[Report This]Date: October 22 2022 8:32 PM Title: A Whole New World
I really enjoy the dynamic between Maddie and Randy. Especially the taunting and the giant couple aspects and the idea of this hot college girl lording over this unlucky kid. I would read a whole series on just the two of them and their adventures. Can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Randy and Mads have been appealing to me lately so we'll definitely be seeing more!
Date: October 21 2022 2:31 AM Title: College Blues
Thanks for the new chapter! This NIL stuff sucks, prioritizes the larger the wealthier schools even more...
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Oh yeah. I went to a smaller school and NIL will ensure we'll never be relevant on a national stage.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2022 5:02 PM Title: Lily's Best and Brightest
Great work, would love to see another chapter with Randy and Maddie in the future. Really like the “friends with benefits“ dynamic developing between those two
[Report This]Date: May 28 2022 1:06 AM Title: Lily's Best and Brightest
Love the the story. Interested in seeing a shrunken Washington D.C on a toe ring. Lily flexing her power allowing Congress to still vote, though mostly on mundane things like the color of her nails. Plus other inanimate objects inhibited like piercings or a CEO who's downsizing part of the company to a pair of skyscraper pumps.
Date: May 26 2022 2:54 PM Title: Lily's Best and Brightest
Great story! Can't wait to see more!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2022 3:53 PM Title: On Top of the World/Work-Release
Vignette's like this that flesh-out the world are the best :) Really want to see Nick's fate.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I always get conflicted when I leave short stories like that. I'm purposely leaving them on a hanging ending to be reminiscent of Twilight Zone or Creepshow type vignettes, BUT I would be lying if I said I didn't want to continue building upon it.
We'll definitely see if Nick pops up later down the road (maybe we'll check in on him after a year at the Leather Loafer?)
[Report This]Date: May 19 2022 3:36 PM Title: A Whole New World
Glad this is continuing! I hope it goes on for a long time, especially since usually this would be the final chapter of another world takeover type story, but personally I love thinking in depth about how the world can be changed from the top-down under a dictatorial influence. Things would happen so quickly, and though it doesn't operate under standard story logic (having a beginning middle and end since we know she's already won by the beginning), I want to see how far she can go in putting her permanent imprint on the world. Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2022 2:37 AM Title: A Whole New World
Very nice follow up, especially of Lily's world dominance. Seems all the world needs is one Superior Woman to control us all to her slightest whim.
That said, read the last episode of "Shrink for Hire", which is great; but what happened to Lenny, Amanda's Pussy prisoner, and Mark, Amanda's Ass prisoner? One would hope they have been captive all this time, though their time spent in Amanda's armpits was terrific.
A suggestion, keep the two stories and keep them separate, with Amanda dominating Mark, Lenny, and others in your story line "Shrink for Hire" {Lenny and Mark really should go back in Amanda's Pussy and Ass-crack respectively}; while describing the new world under Lily as this new futuristic story line.
BRAVO!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, DW!
I admit that the ending of Shrink for Hire was a bit rushed. I may revisit with a final chapter or two to outline what happened to Amanda's prisoners after Lily's ascension - it would only be fair.
I definitely prefer world building so I was in hurry to get to this story-line, lol.
Thanks for commenting!