[Report This]Date: January 05 2016 4:43 PM Title: Gunslinger Goddess
Fascinating and very interesting concept. I like it and will be looking forward to more like it.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2009 9:29 PM Title: Gunslinger Goddess
P.S.---I also loved the way you snuck in that quote from the conclusion of "The Thing From Another World!" A suitable double-homage to James Arness.
Author's Response: Thanks, it was kind of accidental since I had "Close Encounters of the Third Kind on my mind when I wrote it.
Date: March 13 2009 8:54 PM Title: Gunslinger Goddess
Well, there were lots of things that weren't clear before (due to the--ahem!--very rough draft).
But, the two that stand out foremost in my mind? The attention to detail with regard to personal weaponry of the time. Quite well researched, for the most part, I must admit.
And, the highly novel way Kasoni calmed down "Unforgiving Jim." LOL!
Author's Response: I was indeed big on that. The calming down of Jim was stolen from the anime Grenadier.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2009 5:50 PM Title: Gunslinger Goddess
Phenomenal! Absolutely phenomenal!
:-D :-D :-D :-D
Author's Response: Wow, could you go into more detail please?
[Report This]Date: March 11 2009 9:42 PM Title: Gunslinger Goddess
This is a very promising story. In fact, I have a similar genre-blender over @ Giantess City (shameless plug)!
But, I have to tell you: I could barely make it up to the part where the outlaws first spot the giantess. YOU HAVE TO RE-EDIT THIS CHAPTER!
Or, at least, just enough to separate the main narrative from the sentences spoken by the characters. So, that the readers who WANT to give you encouraging reviews don't get eye strain. And, believe me: I say this as someone whose own debut story had the same draw-backs!
Please, do as I request, because I really, really want to finish this first chapter.
Author's Response: Note taken. I'll do that at once.