[Report This]Date: May 19 2022 3:29 PM Title: Introducing: Planet Lily
I want more procedural world take over stories like this one. They're so perfectly up my alley. It's well-paced too, though personally I wouldn't have minded getting more of Lily herself, as well as more dialogue between her competitors and dissenters. That way we can get an outside perspective of how much this woman is truly starting to encompass everything. Pushback against monopolization, conspiracy theories about how everything seems to be falling into place around her rise, maybe a bit more about her board of directors and how she's accruing other companies under her personal umbrella. I'm also curious about what regular people think about all this happening, and how it's affecting their lives, though I suspect the followup story will get more into that. Either way, thanks for outdoing yourself!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2022 11:52 AM Title: A Night Out
Great story! Really enjoying it. I hope Mark ends up in her butt while she goes after next target.
It might be fun to follow the perspective of a tiny that she sells, as they get away from her only to find out that their new situation may be even worse.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm definitely looking at adding a chapter like that as an interlude.
Date: April 29 2022 2:40 AM Title: Yanked Around
Fantastic chapter! Especially like Mark looking up at Lenny's face poking out from Amanda's pussy. That was great.
Also like how Amanda is keeping the five remaining board members between her toes, too bad she intends to sell them off. Too bad Paisley was flushed, hopefully Amanda took a nice dump on her before hand.
Though it's a previous chapter, it would be nice to hear how Henry is being used by that middle aged woman in Shanghai.
Perhaps since Amanda now daydreams of "Amanda stood and fantasized at the thought of ruling over dozens or hundreds of tiny people forced to do her bidding." and her commands to Lenny and Mark to "WORSHIP ME."; Amanda will start to keep her tinies and her "DAYW or Do As You Wish" shrunkies as full time worshipers.
The hostess wearing her ex as a necklace pendent and saying "A former boyfriend who I now hold close to my heart, miss." is sexy as hell. Good for the hostess.
Since mark is not one of Amanda's intended targets, will she keep or sell him? Perhaps Amanda will start seeing all of her DAYW as full time worshipers.
Can't wait for the next chapter(s).
Author's Response:
Thank you!
A chapter of 'visiting old friends' sound like it could definitely be fit in. We'll check in on Henry and others ;)
It will be a shame once the board members are gone, however, it's part of this story to keep new characters and themes going (I've found I tend to get stale when keeping the same characters in play beyond a certain number of chapters).
Oh, Amanda's harem of shrinks will definitely be up to a respectable size by the end of the story as she finds more reasons to keep them and less financial incentive to sell them. I think Amanda may have a small think for Mark, so I don't foresee him going anywhere soon.
Thank you for appreciating the exchange between the hostess and Amanda! The fun little world building details and the actions outside of main characters are always my fav to write (even if not the easiest).
Date: April 27 2022 2:12 AM Title: Peek behind the curtains/Back to the Grind
This is a great story. I really appreciate how you use different shrunken sizes in your story.
I too have shrunken servants in some of my stories, though they are all male and all uniformed in French Maid attire.
I like how Amanda and Lily use / abuse their tinies, that's pretty hot.
My only complaint is grammatical errors and the like. For instance you just wrote "Jenny lifted her palm to her face" rather than "Amanda lifted..."; and "Larry took a deep breath, preparing himself to yell." then followed up with "'Now, Lenny.'"
Otherwise absolutely great story.
By the way, love shipping off tinies with drones and that Amanda kept a woman as her butt plug for an entire month. That was hot. Also like the toe rings and toe prisoners.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Definitely dig the males dressed as French Maids.
Yeah. I tend to write my stories and post in one action so my editing is very minimal. I usually do fixes as I reread after posting. Thanks for the catches!
[Report This]Date: April 26 2022 11:43 AM Title: Momma I Madrid
My favorite parts are when they get used as sex toys. Thank you so much for writing this.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: April 25 2022 8:51 PM Title: Momma I Madrid
Nice! Next chapter definitely sounds like it'll be good :)
Liking the premise so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you!