[Report This]Date: January 26 2022 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
First off, great work so far!
Secondly these are my favorite types of stories where the giantess is confident and proud of her power and not afraid to use it on the random hapless tinies yet has unique feelings for a certain special tiny.
If you are looking for ideas based on where the story is at the end of chapter 4. I think it will be interesting to explore her powers once she has full control of his soul. We don't know too much about him yet maybe he's had certain fantasies she can now help him explore to develop a bond. Of course she will always be the dominant one in the relationship but if it's going to be a loving one it will be cute to see her getting to know him and figuring out what he likes.
Now as to what I'd like to see. Maybe she can put his conciousness in different parts of her body. Like her toes, feet tits, pussy. Etc, and go on some galactic scale rampages showing him what shes can do.
She's resolved not to destroy his planet but maybe in a fucked up way as he falls in love with her he'll grow to feel bad for her because of that and tell her its okay to do what she wants because he'll be so over the moon for a gorgeous giantess goddess.
The play between fear and love is the sweetest of all for me in these stories so my advice is dont rush to him beeing all in love too quick but dont keep him a distant afraid whi er too long either.
Your doing great so far so I'm sure I'll enjoy whata coming next.
Author's Response:
Wow, these are all the ideas I could of ever wanted. Thank you very much!
Since she does have mystical powers I’ve walked thought of adding more tags and genres, like you mentioned stuff like transforming into body parts of objects come to mind. Anything can really fly too i guess as long as there is some justification for it.
Also yeah, so far it’s just been a prologue with getting his soul, the real fun starts after. Although I don’t wanna mess up that part so I may be slowing down my releases for that.
The idea of Rampaging through earth sounds great too, perhaps a little bit of fun would fly but I’d rather not turn her completely cruel when she doesn’t need to be. (Although in this universe civilisation outside of earth does exist so…. There is possibility of cruelty like that.)
and yeah, so far I’m trying to keep the play between fear and love. Of course since there is barely anything on our male lead so far he is mostly fearful for now.
once again I’m thankful for the review!
Date: January 24 2022 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 4. One Sided Love
holy shit can't wait for more!!! More insertion. But don't know how she will feel him physically bein so large
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Am planning on writing more later when I have a bit more time. But basically a Tl Dr of what’s to come is that she is trying to open a telepathic connection with Blyke. Although to do that she needs to do more of the Insertion. So it’s less about her pleasure right now.
More of that In The future.
Date: January 21 2022 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 3. Stressful Encounter
Can't wait for what's next. I really like this soulmate concept.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2022 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 3. Stressful Encounter
Really interesting story so far! I like the favct that the main character remains gentle as you don't usually see that very often with these types of stories. Love is always an interesting driving force and so far I'm sold on her yearn for it. Im a little confused as to why Blyke just started running at her though, like is he being controlled? Hopefully it gets explained in the next chapter because I found it kind of creepy that she just sat there silent after how long she waited for this. I'm really enjoying the story regardless I'm just a little unnerved by that last part.
Author's Response:
Yep, I’ll try to be explaining that better. But basically since The Giantess’s voice would be too loud for communication right now she is controlling him to be at a better location. It’s confusing right now but hopefully it makes sense next chapter.
Date: January 17 2022 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 2- Some Playful Teasing
This is a concept that I enjoy, but I don't see often. I'm enjoying this so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: January 17 2022 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
This story is quite intresting. I love gentle and Giga but mixing them together can have...mixed results so i'm intrested to see how this will go.
Author's Response:
Am aiming for specifically a somewhat gentle but playful relationship between Male and female MC, the rest can be uh… well yeah, we’ll see.
Date: January 16 2022 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
Love this can't wait for more!!!
Date: January 16 2022 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
This is a nice story concept! I wonder what the lucky soulmate with think of his soon to be goddess wife. Plus, I like the goddess's personality so far. Nice but not a wimp, indifferent to the humans who do not interest her, playful when humans foolishly give her an excuse.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2022 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
This story looks really interesting! I'm very curious to see how she interacts with her tiny soul mate, and how he'll react to her. Will he be a totally willing and submissive partner through his own will, or will the feelings be forced on him by some magical force? I have to imagine it would be a pretty confusing and crazy experience to suddenly have a Goddess show up one day and claim you as her partner, so I'm really excited to see where the story goes from here! I also always love a gentle and loving relationship, so this looks right up my alley.
In terms of suggestions, my only one would be to include a distinction between the normal text, and what your main girl is thinking in the moment. For example, at one point you have "I can feel you, I can Sense you, I Must Have You. I think in my head while biting my lower lip." Since the story is in the first person, it might be easier to read if you have thoughts in italics, like:
"I can feel you, I can sense you, I must have you, I think while biting my lower lip." You could also use quotation marks instead, as if it was a piece of dialogue, followed by the "I think" dialogue tag. Other than that, though, this is a great start with a really interesting premise, and I'm sure you'll get better as you write more! Thanks for sharing your work with us, and I look forward to the next chapter! Take care~
-Pluto
Author's Response:
OMG it’s Pluto Pendragon. I really like your story of an innocent man. One of my favs in the entire site.
Anyway, I think your completely right about the italics, again I’m quite new to this but using them to offer a distinction in the writing is a really good idea. Thanks for your Input!
Date: January 15 2022 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock.
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank You!