Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2022 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Research on the Satyr

Whoa! That was nice. 

Love the start with Thomas having a dream about Cindy using him. Now I’m curious if Cindy has a dream of using Thomas and then she wishes to make it a reality. ;)

The library scene was good. The most underrated part was when Cindy approached Thomas from behind, wrapped her arms around him and rest her boobs on his neck. It painted such a great picture on my head, and felt subtly erotic. I love it! 

Then we get the video scene. What Aphrodite did was pretty hot. I agree, I’m usually not a fan of death, but I do like it when it’s used to scare another tiny to do her bidding. That second guy that she kept in her underwear is so lucky! She said he gets to play with her for another day and dropped him in there! While I don’t know what she plans on doing with him that day, I could expect that she keeps him in her panties for a good while. 

I admit, I was expecting Cindy’s reaction to be more perverted. Lol. I thought she would say something like “Oh, that’s hot. I gotta try something like that”. And then Thomas looks over to her and he sees her rubbing her crotch. Haha! And then afterwards, Thomas could offer his analysis later. 

Yeah, as far as giantess stories go, I usually prefer stories with fewer people so that way they are less likely to die and have more intimate time. Sometimes I click on a giantess story and it’s a about a giantess shrinking multiple people at a time and I already know some people are going to die. 

I think you did a great job illustrating that here and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It feels great that you appreciate the subtly erotic scenes. Usually people react strongly to the blatant sex scenes, but sometimes it's all about the buildup.

Yes, while it seems like Cindy would react to the video in a perverted way, there are many reasons why she did not react well. One of the bigger ones is that Aphrodite being a cruel giantess on camera reflects negatively on Cindy's image, especially because she already exposed her powers to the public.

I appreciate your thoughts on the matter of people dying in giantess stories. You're right, it is kind of hot when a tiny's death is used to scare other tinies. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2022 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9: Interrogation of Gerald Roberts

Great chapter! I like the similarities of what happened to Desmond and the mayor. Both of them had a giantess lay down on top of them.

Being tied to a pillow sounds hot. I had this one friend, she always slept with a pillow between her legs. I’ve always wondered if that was common or not. So when I heard Desmond was tied to a pillow, my mind began racing. 

I also love the whole sequence with Cindy. The part we’re she shrank the guards and placed them in her boobs. Then how she basically teased and smothered the mayor. Also, even the interrogation was hot. The way she cutting off his air was great. 

When he initially shrank in his chair, I thought maybe Cindy would approach his chair and then sit on him instead. I could imagine Thomas looking at the chair and not being able to see the mayor at all. 

Seems like a quick meeting. Can’t wait to see what Cindy does next. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I honestly think pillows are underutilized in giantess content. They're role as a cushion can be used in so many scenarios. Imagine this: two girls kidnap two shrunken victims and tie them each to pillows. Then they have a sexy pillow fight.

Yes, Cindy always finds a way to spice up her interrogations. Honestly, in hindsight, maybe I should've went with her sitting on the Mayor, although maybe that would be too similar to the Gryphon interrogation.

Thanks for reading as always!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2022 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Friendship of Cindy Mitchells and Thomas Phealan

Really like how the relationship between Cindy and Thomas is developing. I love how she seems to be more genuine with him. This leads me to think she might have a thing for him. Here's to hoping but I guess only time will tell. I'll be looking forwarf to the next chapter since the murder mystery has me just as hooked as the protagonists.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Yes, it will be pretty sick for Thomas if Cindy had a thing for him (or would it?) I'm so happy to hear that the mystery has hooked you

Reviewer: Sovereign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2022 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Video on Macrophilia

Love it! Looking forward to your next adds. Did you get my second email? :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yup, I just sent you a reply, let me know if you didn't get it

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Conspiracy of Cindy Mitchells

If Officer Cindy Mitchells licked her victim such as the Gryphon and had Potter stuffed in her sweet, oops I mean sweaty butt crack; then shouldn't DNA evidence prove they were / were not her victims?

If so, wouldn't there be residual DNA to prove James Grundy was smashed between another set of breasts?  That is of course if all DNA evidence was not washed off and Cindy Mitchells is or is not innocent.

You really have a fantastic story going on here.  I love the fact it is more story than simple tiny / GIANTESS; but would love to hear more about what happened between Officer Cindy Mitchells and her former partner Officer Bradley, especially in the toilet room. 

Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

It seems that the people in the police force, at least the important ones like Rachel or the commissioner, are already aware of Cindy's methods. That's why the commissioner gives the case to Cindy; he knows she is a suspect but doesn't want to believe it. Good catch on the DNA, that becomes important later. I would say any DNA caused by breast crushing is minimal, but maybe I'm getting it scientifically wrong lol. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2022 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Murder of James Grundy

Really fantastic story line.  I'm glad you fixed the text issue, and sorry I was not able to respond in time to advise you of the text issues I have had here.

First, I use a version of Microsoft Word to write my stories, then link them in when downloading a story.  It takes some trial and error to get used to paragraph spacing and other discrepancies between Microsoft Word and the text app used at this site.

I think your issue, which obviously you fixed, was copying a hard copy (think of it as an image rather than text document) that could not be edited.

Second, your story, absolutely great.  Not many writers have an interesting story that just so happens to included size change.  Yours does which makes it so much more entertaining. 

Anyone can write "She shrunk him down and stuffed him in her shoe", as hot an idea as that is; but you have an actual story that happens to involve tinies.  Much more rewarding for the reader.

I can not wait to read more of your story.  Though I do have one question, what ever happened to Potter who Cindy stuffed in her butt crack?

Author's Response:

It seems that formatting text on this website has become harder than I'm used to. I've been having to do a lot of trial and error, but I think I got the hang of it now. Thanks for the tips though.

And thank you, I did try to make the story more important than anything else, so it feels great that you appreciate that. I must admit that Potter never reappears in this story, so one can assume that he was arrested along with the Gryphon.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2022 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Capture of Matthew Kane

The text is so small and clumped together that one has a very hard time to read it.  Could you please redo the paragraph spacing and text size?

From your description, this seems like a very interesting story.

Author's Response:

Hey thanks for letting me know. Do you know how to change the size?