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Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2024 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day

cute and wholesome but at times sexual.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: mstjon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2024 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

I honestly thought this was a pretty cute story yes very sexual but also very cute.

Reviewer: MicroHuggles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2023 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Hey, just noticed the updated text on your story, great work. I was the one that starred both of your stories, you're an excellent writer.
Massive fan of many of your works, especially this one and The Elf is Innocent!.

Would love to see more from you covering more niche topics, might be fun to have a chat in the future.

-MicroHuggles

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks a million! Yeah I have some niche interests lol. Anyways I'm glad you liked this one and One Year Lease, it was very flattering to see them featured! I'm usually down to chat about stories or whatever, you can DM me if you want on discord, greenanon#1333

Reviewer: stinky_tiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2023 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 3: Size Shift

Fantastic story so far! The tiny guy is lucky as hell. Love the addition of butt stuff, and the nice but dominating aspect is super fun



Author's Response:

Jake is lucky isn't he? I love the nice but dominating type of stories so if that's your thing you should check out the rest of my stuff.

Reviewer: DEEmonitized Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2023 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day

You know, I can see the hesitancy to end this crystal clearly.  Definitely grew fond of these characters!   And hopefully maybe we can see some side stories of them in the future!   Thanks for the story mate!   



Author's Response:

It was a painful goodbye, like I said it was my first longer story and I'm not opposed to revisiting them someday, but I also really wanted to give them a happy ending.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2022 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day

I really enjoy a lot about this story, especially the way the pheromones work so hard on him. Seems absolutely natural for someone confronted with a woman so many times larger. I love the consensual but not quite planned way their relationship evolved. Thank you! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! There's a pheromone effect going on in my new story Reunion as well, though it's a far darker tale than this one. Overall this was a pretty sweet little slice of life story and I'm happy with how it turned out.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Want to write story in this world setting  and I wanted to make sure I didn't forget any  shrinky buffs:

1. Durability.

2. Fast regeneration. Same goes for stamina(sexual to).

3. You can go without air for hours.

4. Smell of a person you like makes you horny for her (pheromone stuff)

5.Their strength and physical characteristics is slightly higher than they should be if you use cube law, but not by much.

6. Size shift happens once in a while.



Author's Response:

The only one I can think of that you missed is that bugs and animals tend to avoid them, which if you're small is a plus lol.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrinking Day

Need to ask world building question:


How much of world's population has shrunk here?

I'm sorry if it was mentioned and i skipped it.



Author's Response: 2%, I think it is mentioned in the first chapter right after Jake shrinks.

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2022 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: Wedding Day

Luckily for me I just discovered this story for the first time yesterday and got to binge the whole thing. I liked it a lot. Consenting relationships are always more my thing in these stories. I found this story hit a good balance with lots of dom stuff in what was ultimately a loving relationship.

I just had to tell you, when you put down the lyrics of the song during the wedding, I went and looked it up and started playing it. The song was long enough that it came to an end like 10 seconds after I finished the story. Don’t know if you intended that, but it was very nice hearing the song fade out as I read of the two of them flying above the clouds. Very good conclusion vibes.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it enough to read the whole thing in a day haha. While this one is a more relaxed tale than a lot of mine I'm generally into the mutually consenting relationship for this genre, while some of my stories start with the protagonists on rockier footing than this one it's generally where I like them to end, and I like an uplifting vibe for the finale.

The song played at the wedding is an odd choice since it's a somewhat sad one in the context of the anime it's from, but at the same time it's a good slow song with a sense of finality to it and it's the kind of thing Kacey would listen to. I didn't time it with story but that's a nice happy accident if it ended at the same time you finished it.

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