[Report This]Date: January 25 2022 10:08 PM Title: Quinn's Big Punishment
I don’t frequently log in and review but I have really loved this story! Your descriptions and the situation the tiny found himself in from the get go to the ending this far have been great!
I keep secretly hoping he will reform again and she will find him and hear his story and decide she only has one option… keep him hidden lol. But I’m not the writer! I’m excited to continue reading where you go!
Author's Response:
Thanks scow, I feel honored! I'll admit that the way this story ends is that Quinn remains unaware of Hunter's existence, but if you are interested in a similar story where the captor is aware of her prisoner I recommend you check out one of my other stories, "Kim's New Pooper." Hopefully you enjoy it!
Date: January 19 2022 4:31 AM Title: Gas is Blown, but Not Your Cover
Perhaps the correct thing to say is "to bad for Hunter"; but then again he is kinda living in Quinn's anal paradise.
Is Hunter now stuck as Quinn's anus forever? Will he somehow reform and leave her gassy asshole?
What ever happens to Hunter, he is one enviable tiny.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. Oh by the way, the "Bay Watch" one piece bathing suit is a nice touch. Who doesn't adore the "Bay Watch" babes?
Author's Response:
It's definitely enviable, I had a lot of fun writing these chapters. There's still a good handful of chapters to come, but essentially Hunter is going to be stuck as Quinn's asshole forever. Stick around though, I do try to bring in a few different anal and TF scenarios that I think end being pretty solid.
Date: January 09 2022 4:28 AM Title: Reformed as Quinn's Asshole
I'm kind of hoping Quinn notices Hunter in / as her asshole and is ok with it. It would be pretty cool if she decides to keep Hunter as her living asshole.
Really great story.
One point of note, the bladder is part of the urine track. In this chapter and the previous one you mentioned Quinn's intestinal track containing the bladder {i.e. urine track}. They are two different bodily waste systems. I think you may want to replace "bladder" with "intestinal".
I have an upcoming story, "Conjured Portals", you might be interested in the girl named Katie. Keep an eye out for my posting of it.
Hope there are more chapters coming of this terrific story.
Author's Response: I honestly didn't realize that, thanks for letting me know DW! I've edited the chapter, but will definitely have to keep an eye out for that in the future. Can't wait to see your story!
[Report This]Date: January 06 2022 3:28 AM Title: Spending the Night Under a Gassy Quinn
Odd, no matter how awful your descriptions of life between Quinn's butt cheeks are, I'd love to be in there. Guess there are no limits to adoring the female derriere.
Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks DW! It's funny how desirable something so bad can be, but I think seeing how far you can take it is what makes these types of stories so fun to write.
Date: January 04 2022 4:47 AM Title: Submerged in Quinn's Shit
Love this story. You may want to check out an old post I made called "Debbie’s Diarrhea".
Like where this story is going, can't wait to read more. Particularity interested if he is stuck to her asshole {have a few stories about that myself} as you hinted in your story outline.
Looking forward to your next chapter and where her purple thong continue forward.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll have to check that story out. I spend a few more chapters getting there, but I promise it's worth the wait!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2021 10:31 PM Title: Quinn's Big Punishment
I love your work. huge fan of ass tf plots also pantie tf or micros inside panties. love your stories!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise! If you haven't seen this story on writing.com yet, then stick around. I think you'll enjoy where it ends up.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2021 3:23 AM Title: Quinn's Big Punishment
Terrific concept. I love the misunderstanding aspect, that Quinn mistakes Hunter's inability to answer her as an admission of depravity.
Can't wait to see how this story develops further.
Well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks DW! I did spend a lot of the last year working on the story, but have been trying to review all the chapters once again to make improvements. Hope you stick around and enjoy where it ends up :)
[Report This]Date: December 28 2021 12:26 AM Title: Quinn's Big Punishment
One of my favorite series of additions to a Writing.com story. Glad to see it here as well!
Author's Response:
Thanks Applebottomj! And thank you for all the GP you've gifted to me on writing.com!