Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

I really like the first chapter. 

Hope to see what happens with Lyra in the next chapter. 

you had a great way of describing the situation and atmosphere her boots create as well as what the tiny traveler was experiencing.

I think a poll would be great :)

(I personally would love to see Egypt, Africa, Greek, Italian, and maybe a Victorian London setting) if he winds up bouncing around to different time frames in those countries/regions. 

Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it! Victorian London is actually a pet favorite of mine too, great taste! 

I'm actually launching a Patreon for polls (and maybe commissions,) if you're interested- there's an early bird special for half off, too! ;) 

https://www.patreon.com/dongus

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2022 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 1 - 1300s

Very interesting concept and story so far.  Love the descriptions of Lyra's sweaty and overly worn, stench filled boots.

Being 3 inches tall, wouldn't Lyra stop to take out what is obviously rather big {to her perspective} from her boot? 

Will Lyra find the 3 inch tall / small man in her boot?  If she does, what will Lyra do with him, or will he transport first?

Could Lyra's intense foot odor add energy to his time travel?  Perhaps instead of strictly electricity enabling him to time travel, perhaps extreme foot odor could provide an alternative, short term fuel source.

All great possibilities to a really good story.

Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it! I'm hoping to do a chapter a week, and explore different time periods as the main character gets smaller. I actually might start a Patreon for polls to pick the next era, if there's enough interest.