Date: September 16 2023 6:47 PM Title: shopping in london
I love the eyes of the main protagonist.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2023 1:20 AM Title: Airline food (soft vore alt ending(hard digestion))
I wanna be eaten by her too! Great story!
Date: August 30 2022 2:23 AM Title: shopping in london
I loved this story when it first came out, but I am not into hard vore, so that disappointed me a little. Obviously nothing against you, it's my personal opinion. But I am not lying that I was very excited to see you made a soft vore ending! It was very welly executed and I am glad I was able to fully enjoy the story with an ending I like! Great job!
Date: August 23 2022 3:01 AM Title: Wishes (alt true ending (hard vore))
I reserve judgement till after the soft ending is posted.
Author's Response:
Its out now so come check it out!
[Report This]Date: August 23 2022 2:52 AM Title: Checking out
So the clerk who sold Snackie to the American redhead underwent some poetic justice? Interesting!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2022 4:43 AM Title: Wishes (alt true ending (hard vore))
First and foremost, the woman whose images are posted in the story is HOT AS HELL!!! Damn she's friggen sexy!
I read through all your chapters in one sitting, so I can not comment on each previous chapter.
This is a great story. I really like how he escaped, only to return to Jackie.
The grocery girl who could have saved him, winding up being eaten by Jackie was a nice twist.
Being eaten and digested by Jackie without any thought of what she is doing was a great ending.
WELL DONE!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2022 1:24 AM Title: shopping in london
Awesome story! Really! I loved the semi-unaware callousness of the 'giantess' (and the girl in the photos representing her is beaufiful too, who's her?) and your story is now among my top favs!
I also liked the ending, how the giantess ended up eating the teen employee instead of the man, who went with her to America. Hahaha next time better not play with the tiny and help him out! Well, if you're accepting suggestions for alternate endings, how about an ending where the guy manages to somehow escape the giantess and go back to the market, finding the now shrunken girl and living (surviving maybe) with her, forming a tiny couple? And maybe the tiny couple can end eaten alive (together hahaha d84;a039;) by the American giantess.
The only part that confused me a lot was his actual size. The way she interacts with him suggests that the shrunken guy was somewhere between one and two inches tall, but sometimes the sorry described him as being really tiny, smaller than small! Like the scene where he's hit by a droplet described as having the size of a car. This made me visualize him as being about 1/8 inches tall or something. How could the American giantess interact the way she did, even chaining him, if he was THAT small?
Please those are just observations, whatever his size this story's just GREAT! I'm fave'ing it NOW!
The only part that got me confused is the size of
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 9:05 AM Title: shopping in london
This is a very captivating story. I am very impressed with your technique and smooth story telling. I feel you are one of our top tier story writers on the scene. I am looking forward to our next journey with the endless possibilities of protagonists available. I will be interested to see where this story takes us and if we ever find out how the shrinking happened and if it will happen again and who will end up with the Shrinky.
[Report This]Date: February 03 2022 9:18 PM Title: Checking out
Awesome ending (so far)! Maybe add another ending where she takes Sarah with her to America and gives her to her bestie like she promised?
[Report This]Date: January 31 2022 12:27 AM Title: Morning of the last day
As last-moment changes of mind are supposedly a feminine prerogative, I have to wonder if Jackie will decide it would be better to play with her "food," forever?
[Report This]Date: January 24 2022 10:25 PM Title: Heaven or hell?
Really good chapter again. I actually feel for the tiny, but Jackie seems like a great Giantess protagonist. Also, this is some really good quality for a debut story, you can really emerge me into the story! I'm getting curious to see where all this goes
[Report This]Date: January 21 2022 5:41 AM Title: Heaven or hell?
Hot damn, this is the best story currently going on this site.
The build up to eating her snack is amazing!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2022 9:45 PM Title: Heaven or hell?
Does she really have to eat him? She couldn't keep him as more of a, say, pacifier?
[Report This]Date: January 20 2022 2:37 PM Title: A meal to die for
Wow! If this is your debut story, I honestly don't see how you're going to match it. Let alone, top it!
I read all six chapters, straight through, which is a rarity for me. As I usually prefer to read and review each chapter!
Another rarity is the use of selfie-captures for your illustrations. Asukafan used to illustrate his vintage stuff with photo-captures! Sadly, those have become lost in limbo with each new posted edition. I hope you never have the same techno-calamity.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the huge compliment! Lets just say that I've got some fun ideas for when this story is finished. And I've fixed my little error you spotted too.
[Report This]Date: January 19 2022 9:26 PM Title: A meal to die for
I normally don't like unaware stories that much, but this has really surprised me! I like the writing style and the way things are built up quite slowly (in a good way). Can't wait for the next chapter(s)
Also two side questions: did the woman who first found the protagonist when he shrank know that they were not a product and was she behind the shrinking? And my second question, are those pictures of you yourself?
Author's Response:
The store worker was playing a joke before helping the tiny, but was called away at the wrong time.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2022 4:51 AM Title: A meal to die for
Awesome story, love the detail. The sucking scene was fantastic. The causal cruelness is done very well. Great stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I realy wanted to get across how little she thinks before acting, hope you enjoy the future chapters too :)
Date: January 10 2022 7:00 PM Title: out and in
I hope those are oranges and the shrinkee gets swallowed alive. I love full tour stories, especially when the person swallowed survives.
Date: January 06 2022 10:17 AM Title: shopping in london
i have an idea that is very brutal
how about if she thinks she has to cut and or peel it like vegetables? For example, she wants a small piece and cuts a leg
Author's Response:
very mean haha
Date: January 05 2022 4:23 PM Title: shopping in london
i can't wait to read more