Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2022 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope this continues some day!

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2022 12:51 AM Title: Epilogue.

Your story suffers from one major flaw. More, I need more. Had you not made this story the apex of gentle-smothering-spoiling-tiny perfection, your story would not have this flaw.

The writing is the strongest aspect, of a story with countess strengths. You both delve into detailed description, regarding appearances, actions and emotions, and tie it together with a finesse that is almost unseen either in this site, or many others. I venture to say professionally published works grow green with envy at the polish you've displayed. Honestly, I do have to favorite this story, if only for the sole purpose to have a reference in which to improve my own writing.

Love triangles are terrible, and destroy a story. It is a testament to your characterizations and sense of good taste that this apparent love triangle makes the story instead of breaks it. When I saw that there was going to be another giantess, I inwardly groaned. Naomi won me over, just as much as with Amy (though that slightly does have to do with the fact that Naomi's apparently a muscly girl ... I'll leave it at that). You've nailed the genki girl character with gusto. Amy's more stoic attitude is also quite likable, and becomes even more so when contrasted with the bubbly Naomi.

I echo Mr. Pendragon in that I do hope this story gets a sequel/expansion. Whatever you had set out to do, you've accomplished, and then some.