[Report This]Date: August 10 2024 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
would like more flies plots but with aware like the previous chapters nothing betthen than to have tommy and joe treat bugs like shit, the immature jokes are driving this story. enjoyed the more mature stuff though a lot with joe jerking off that was hot.
[Report This]Date: August 09 2024 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Really like the idea to have way smaller bugs like flies a lot would like to see this being used more often. I didnt like the perspective change in this chapter kinda from the point of view of the flies. I think it is way more fun to have Joe and the others be in action as the narrator especially him making fun of the bugs. Still liked the ending a lot with the cum. Fly idea is awesome!
[Report This]Date: February 06 2024 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
fav chapter so far 10/10 can totally see some tiny flies end in all kinds of stuff where they dont belong and go through hell
[Report This]Date: February 04 2024 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
best chapter of the story so far. flies sound fun totally was thinking what if Fido got fleas, would totally add to the plot if the bugs would be super tiny. my favorite part in this chapter was joe just talking to fido and luke was like what???
[Report This]Date: February 04 2024 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Had such a blast reading I love this story because of the unaware factor. Seeing fruit flies for multiple chapters would be fun can see a lot of things happening. keep it up.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2024 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cannot tell more than how much I loved this chapter. Would had liked it even more if the bug would have been digested in the condom by the fluids filling it. Would love the fruit fly idea and a lot of unaware things can see some flies meeting Fido's butt hole in detail. Luke is such a nice character making it even better him helping without realizing to decide the horrible fate of all his bugs.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2024 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
YES! thanks for posting loved it. would love fly chapters too I love smaller shrinking sizes a lot can see lots of horrors happening with flies and how gigantic Fido would be making short process of pesky flies also can see LOTS of great unaware stuff with flies with Luke and Joe. Too bad they didnt get some money out of this.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2024 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Had so long waited for a new chapter, this is totally my favorite story of yours. And this is the best chapter of the entire story so far. So many perfect parts especially how Luke was tricked into this. The ending was priceless also with Tommy just getting a package of new condoms back 🤣Think super tiny stuff like fruit flies would be a great idea could see both coexisting next to each other and could see lots of chapters with both. Thank you for sharing amazing chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 13 2023 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
there is a reason why this is my favorite story of yours, hope the wait for the next chapter wont be that long. thanks so much for writing dude! just love how cruel and immature joe is at the same time. hes my favorite character of this story. but also like luke and fido is the best.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2023 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
rly loved this chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 01 2023 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
yees, waited so long for a new chapter. I love Joe 😈
[Report This]Date: April 01 2023 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
loved this one could maybe also see that John character be used in the next chapter for some horrors Joe comes up with
[Report This]Date: April 01 2023 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. The police idea was great and also the dare to eat a bug. Waited long for this story to continue enjoyed it a lot
[Report This]Date: April 01 2023 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
absolutely loved this chapter especially the part where joe swallowed that bug for money. dont see anything disappointing at all. this story is by far my favorite of yours next to ashly
[Report This]Date: March 31 2022 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
just amazing cant wait to see the next! maybe more of luke too and joe.
Date: March 17 2022 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
awesome new chapter would love to see more of luke too in the future with joe and tommy
[Report This]Date: March 13 2022 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
my favorite story of yours I love m/m the most so this story is totally amazing also how it is written. I love joe and luke. and tf is also one of my fav. cant get enough of this story. thanks for updating!!
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
made my day, with joe and his brother just totally be the horror for those people turned into bugs. love this story. great ending too. really like this cut from beginning to end of luke promising to look after him and then it ends like this just perfect. yes could put them all together or just do from now on!
[Report This]Date: March 12 2022 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
it actually so funny and perfect how unfair it is for those bug people to get collected by the kid brother 🤣thats like the best of the entire plot and then meet the older brother and his dog. please keep it going.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2022 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
fantastic plot for most parts, would love if this story continues. honestly it makes me every-time so hard when joe just feeds some bug to his dog and hes totally not aware its a person. this story is one of my favorites of yours, Joe is lit