[Report This]Date: January 22 2022 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, that chapter was amazing! Once again, I love the little schemes that Jackie does to ensure that Denver gets to experience this torment.
The use of the video cameras, overacting on the stairs, the Netflix show and use of the bathroom was perfect to help make Denver suffer.
I like how you had many of his senses available this time. It must be crazy for him to think about all the new sensations he must be feeling.
This is my favorite chapter so far and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 15 2022 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a great chapter. I think my favorite part was how Jackie put so much detail and care into making sure her brother wouldn’t get recognized and also experience everything.
The fact that it was lace underwear, the black paint, he’s tied up. All these little points just add to the helplessness for Denver just makes me smile.
I really wanted Denver to be stuck there in that thong all day, or even longer so having Jackie go through all that work to secure Denver makes me glad he won’t escape.
Also, it’s interesting to have his mouth free and nose blocked. I still think having the nose free is more humiliating since he has to breathe in his mom’s butt all day, while I think taste doesn’t happen as often. But it’s pretty cool to see it happen this way.
Anyway, great chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
yeah thats fair i guess, but since this was just coming off a chapter where his nose was free and nothing else, so in order for it to be different, thats why i did that. thanks for the review tho!
[Report This]Date: January 14 2022 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved the setup and ending of this one, but would have likely to see more description of Denver's day in his Mom's ass. Since his ears were uncovered, the anticipation of hearing his sister suggest gassy foods to their mom, and then hearing her body digest the food in preparation for the farts would have been a nice addition. It would have been nice to get a description of the after effects of each meal too, instead of a quick summary.
Still a fan of your work though, and still a fun read!
Author's Response:
ooo yea that wouldve been a good idea i guess haha, but glad you still enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: January 07 2022 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great addition, I love where you're going with being stuck to the thong. Can't wait for some unaware wearing by the mom!
Author's Response:
its coming soon!
[Report This]Date: December 31 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start so far! Being tied to the back of a thong is probably my favorite concept in any giantess/shrink story.
Author's Response:
glad you like it, thanks for the review!
Date: December 31 2021 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to go back and read your Christmas story; though so far this New Year's story is quite nice. {sometimes too many chapters leaves a new reader to pass over too much to read. Though I feel assured the many chapters of your previous story are well worth reading. Just a thought for you to consider.}
Love the tied up and forced into Jackie's ass aspect. Very nice indeed.
Author's Response:
yeah i know some people dont like reading too many chapters, which is why im splitting this story up into multiple parts. the christmas story can work on its own, this one can work on its own. people who like long stories can get a long story, but people who only like shorter stuff might be willing to try it out too.
(also, the last one was only 15k words, I don't think that's super long)