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Reviewer: banfield Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2009 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Nice little yarn. Altho Safetypin wishes it were longer - as most of us would like - it produced erotic images culminating in further acts - perhaps with the other girl and the other orifice.   Well done and let's hope the author will write out a sequel to stimulate our appetites.  There's a hint for you......

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 09 2009 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!
Just wish it was longer.

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