Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well written good erotic story.  A little too much crush-centric for my tastes, but I kinda knew that going in. The one thing I really hated was the cleaning of things with their mouths - not only is it disgusting, but it's not practical or believable on any level (and we're already suspending belief on the whole shrinking thing). That level of cruelty would have the tinys revolting or committing suicide left and right. The ending left me a bit sad and disappointed - I didn't think it was worthy of all the nice buildup. I would have liked a bit of an epilogue, from the perspective of both or either Justin or Brianna, as they observed the person they knew getting crushed and with their reactions; might have even been better if we saw Brianna's POV, since we weren't aware that she watched the stream; would add an element to her personality.

Reviewer: HOZANGA Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2022 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

You often do stories that have doc martens in them, and as they're a huge fetish of mine i was hoping that this story would have some! also, they really fit the e-girl aesthetic so I was sure I just had to wait patiently ;) needless to say, I wasn't disappointed! A great story, with an even greater ending! 

Keep it up!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2022 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 12

For once I thought one of your characters would have a heart...well not really I fully expected her to say no.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2022 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Val and her power couple, cleansing the world of tiny pests.

Also Briana would've listened to tiny Eric and not punished him for something he had no part of. She would've done it for fun and fun alone.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2022 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

Jimmy does raise a good point about the free room and board. They do seem better off slightly than a lot of your other tinies tend to be.

That said I also understand Eric's worry about their safety with a tyrannical cam girl.

Reviewer: lilsmol Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful as always. You have such a way of crafting scenarios and characters that not only heightens the realism and worldbuilding, but the unique cruelty and incredibly disheartening power dynamics. 

I really wish GTSWburg would start up a Patreon or something as I'm truly a fan of their work and only wish I could read their stuff more consistently. I think they are pretty much in a league of their own when it comes to size fiction and this story only further attests to that. There's just something so grounded about his stories, including this one, alongside all the fantastical elements, the way things are described, the attention to detail, in particular the rote, mundane, routine drudgery of simply being owned by someone who is impossibly more powerful than you with no chance of recourse, in a world where such things are ordinary and accepted...In this story, like most of his ones before it, GTSWburg really just nails so many things so right and helps immerse the readers in a believable size fantasy like so few others can.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2022 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

Trapped all the way out in Vegas thanks to that no good coward Justin.

Scorpions, Rattlesnakes,Influencers...

Poor guy is in so much danger, plus he denied Brianna of her rightful claim when he finally shrunk.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2022 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ah, the life of the glorious influencer. 

Briana would've at least bullied him as hard working commoner. 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2022 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ah the life of the findomme/camgirl, what a hard existence it must be.

Was possibly thinking it might be Hannah or Amanda or even Gabi etc but curious to see where this goes.

Hopefully Brianna is still in the cards as well.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

Justin is a lowdown traitor man, no good in the hood.

I also have a few ideas on who it might. One cause she's currently the big bad but a few other people from your older stories do come to mind.