Date: March 29 2022 3:59 AM Title: The Locker Room
This appears to be a very promising tale. The setup was quick, but sufficient. You are playing to my preferences (giantess athletes), so my anticipation is based on that. I am wondering if Derek is going to be passed around like a piece of yarn, or if he's in for the long haul with someone (possibly Niyah).
If there's one possible criticism, I don't have any idea of the appearances of Stephanie, Niyah or Derek. I don't know if that's intentional, so the reader could fill in the blanks, or if you're saving that for later, but I do believe it would be more engaging to at least work that in. Don't be mechanical or explicit (as some tend to do), but at least give us an implication of what we're working with.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2022 6:06 AM Title: The Job Fair
I like the start so far. A little bit of mystery and a cliffhanger to keep me guessing.
Also, I like the playful, but dominant nature of the lady hiring him. Seems a little suspicious, but that just makes it more fun.
Also, I like how Derek is determined to work hard and do everything necessary to get the job done. Now I’m curious how far he will go.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Date: March 28 2022 2:47 AM Title: The Job Fair
Interesting start, full of possibilities. Can't wait to read where this story goes.