[Report This]Date: August 28 2022 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
This one really ticked all my boxes and made me smile :)) I really appreciate this story!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it, I like my stories to have a feel good vibe at the end of them.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
This story is so enchanting, it makes me wonder if it has showered within the past week or two.
Author's Response: I'd say it was good clean fun, but it was only two out of three of those.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
Amazing conclusion, though I do admit there were some scenes that felt a little rushed. That aside, it did really feel like everything tied in well and it really felt like a good ending. Great stuff all around.
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's been a long time coming at this point lol, it's nice to send these two off into the sunset.
Date: August 23 2022 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
With the five days a month upgrade would that mean they could dodge unusual size shifts? Just going, oh, that's a bit much I'll do this another time when I'm not going to be flea size.
Great story glad to see it find a happy ending.
Author's Response: Yeah I think the next version of the meter will probably let them dodge the crazy size shifts if they wanted, at the same time I guess they're still on the table for those crazy enough to want them lol. Glad you liked the ending.
Date: August 23 2022 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
How tall is Kacey?
From all that was mentioned I only remember Jake being 6' and Ash being 2" taller than Andy. It's often mentioned she is petite but I don't remember if there was exact height mentioned.
Author's Response: I don't remember if I ever gave her an exact height but I always imagined her somewhere around 5' 3" or thereabouts, she's supposed to be fairly petite like you said.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2022 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day
Can't believe this story is finally complete. Feels like only last year we were waiting for new updates. Couldn't have asked for a better ending for these two. Really liked this finale and can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I was feeling sentimental for these two over the weekend and wanted to come back around and finish this one up, like I said I always had a wedding ending in mind I've just been putting off writing it. As for what's next I'm probably going to roll back on over to Champion of the Goddess, I actually almost had a chapter ready for that when I switched gears.
Date: August 23 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
I know something about world and character building because that what I usually pay attention to but it's hard to write individual interactions. How did you learn to write such good interactions? A lot of reading or something else?
Author's Response:
I read a lot and I write a lot, I don't really have any special tips other than trying to picture your scene and imagine the characters as people you know, having a conversation or doing whatever. I'd recommend just practicing it, reading it, and asking if the scene in your head made it to the page, then work from there. There are probably better writing guides online than me lol, I'd encourage you to simply give it a shot and see if it's something you want to pursue.
Date: August 22 2022 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure
Great chapter! Surprised to see this one getting an ending, not that I mind though.
Also "Sorry I accidently pushed you into traffic" is a very funny line without context
Author's Response:
I've been meaning to end it for some time now, I finally got around to doing it.
Date: August 21 2022 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Names:
Cure Inventor: Tatsuya(175)
Shinobi: Mei(145)
Genius normal couple: Haruto and Yui(188 and 154)( they are actually working on biological way to change races( human to tiny or tiny to human). Serious task, they may finish it in epilogue. They can make temporary transformation tho some time in the story. Motivation for Yuiis her size complex and her lover is too big. She wants to switch roles at least once. Haruto sees Tatsuya's breakthrough and thinks shrinking let's him discover world of new possibilities so it's his motivation for the project.
Evil woman - Kimiko(170)
Date: August 21 2022 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure
I mean just imagine some supercute Japanese 145 Shinobi (Ninja -woman) (character - righteous and playful) training a bunch of ninjas that tower over her at full size but during training she's a goddess to them. It's so easy for her to reward them for good results and punish lazy ppl. Her friend who doesn't care about mortal things and indulges himself in Physics now found this phenomenon that turned his understanding upside down. It was actually him who invented the cure and blood bracelet by experimenting on himself with frontline technology. He actually got a Nobel prize for cure and is from genius family . He had a friendly competition with his peers from his family and he had 2 rivals(F and M(probably couple, not affected by shrinking)), and 1 idiot whose knowledge is average and he wants to steal achievements from others, he's from genius family but has above average talent (below average in the family) and he's super lazy, he later betrays his family and tries to sell research to 'anti-tiny' faction but he fails miserably and is treated as a joke. Back to rivals, they were on the same lvl but his progress skyrocketed since when he was shrunk making him worlds N1 genius, although often played with by his shinobi friend(which is actually stronger than him even at normal size due to Ninja staff). He makes the best out of it and analyses the changes of human behavior when shrunk. He actually can't be shrunk against his will because his bracelet is implant and cannot be taken away. Maybe he will be able to change size with a thought in the future but this technology can only be used by him(or the ones who know Physics and are willing to go through many experiments) due to science stuff(every person has unique DNA so it has to be custom made). He still spends his 1/7(better technology, maybe more) time as a tiny with his friend and is interested in shrinking psychology effects(like pheromone one). He also uses equipment to monitor his own biosignals and often ask her and ninjas about their training and perspective of each other. Some tinies revere him so much they are willing to let him monitor their biosignals during training, rewards and punishments from shinobi. She also reluctantly lets him monitor her FOR SCIENCE (and maybe because she has a crush on him(maybe she is inexperienced in her feelings and wants to find out if she has a crush on him or not through technology)).
That's the good faction.
As for evil:
Some cruel and rich spoiled female politician whose from rich buisness holder family and has superiority complex which is a lot easier to satisfy with tiny slaves. She actually treats them good because she is trying to train them to be loyal.
Can use this(Having the Have Nots by makebelieve) as a reference. She's super good for villain in gentle story in this setting
Ninja can spy corrupt politicians and expose their info to public. And there can be huge number of inventions from MC in this setting.
Author's Response:
I have a lot in my back catalog I'm trying to write already, but it sounds like you've got the outline of your own story here that you should take a crack at.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2022 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure
I like the bracelet solution to the shrinking problem. It gives both a
convenient way to let the shrinkees go back to a normal life as well as
an easy source of future size related fun and drama, both willingly and
potentially having the bracelet lost/stolen with the potential problems
that could cause. This story might be ending but I'd love to see a story
with this as the overall premise rather than it being the end point, it seems like it has too many fun possibilities to only appear toward the end.
The need to return to tiny size for a quarter of the time seems a bit strange though, what kind of problem could that solve for them? Is it actually necessary or a "just to be sure" kind of thing like Jake being told to stay small even after healing immediately in this chapter? The obvious answer is to get the healing benefits again during that week, but does that mean the size restoration hurts them in a way that needs periodic healing by shrinking again or that they're worried that it might do so? If it is a serious necessary thing could they get the same result just by shrinking back down more often for shorter time periods?
Author's Response: I had this idea that whatever counteracts the shrinking isn't good for your health, so it's basically letting whatever is causing the shrinking fix you back up. It's fairly arbitrary but I'll try to touch on it a little in the next and final part.
Date: August 21 2022 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Also cool idea to make a secret tiny organisation that figured out how to make a shrinking band(that can shrink with you, maybe its made from your own blood or something). It's good for spying and the organization can be counter to "human" extremist organizations. It actually starts to sound like a plot for another story in the same setting.
Author's Response:
Not sure if I'll revisit this setting when it's done, but I imagine that shrinking would be great for espionage.
Date: August 21 2022 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Drop of the Cure
I wanted to see fox-girl's friend in Femdom Goddess story but you finishing your old story is actually better. Good to see the cure. Tinies are now humans with unique abilities. There are benefits of healing from injuries and deseases and you can shrink at will but you need to stay tiny 1/4 of your life and people close to you can sneak your band off and easily hypnotize and dominate you any time they want. Just hope this won't escalate in some "human supremacy" organization in the future. To be fair it's not a good perk for most politicians since it makes you super vunerable to betrayal. Just hope there are enough good people in the world so that they survive until technology progress so that robot servants can balance things out.
Author's Response:
'Don't worry we'll be back on track with Champion of the Goddess this week, the mood struck to finish this one and it's been a long time so I wanted to wrap it up. Being a shrinking victim now has some pros and cons, yeah you're tiny 1/4 of your life, at the same time disease and injury aren't a huge problem for you. This is a pretty lighthearted world so it's not likely to see a large scale anti-tiny movement, save for a few bad actors.
[Report This]Date: August 08 2022 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
This is a lengthy chapter, but it never lacked in quality. Giantess characters' trust and readiness to take part in action are developed or characterized here, with a focus on their activities. To witness a peaceful plot, as well as a good mix of giantess items and story.
It's also nice that Jake gets some character development here with what he would do when he grows up. This is exactly what you'd anticipate. I love how well he gets along with Kacey; he's a real soldier.
A lot of different things happened in this chapter that made it one of the greatest thus far. Wish there were more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, this one of my first forays into longer stories, and I think it's a bit shaky in parts and I think that more shorter chapters would have benefited it. Still I think it's a good slice of life plot and the characters care a lot about each other which is nice.
Date: April 16 2022 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: Vacation
Great as always, very light hearted chapter. Would like to see one chapter focusing on one couple specifically rather then both at once, but that’s just me, only for one chapter. Feel like it would be good after a lot of group antics.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2022 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day
Very fun chapter. Keep up the good work, GreenAnon!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I often find myself coming back to this setting and these characters after more plot heavy stories. The slice of life stuff is a nice breather.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2022 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 7: Comic Convention
Mandy the Mandalorian. Cute.
Date: March 12 2022 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7: Comic Convention
I’m a big fan of the slice of life fun here, although I would of loved to see a bigger and grander exploration of the rules and punishments surrounding stealing tinies.
Regardless, I would love to see more.
Author's Response:
The whole battle for Tiny Rights is kind of going on in the background of the story but I don't really want it to be the focus. I've been kind of avoiding any kind of overarching plot because I want this story to have a slightly relaxed atmosphere if that makes sense. I might explore it a bit more in a future installment, but the focus is going to remain on the protagonists and their relationships with each other.
Date: February 27 2022 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
Chapter 6 was a top-tier entry. Jake is by far, my favorite tiny male character to have graced this website, and we get to see him be a bigger man for once this chapter. Kacey's stallion comment was gold-pressed latinum.
You've also established a very good dynamic between Ash and Andy. That was one relationship I was a bit iffy on, but seeing Ash's "play" for lack of better terms, and Andy's enthusiastic reciprocation, was a very fun segment. Liked that classic Cheerio's callback to "Honey, I shrunk the kids." At least, I assume that's what that scene was referencing. Lot's of tiny guys and gals end up in these cereal situations. It's a crisis I tell ya!
Of course, we get to see Kacey be the bigger woman, resisting the temptation to just string Jake along and take him back by force. I suppose Love is the strongest Force of all. Not as strong as the High Ground, though.
Author's Response: You can consider it a Honey I shrunk the Kids reference, and yeah Andy has come around to enjoying Ash's games now that he knows her a bit and is sure they are in fact just games. Kacey and Jake are very much in love, what I wanted to show was that their feelings would endure even if the power dynamic between them changed.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2022 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: One More Day
A very extensive chapter, it’s long but never once felt lacklustre. Full of actions with some development or characterisation for the giantess figures in how they respect trust and willingness to engage in actions. For a gentle story that’s always great to see; as well as with a balance of giantess stuff with story.
Jake also gets some characterisation here with what he would do when he would be big, and it’s better the. What you would expect. Man is a true trooper and it’s great seeing how he gets along with Kacey.
This overall was probably the best chapter so far, had a little bit of everything. Hope to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had hoped to flesh out the tiny characters a bit, looks like it went well.