[Report This]Date: December 28 2012 5:42 AM Title: Worse for Tableware
Love it !!
Date: April 30 2012 3:36 PM Title: Worse for Tableware
Arrie isn't so bad after all it seems, but then things might not be quite when they seem...
Date: April 30 2012 3:21 PM Title: Who's Asking?
I bet it was Arrie who shrunk him, I can't be certain though...
Date: April 30 2012 3:13 PM Title: Sixteen Minutes
So he's in a quite a predicament and he's thoughts are that he's late for work? I wonder what Arrie has planned for him...?
[Report This]Date: June 30 2009 12:44 PM Title: Worse for Tableware
Once again, I love this story.
This is probably my favourite story, even better than one of Cayce's stories and he IS the man.
I love the way you have brought Arrie to life. Shes so majestic. She's gentle, yet playful and naughty, but then again she has her darkside, like when she punishes him.
Also, at the ending, you add just a little more to her personality "She regarded him with surprising shyness." These little things.
That last sequence of with all the mouthplay, oh god you have a way with words. I love your use of vocabulary, keep updating soon, amazing story.
Author's Response:
I apreciate the love.
Wow, even better than one of Cayce's stories? I just read Humonculus not too long ago, so I'm especially grateful for such a high compliment.
I'm glad you like what I'm doing with Arrie. I'm trying to craft a very specific personality type for her, so it's good to hear feedback about her character. Based on your synopsis, I'd say I'm doing pretty good so far.
Your kind words pertaining to the mouthplay portion of the chapter are highly valued as well. I never know when I'm being too wordy or focusing too much on mundane things, so every validating comment regarding my descriptions is a real confidence booster. Thanks for that.
I'll try to be more timely with my next update than I was with this last one.
Date: June 29 2009 1:17 PM Title: Worse for Tableware
Yep! I found it.
Thanks!! :-)
Author's Response: No problem, I liked the idea.
Date: June 29 2009 11:12 AM Title: Sixteen Minutes
Dah! In my last response, replace the word other with author, please.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2009 8:21 AM Title: Worse for Tableware
I might break Rule Number One a lot more frequently than Justin. But, I definitely would be able to obey Rule 5!
Author's Response:
I think the rules will either make Justin very ingenuitive or very submissive. In either case, they're sure to be a pain (especially rule number one). I'm with you on rule number five, though. In fact, as the other, I'm kinda obligated to follow it.
Date: June 29 2009 8:14 AM Title: Who's Asking?
OOPS! My bad: I thought his clothes had shrunk with him.
I either misremembered, or the story had a bit of a rewrite. Ah, well! No biggie.
Author's Response: Nope, no rewrite. I AM that lazy a writer.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2009 8:10 AM Title: Who's Asking?
Hmmmm! He's probably going to wind up doing an encore of his first punishment.
Albeit, stark naked! ;-D
Author's Response: Nah, I'm not THAT lazy a writer.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2009 8:07 AM Title: Sixteen Minutes
Hey! I remember reading this back at GTS City. Nice to see it revived.
Hopefully, it's complete, now.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's been a couple months. Sorry about taking so long with it, and no, it's no where near complete yet. By the way, I threw you a little nod in chapter three. Can you find it?
[Report This]Date: April 28 2009 10:48 AM Title: Who's Asking?
Heh! From her dexterity, I would guess that Arrie is either a magician's assistant or a baton-twirling coach. Which are two of my favorite gts-fantasies (as you've probably noticed in some of my stories).
Speaking of which: it's nice to know I'm not the only one who mentally drafts the conclusion of his stories, first. Basically, writing in flashback while leading up to it.
Author's Response:
I never gave much thought to why Arrie is so dexterous, but those are some good thoughts. I might work them into the next chapter (and yes, I'll get around to writing it at SOME point).
As for mentally drafting the conclusion first, yeah, that's pretty nice. Although, I'm not quite sure if it's the ending I'm seeing in my head. In any case, it allows me to set up the big scene right from the start, which is the type of thing I love to read. Hopefully it'll be as fun to write that way.
Date: April 25 2009 11:34 AM Title: Sixteen Minutes
Love the vocabulary, love the format, and I love the story so far.
Can't wait to see what happens to little Justin.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Tinyman23. It is very much appreciated.