Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2022 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Local Flavor

Hmmm....this story intrigues me. I love fantasy giantess stories and a fantasy giantess coming to our world is a pretty great idea. Not to mention a giantess that doesn't conform to the normal picture perfect image most giantess stories have? Good stuff.

You have some really great descriptions in here, a very strong point that will always keep me coming back. Mostly they're gathered around the vore scenes, which I have no problem with, love vore after all.

Not really a fan of stink and fart stuff but that's just me, not a critique on the story itself. Will admit, liked the first chapter more. The second chapter started strong with descriptions but began tapering off near the end and feeling kind of lackluster. Again, not necessarily because of the stink/fart stuff but more just lacking in descriptions which I feel is one of this story's best assets. Either way, would like to see this continued and am ready for whatever Shel pulls out next. 

Reviewer: clems319 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2022 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Local Flavor

Very good story, I love the nice description of the orc giantess, and of every scene, it's so great !!

These tiny humans are lucky to go down her throat, it's not everyday that yu can be swallowed alive by a sexy giantess orc warrior ;-)

I hope that in the next chapters some of the tiny human will have the chance to meet her rear end, and what about she send them to a trip inside her ass and asshole ? <3

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I've always enjoyed Orc girls and I've felt there was a lack of them in Giantess literature. Shel sees it that way too, these pathetic Weeklings should consider themselves lucky to feed a body like hers.

In the upcoming chapters Shel will get a chance to settle in and some unfortunate soldiers may find themselves where the sun don't shine ;-)