[Report This]Date: March 21 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Fun at the club
If you want a sadistic story, this is it done right. I must say, it's simply great. If I had anything to complain about, it was that the vore was a little to short, but that's just personal preference/nitpicking. I think you've done an absolutely fantastic job, and I think the only thing you need to work on is just to write more, because it's positvely amazing.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for such an awesome review, i really appreciate it ^_^ I agree the vore scene was too short with this but i remember when i was writing it i was so focused on what i was going to do next i was rushing through things trying to fit in as much as possible.
I've since learnt to take my time and relish each horrible tortuous moment when killing tinies hehe ;)]
Thanks again for taking the time to comment!
Emms x
Date: September 26 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?
Love the story, hope to see more like this, especially the vore.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the commetn ^_^ one of my next stories is about vore, though it will be furry vore so it would depend on wether you're interested in that... But i'm glad you enjoyed reading :)
Date: April 08 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?
Absolutely loved it. The details were fabulous, the writing was spot-on. I actually got chills at some point. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, I have actually re-written this (better grammar, an extra POV scene in the club, extended descriptions) as i'm trying to group all my work on Deviant Art now to go with my pics and other re-worked stories so if you have the time or the inclination hopefully you can come across :) My page is here: http://harlequinems.deviantart.com/
Thanks again for leaving a comment ^_^
Date: June 07 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?
I've probably heard the concept a hundred times over but when you go at it...you just make it almost seem a little TOO real @_@ and yet...I applaud you madame.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fun at the club
Pretty fantastic really, I have to sya very well written, I love everything about this to be perfectly honest, although I agree with Aborigen's second comment about maybe expanding the mouth play.
If I may be so bold, may I make a request? Could you write more using Emma? :D
Author's Response: Hi, sorry i didn't resond a lot sooner... Thanks vry much for the review, i am guilty of skipping over things quite quickly with my writing, its because my ideas go a thousand miles a minute in my head :) i will be writing with ... well, me, again shortly ^_^
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?
Poor guy, I was kinda hoping he'd survive and live to serve her in the future. I'd like to see one Tiny become Emma's favorite and serve her well, to the point where she almost cares about him.
Author's Response:
hi,
thanks for the reviews, i appreciate it a lot. This story has me as the main character, so the likelyhood of me ever wanting to care for a tiny is slim to none lol, i just wanted to flash that remote chance that i had something of a kind heart to be found hehe. I see your point about the girl's POV when she is being chewed on, i think in my excitement, and the fact that i finished that chapter at 4am, i kinda brushed over the intention of doing it without meaning to.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Food For Thought
Great tension here, and I liked the resourcefulness with the ice cream and the microwave. I'm surprised the little woman could survive all that.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - A bit of fun before home...
Very nice! I like that they made out, and then the mouth play with the tiny woman. Maybe expand more upon the tiny woman's perspective, wrestling with Emma's tongue and fighting to keep out of her throat.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2009 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Fun at the club
Fun story! I like that she shrinks the creeps down and collects them. If they were decent people I'd hope that they get to share some affection with their new giantess, but because they're douches so they get what they deserve.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2009 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A new-found Pet?
hey, it was okay for a first story. voring a few guys would be cool too.