[Report This]Date: April 13 2022 1:19 PM Title: Tuesday with Mom
Okay, maybe it’s just me but… what if the family actually somehow knew she was shrunk and decided to mess with her as a result. I had a weird feeling from the mom when she and the dad sent different pictures coincidentally. If that were the case I’d imagine Marie would likely shrink them.
I’m not recommending this as an idea but I just had a gut feeling.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I can see how the story kinda teases that but I’m treating it as a coincidence. My plan is to have the family unaware in this story!
Date: April 06 2022 5:52 AM Title: Prologue
Nice buildup in this chapter, can’t wait to see the rest of the family wreak havoc in the city. You do great shrinking scenarios so I like that this story has city destruction thrown in the mix
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm hoping to have the other chapters up soon!
Date: April 04 2022 8:27 PM Title: Prologue
love it so far. Really hope the talk about her mother keeping her on her nipple is foreshadowing. Nothing better than huge mommy milkers.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2022 11:34 PM Title: Prologue
You always have such great scenarios for your stories and this story is no exception. I can imagine things getting crazy once the parents stumble upon the city. Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, glad you like my stories!
[Report This]Date: February 26 2022 4:22 PM Title: Prologue
looking forward to this new story.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope it’ll live up to expectations!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2022 7:35 PM Title: Prologue
A very good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you!