Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2022 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

Yes! Another chapter! I like his realization and the fact that he shrunk 1 whole foot is amazing! It’s a good pace for him to shrink. I can’t wait until he is around 3 feet or something where his head is level with Lillian’s crotch. We saw him hug Melissa, now imagine him hugging Lillian at that height. He might even smell her arousal. 

I also like Melissa’s desire to be the dominant one in the relationship ship. And it’s refreshing to see that she isn’t forcing it. She’s just the one doing everything while he is following her lead and Melissa seems to like it. 

While I wouldn’t mind seeing him be with Melissa, Lillian still has my main focus and I can’t wait for them to interact with his new height. I hope he shrinks a little more during the cab ride home and then he meets Lilian before he even enters his house and they have some perhaps, intimate conversations. 

After all, Lillian was initially tempted to keep him in her dungeon. She might as well do it now since Jonathan is going to need help from now on. 

Or better yet, Jonathan asks Lillian for help and is also curious how tall she will look from his new height. While he may be scared, I’m sure he’s kinda excited at least just a bit. 

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yeah, at 3 feet tall or so his interactions with Lillian will begin to really fall on the maternal side. Just wait.

Haha, yes, Melissa's a great character, but our main protagonist will still be Lillian, together with Jonathan. But Melissa will have her great moments too :D

Happy to read your comment TomSpeedy. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2022 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hmm, I completely didn’t expect the whole date thing happening. I wonder if Lillian is ok with Jonathan going on this date. Would she get jealous? 
Also, I love the interaction with Melissa. She was so friendly and positive and didn’t comment on his height right away and only did it once they had some chemistry. 
As for the new height being a surprise, wouldn’t Jonathan realize he was a few inches shorter by having loose clothes? Even I didn’t know he actually shrank that much until Melissa pointed out the difference. So I’m curious if the clothes shrank or maybe they are now more loose and comfortable so he didn’t notice. 
Damn, Lilian was thinking of keeping him prisoner in her basement? That sounds hot! I would have loved to see that happen. Lol. The shock on his face and reaction would be perfect! 
Hopefully, Jonathan meets with Lilian again soon. Melissa is pretty cool, but Lilian just oozes that sexiness. 
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Haha, yes the date was a random idea, but I kind of liked it. And also I have something planned for Melissa and Lillian's relationship... But that'll be in the future.

About Jonathan not noticing the 4 inch height loss... Yeah I could've developed more on him noticing, but we can say clothes fit better/loose in him.

And yes, Lillian and him will meet soon... Very soon.

Thank you for the review TomSpeedy :'D

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Whoa! This is easily the best chapter so far! So much content and that cliffhanger was amazing!

First off, that lunch. I love how you described what he should wear and when he should go to her house. Most of these details get skipped in other stories but you put them in, which is nice and helps me relate to this guy. It’s really cool to hear his thoughts as he goes through stuff.

The size of the meal portions was also great. It just shows how hungry she is and could also be foreshadowing of how hungry she is for him. I mean, he has this amazing meal in front of him, and he could barely handle it, which could be a metaphor for Lillian. However, she devours her food which makes me think that she will devour him eventually lol. 

The milk in the beginning is interesting. At first, I thought it’s some shrinking milk, I mean, it still could be, but is it also her breast milk too? Or does she replace the milk with some random milk-like liquid? Whatever it is, he really, really liked it. Lol

Then we get the shopping scene. I love how Lillian is taking over his life, piece by piece. She’s giving him a meal, taking him shopping, driving him places. Soon, they will be swimming, or wrestling, and maybe sleeping together. Maybe they take a bath together or give each other a massage. I could see him moving in and staying at her house for some time too. Basically, they seem destined to be together and I love it!

While shopping, I love the little comments she makes toward him. Calling him honey, asking him if he wants certain items and stuff. Imagine going to a kink store and she playfully asks if he wants to try a dildo or something, haha! 

Lastly, Lillian helps take the groceries inside and seems to be replacing the milk with her own milk. We don’t know what exactly does “her milk” consist of, but it doesn’t seem to have affected out main character yet. Maybe it’s a gradual change. We shall see. My guess is that he wakes up with some physical change. 

Anyway, excellent chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! 

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the review! I'm happy to hear you like the chapter, and also the little details I put in it. And yes, as time goes by, the idea is to make Lillian and Jonathan closer and closer. About the milk... Well, that'll be explained later on. But for now I can assure you there'll be some changes in him when he wakes up :D

Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2021 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 2

mi absolutamente maravillosa esta historia,no puedo esperar a ver hasta donde llegara,

minhorabuena por esta historia ,me encanta como escribes

Author's Response:

Muchas gracias, me alegra que estés disfrutando la historia. 

Espero traer cosas nuevas pronto dentro de la historia.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this start is amazing! 

I really love the idea of moving into a new area and having a sexy neighbor. 

Also, you don’t see too many stories where the woman is already taller than the guy by default, so that makes me enjoy this story even more so far. 

Wow, he actually is making a career streaming his games? He must be pretty good if he doesn’t need his old job back. 

I like the background info with his family. It is more detailed that I expected which is great so that way I don’t need to wonder what happens with his family in the future. Basically, this guy is on his own, and that’s a good thing. 

Ah, the peaking scene. The inner thoughts he had while staring at her was awesome. There’s that thrill of being naughty, but also there’s that risk too. And the more risks, the better for entertainment. 

I like how Lillian seems to have her own life sorted out. Has her own house, is a morning person, friendly with neighbors, and seems generally happy in life. She  makes me want to share that joy and I think this guy feels that too. 

Also, the teasing early on is fantastic. You even had him wonder if she was flirting with him or not. I love these situations in stories. Especially when the imagination gets crazy and you think of situations that could be sexual in the future. 

Wow, this story is looking good so far and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I´m glad you liked the story, and yes, a full size sexy neighbor´s always something nice to read about, the idea that she´s tall since the begining makes it thrilling right? I also like storys like that. 

And there´s also the fact that Lillians mere prescence is enough to arouse Jonathan without her even trying. The story includes a lot of more scenes like that.

I´m happy to know chapter one was very well received, and chapter two will be posted here soon.