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Reviewer: SomeRandomGoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2024 5:13 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt. 2: The Arachne

And they all lived happily ever after. :D
Cracking story! Also we need to see a noblewomen shrink her husband with Pixy Dust.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm sure that the nobility were quite intrigued by the party's "advice" over the years.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 02 2023 10:16 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

I really loved the solution at the end with the big scrying circle.   I noticed this story is marked as Complete:No, but you have an epilogue and everything.   Is that just an oversight?  It looks complete to me.




Author's Response:

You can consider it complete, I don't have any plans to do more adventures with this group right now. This was actually my first fantasy story and early in my longer story writing efforts, so I deliberately went with a sort of episodic approach so while it ends it can still pick up again, if that makes sense.

Reviewer: tank Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2022 12:17 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Here is a request can you do a store where a tiny guy ends up in a holstaur farm and heram 



Author's Response:

I might do a one shot about a scenario like that when I'm done with my current story and some of the other ones I'm working on, can't promise anything but it's not a bad idea.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2022 3:24 PM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt. 4

I like the story so far. I'm disappointed that Ghorza won't be staying though. I kind of like her. I'm also disappointed that foot scenes with her are short and get interrupted quickly.



Author's Response:

She'll be in and out, Gareth will no doubt end up by her feet again someday.

Reviewer: Nightwatch Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2022 3:54 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Loving  this story so far it just like welcome to hell but fantasy and with different kind of monsters kind of wondering what came next though, also I have way mircalla story within the cast could go , one they found a cure for vampirism turning human again which would kind of be lame choice or the second opinion is turning her into a day walker like a  vampire who doesn't need blood to survive sunlight, forget what the mythical for a day walker is but they are vampires who don't need to drink blood to survive and only need blood for enjoyment, these are just two ways that I can think of for mircalla for your story.



Author's Response:

I don't think Mircalla will ever become human again, if the rest of the group ever trusts her enough she might be given some kind of magical enhancement to walk in the sun, but until then she's probably Gareth's "prisoner." It's not like it's hard to feed her at her current size!

Reviewer: Called70 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2022 9:52 AM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt. 4

Jeez You tackle every story setting stereotype from Super Heroes and scify aliens to Musume monsters and whatever is Welcome to Hell. If l may say at this point You alone dominate this site or at least the entire gentle department, keep setting the bar higher friend, something tells me you're not stopping anytime soon. 

Btw by anime law you're force to introduce a dragon girl in the next arc...



Author's Response: Thanks, I have a lot of different long running stories in different settings yeah lol. I'm not sure when I'll get back to Diplomatic Mission but a dragon girl isn't out of the question

Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2022 1:36 AM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt. 4

And the harem continues to grow. Wonder if Ghorza is sticking around as one of the main characters or if she's someone who'll dip in and out of the story intermittently. She's not a wife, after all. Yet. Also curious what the future holds for Mircalla. I'm as confused as Gareth is about what the plan is for her.

This was an entertaining arc. Severa is just too damn strong with her combined size, magic, and intelligence. Almost feels like pressing a "win now" button when she gets brought in. Which is fine with me, I think she's my favorite. The lamia should have absolutely no shortage of husbands in the foreseeable future with all those entranced men. This new enhanced version of Gareth should be able to partake in a wider variety of sexy shenanigans, bit I will miss just how vulnerable he was compared to the women.

Vampires aren't really the most interesting monster girls imo, so it'll ne nice to move onto something else if/when there's another story arc. Despite that, this was yet another good story arc from you, Greenanon. You just don't miss.



Author's Response:

I think Ghorza is a more the type to come and go, though she might move her "home base" to the Lamia swamp. For Mircalla, Gareth is speaking for the Author too, I'm not sure what happens with her! I like enemies who turn into friends over time, as Conquest of Earth can attest.

Severa is definitely the "win now" button for most threats, but due to her size and terrifying (to most) appearance she's a lot like a big piece of artillery, half the battle is just getting her in position to be useful and she can't handle some of the more delicate matters.

Vampires are more interesting antagonists I agree, but aside from Mircalla they won't be in the next story if/when I get to it.

Reviewer: imaybegae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2022 12:54 PM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt. 4

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Reviewer: Layston Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2022 2:09 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

This has been a treat to read! I have been enjoying the adventures of young Gareth and his wives and hope to read more about his exploits soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope the wrap up to the current arc landed for you. I'll probably do some of my other stories for a bit before returning to this one, but Gareth and the rest will probably have more sexy fantasy adventures!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2022 11:58 AM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt 2

Love this chapter, really feels like a larger then pure fetish story too at this point. I think having some scenes back with the original love Interests would be beneficial too as with a negative or harems, some older characters become forgotten. Though so far a balance has been struck so it’s fine. 



Author's Response:

We will see Severa and Lessie again before this arc is over. Other than that I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! 

Reviewer: imaybegae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2022 10:19 AM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt 2

Did the necklace shrink with him?

Author's Response:

It's back at their inn with their other things

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 7:07 PM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt. 1

Really excited to see where this goes! I did not expect you to continue this story, and I'm overjoyed to see you writing more.



Author's Response:

I've meant to for awhile now, just kept getting distracted with other stories. I'll probably do 2-3 part arcs for it in the same way I do for my other stories.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 7:37 AM Title: An Imperial Invitation Pt. 1

Really looking forward for this one. I’m just a sucker for these kind of fantasy stories and this has everything I could want. Monster girls aren’t exactly my thing, but when things are written like I don’t exactly mind. 



Author's Response:

Obviously if you look through my stories I like monstergirls a lot lol. I hope you enjoy this story arc!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 5:06 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Wow, this might be my 2nd fav story from you. Really hoping more gets added to it soon. 

Reviewer: Videofreak64 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 4:11 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

There’s several great details in this which make it more interesting than the run of the mill fantasy erotica which I like. Also this might be one of the first lamia giantess stories I’ve read period.

Author's Response:

There aren't a ton of Lamia giantess stories, and a lot of them are Felarya or heavily vore based, which is fine but I wanted to try a friendly one. Glad you're enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: titanic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2022 1:54 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt. 2: The Arachne

After catching up on The Conquest of Earth and enjoying that story, I decided to see what else you've written. What a good choice. These stories have been so much fun to read. The lighthearted, over-the-top tone is such a refreshing change of pace from the grim horror that permeates so many other stories. Good stuff.



Author's Response:

Most of my stories have a pretty upbeat tone, some of the plots are more serious than others, but overall I like happy endings and adventure. I hope to read what you think of the other stories!

As for "Diplomatic Mission" I'm working on a continuation of this story now, I've been meaning to and with the latest Conquest story wrapped up I think it's time to write it.

Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2022 12:10 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

Out the Three Stories of yours I've read,This one is my Favorite!! Not only is it a Funny and sexy rom-com but you did a great job spicing up the story with a little bit of politics & great character work! My favorite wife is Severa the Arachne bc of her more playful & tomboyish charm. She's both caring, very intelligent,and doesn't want to be a monster like others thinks she is despite being probably the most powerful character in the seriesd84;🥰 I hope you decide to add some OVA chapters like in your Supervillian story,especially with more Severa🥰🥰🥰



Author's Response:

I keep meaning to come back to this one but I keep getting distracted. There is certainly room in the world for more stories.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2022 6:36 PM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt. 2: The Arachne

I was not really into harem type stories until I read this. This has got to be one of my favorite medieval fantasy stories on this site. If you ever revisit these characters I'll look forward to it.

Reviewer: MonkeyShrapnel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 6:45 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

I can’t believe I’ve gotten a monster girl fetish from this website, great story!

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 2:31 AM Title: A Diplomatic Mission Pt 1: A Misadventure

I love it!!! Gonna check out your other stuff. This is some excellent writing, and just so damn entertaining.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm uploading the stories I've written for 4chan's gentle thread and I thought people here would like them.

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