being trampled (or any other activities) by Maria or other giantess is a easy way to drop it.
I may have read it wrong or forgot, but how does a giantness and a human like Ana and Leon have children again, I remember magick played a important role in it? But does the magick enlarged the sperm or do they shrink Ana down to a normal-size?
I definitely like how you make use of Azgaar’s fantasy map generator I use it constantly myself. You paint a much cleaner picture of the world.
The only recommendations I have is more Feet and smothering, branch out to other ethnic races and the imperial powers, but aside that you’re doing just great.
Also, just out curiosity what’s the giantess population of Ranate? And how do they live?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the super in depth review!
Yeah, after the first pilot chapter I wanted to explore the different attitudes of a country like Ranate and their views on humans. As such, I wrote the past of the country to have giantesses like Lisa who cling to their ways whereas giantesses like Ana hope for a better future. Whilst the narrative’s conflicts are about wars and fetish content like crushing humans and such, at its heart it’s really about the different ideals of each person and society. All of that clashing against one another. Ranate will painstakingly and slowly progress into being more human friendly but it won’t be easy. Even someone who wants to progress her society like Ana will have her own flaws in regards to this.
Currently the story is wrapping up its first arc, so it’s very fitting you’re talking about how the other empires of the land would react to what’s currently going on as that is most likely what the next arc will be about!
The way they have offspring isn’t too complex in its design, it’s literally just inserting the human in. However, without enchantments it’s incredibly easy to kill the human on purpose or by accident. So magic and enchantments became an important element for In not just this process but also just making the connection between the two species more powerful and plausible. Part of the reason why humans were considered so much less in the past in Ranate stemmed from how weak and easy they were to kill.
Once again, thanks for the review. I really appreciate reading in depth ones that go into each and every detail about the story! As for adding more smothering and stuff, I may add it in the future but I don’t think it’ll be a focus in chapter 12 and 13 necessarily. I should also branch out to other sentient species and imperials powers but for now I’d like this arc to be focused in with what we have already established.
As for the estimate of the population. I probably have it in my world building folder somewhere haha, it’s not on me at the moment so I can’t give you that number right now unfortunately. I may include it in a future chapter or side story.
Date: February 19 2024 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Are you going to come back to this story? *Really* missing it!
Author's Response:
I’ve actually finished chapter 12, and am working on chapter 13 at the moment. Sorry for the lack of communication about it. I’d like for both chapters to be released close to one another to wrap up the war and conflict.
Date: December 24 2023 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 11. The Human Experience
Really enjoying this story so far. Maybe you should break the huge chapter into 2, so we can read a bit more. :)
Author's Response:
The huge chapter may need to be divided into 2. As I’m not sure how I’d have all the planned scenes fit into 1 chapter. Regardless, glad you’re enjoying the story so far, despite some errors on my end with writing.
Date: December 14 2023 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1- A Rushed Marriage.
Just so you know the past tense of grind, is ground, not grinded.