Reviews For The Fist of Hope
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Reviewer: LewdSensei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter I: Nostalgia and Hope

Loving the story I always adore the ones where the plot and the fetish are equally balanced also scenes where you describe the fetish acts are top tier only problem I would have is the pacing how John forgit his mother in 4 days pretty hard to believe second I would sacrifice my life for to be IYO’s dinner



Author's Response:

You're right. I guess I was in a hurry and I missed that detail. Rookie mistakes. The general idea was that the dream was the manifestation of Jon's anger at what her mother had supposedly done and in his fury the boy wanted to forget her. But it is very little time... you are right.

And second Yeah me too

Reviewer: Faceless man Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 26 2022 12:27 AM Title: Prologue part I: The Despicable Neko

this doesn't make any sense. why is the mousegirl so stupid and evil. why didn't she just not use the beacon to get the catgirl



Author's Response:

I assume you mean chapter 2 the part where Meleiss arrives and rescues Jon? Well, let's say that her magic has certain effects that will be better described in later chapters. I don't know what beacon you are referring to. If you are referring to the portal that she opened to go with Jon, I don't want to advance anything but I guarantee that it will be seen in the next chapter. As for why Meleiss is like that, let's say that this is her personality, which for me is something normal after what happened in the first part of the prologue. I mean her adoptive parents were eaten as well as her brother. And I don't want to advance anything but something came in her comfort.If you were not convinced by this answer, please be a little more specific and tell me what part you do not understand to explain better.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2022 7:19 PM Title: Prologue part II: Jon

This is pretty good. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2022 5:06 AM Title: Prologue part I: The Despicable Neko

This is a very good start.



Author's Response:

Thanks man

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