[Report This]Date: February 23 2022 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
"One of the first aspects Juniper saw about someone nearby, is that one of them had a birthday nearby and decided to say “Come out, come out wherever you are. I know someone deserves a happy birthday! No one else around here has a birthday around so you should know who you are, the one with a very nice name. This is not a light matter as the birthday boy deserves a very special present for his special day. I can not give you a present if you don’t come out silly, so please, please come out. This would be at least as much of a present for me as it is for you, hehe.” - It's kinda amazing to read that as it actually IS my birthday.
I like the story albeit it seems to be a little "template-y" at times, not that it's bad by any means.
Author's Response:
Heh, funny coincidence and that's what the commissioner wanted! Thanks for your feedback as well and feel free to do more, I will continue to try my best.