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Reviewer: lovergiantess7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2023 2:17 PM Title: Part 1

Can't wait to see what happens next, I absolutely love your character Beth, she started out in Part 1 MHC as an opportunist, then she's basically become cunning and planning out her next shrinkees, luring them onto a plane with her and then getting them shrunk down, love that theme!



Author's Response:

Thanks for feedback, much appreciated. Glad you like this story. Beth is fun to write, I agree with your view of her. I've released more of Part 2, check it out!

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