Date: January 28 2015 3:09 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
probably one of the best ive read so far. cant wait to see what happens to the students and the red head
Date: January 22 2015 2:04 PM Title: The Breakfast Club
Yo, man... This story is probably in the top 3 best i've ever seen, it's near perfection why would'nt you continue and elt it down? :/ Such a waste of talent I hope you find inspiration soon enough to continue this unbelievable adventure!! :D
- A fan
[Report This]Date: September 02 2013 1:57 AM Title: The Breakfast Club
Really really great story. Very inventive. Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2013 6:55 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
Well, I can definitly see the similarity to 'Tinyone234', and the casual display of overwhelming cruelty that contagiously boils just under the surface....
Your work is simply amazing. I think that you have most likely inspired more then just a few others, as I myself have tried to pick up some of your style and talent.
You really know how to develop a dominant giantess, and as her presence grows larger the dramatic effect captures the reader inside a misty fog of overpowering enchantment.
Please keep this one going Chozo, I love IT!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I suppose I should mention that I myself have been expired by other great authors, like Andrew Nellis (you can find his stories on here if you have never read them). He was one of the very first cruel giantess authors I've ever read and I don't think a lot of people today are even aware his stories exist. He seems to have stopped writing back in like 1999 and hasn't written anything since then (as far as I know). I still hold out hope he will one day finish part 3 of his Liz story.... that was great stuff.
Your words of encouragement mean a lot, and I will definitely do as you say and keep this going! I just need to think of where to take things in the next chapter (I haven't even started it yet).
Date: July 14 2013 12:34 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
Chapter 5 is NIIIIICE. I wanted to first point out that your writing alone is extremely captivating. As for the story.. I think it's awesome that you introduced the whole Breakfast Club twist, and I love the way that the plot is picking up and being developed. Lastly, do not fret about going on tangents, the pace of the story, and writing too much additional detail. To me, you doing those things actually adds to the quality of the story, and it has me connecting with the story on a deeper level.
As for your response to my last review... Do not worry about my ideas for Amber. Certainly use your ideas that you've already written, and don't go through the trouble of having to redo parts of the story. I'm sure you can easily find a way to use my ideas, or something similar to them, for another part in the future! :)
I cannot wait to read new content soon! Give me a few days to think about some ideas for the characters in the Breakfast Club, and I will post another review regarding those lose ends.
Author's Response:
There's certainly no shortage of possibilities on where to take the story from here. What I think would be really great is if this site had a "choose your own path" sort of option, where a chapter could branch off along multiple paths. If that sort of option existed I could have went off in different directions with some of these prior chapters. I think that would be a really great feature for this site, and I have proposed the idea to Asuka. I hope he can find some way of implementing it.
Date: July 11 2013 9:09 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
This is my third offering of advice, and I am back-to-back with posts. Hopefully, I am not the only one who is this excited to see the story continue. I actually have yet to grow bored of rereading this story on a monthly, sometimes weekly, basis. The writing, for me, is literally that good.
When I think about this story, I grow more and more excited about the tiny girl that was over-shrunk and stuck in her ass. I would love to see Harriet uncontrollably lubricating at the end of her next work day and come across the tiny girl stuck to her cum smeared panties. I would like to think that Harriet gets bored with her current, larger, playtoy while she's working and 'move on' to another. It would be awesome to see her get so over joyed from the sight of that tiny girl struggling to free herself from her panties that she wants to obtain more people of that size to have her way with, and maybe possibly gathering multiple-sized tinies. I imagine Harriet having no idea as to how the micro sized spec ended up in the situation she's in, with little rememberance that she had previously inserted a person of that size into her asshole, or so she thought. From the details I've gathered, I wouldn't be surprised if Harriet made a simple flick of her tongue over her cum soaked panties and swallowed the tiny girl without any hesitation. All she would have left on her mind is finding more, fueling her corrupt ways, and giving zero fucks about everyone.
Author's Response:
Wow! I would guess you are the biggest fan of this story, or at least the biggest fan who has come out of the woodwork anyway. :) With that being said, don't worry, because I have been quietly working on Part 5 over the last week or two and I think I am just about ready to post it, and will probably do that tonight if all goes well.
I REALLY like your idea, but that wasn't what I had in mind for Amber's fate, and I think with what I've written so far it might be too late to change course without having to do an extensive rewrite. I haven't actually mentioned Amber at all in Part 5, but I think when you read it you will probably be able to guess where I'm going with that. Sadly, you might be disappointed...
Date: July 03 2013 10:14 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
It never gets old, even after rereading it several times. Really hope to see a chapter 5 soon...
I have wondered this for a long time... Other than being tall, how would you describe Harriet both physically and mentally? Is there a famous person, certain look and style, or character that Harriet resembles? Do she act like them also? Does harriet have a sensitive side, other kinks? etc.
Author's Response:
Ever heard "Show, don't tell"? Writers are supposed to show things rather than just describe them. With that being said, I can't really think of any famous person off hand that exactly resembles Harriet. She's actually based off a teacher I had in I think 8th grade or so. Can't remember exactly... I don't even remember her name. I do remember one time she was eating crackers with peanut butter and I would watch and imagine there were tiny people on the crackers as she was eating them. :) But her personality was nothing like Harriet's. That is completely fiction on my part.
Date: June 29 2013 10:27 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
Part 4 is awesome. You made no mistake with the direction you chose! Really looking forward to a part 5!!!
Date: June 24 2013 4:09 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
Excellent continuation of the story.. Please keep up the good work
Date: June 22 2013 10:53 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
It'd be awesome if Amber was, accidentally or on purpose, eaten by Harriet. But try throwing in some feet in there for Amber along the way :)
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 5:46 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
I literally read this maybe an hour before you updated it and thought "What a shame it's been so long since he's updated this story."
Go figure you'd update it.
Probably one of my favorite stories :-)
Author's Response:
Wow! That is weird, huh? I've actually been writing it bit by bit over a period of perhaps a week or two. Somedays I wrote nothing, and some I wrote quite a lot. But even though it ballooned out to about 6,000 words (almost the same as the past three chapters combined) the plot didn't really advance as far as I intended. I meant to cover 3 or 4 times as much as what this one chapter did, so I fell well short of that goal. And it was the first official day of summer, so I figured what the hell? It was as good a time as any to post what had been written, and I'll worry about the rest later. But anyway, its definitely weird timing that you had just read it perhaps an hour before, like you said.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2013 4:27 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
thankyou so much for continueing this story. it was one of my favorites and especially liked the third (loved how the girl was accidentally shrunk too small). if you continue writing i shall always continue reading and enjoying. you write exactly how i like reading which is why i am so fond ofyur stories. thankyou once more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2013 11:38 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
I'm very very excited to see you writing again, your stories have always been an inspiration to me and this one is no exception. I understand running out of steam, or even thinking that you had a good idea and ruined it with a certain installment, but I assure you this story is fantastic, and I'm eagerly awaiting more!
Author's Response:
That means a lot coming from you. I have read your stories and liked many of them very well, and as a matter fact I've left feedback on a few of them. You do a good job capturing the essence of one who enjoys to torture and kill tiny people. I guess you must be familiar with my stories for them to have inspired you as you say, but I have to admit I don't remember your name from years ago when I was actively writing. Did you go by a different name at the time or were you a lurker? But I have been following your stories in recent months, and they are well done. Keep up the good work! :)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2013 9:39 PM Title: Preserved In Amber
And I forgot to rate it, whoops.
Date: June 21 2013 9:38 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
I loved this story and am happy to see it resurrected, even if you don't think there was much plot development this was still a great read!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: October 12 2012 2:22 PM Title: Terry-fied
Love the story thus far, hope you decide to finish it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your interest. I think the 3rd chapter basically derailed the story. It seemed fairly well received with the first two chapters, but the third one was a bit weak, and I guess it just killed all interest in the story. Hopefully at some point I can pull off a 4th chapter which can get things back on track. But I don't know, maybe the spark has been lost...
[Report This]Date: April 18 2011 7:13 AM Title: In Her Shoes
I've never been so interested in a pair of woman's shoes ;D
[Report This]Date: October 03 2010 10:10 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
just wanted to give it a rating it deserves. and hope you'll sometime continue this story.
aaron
Date: January 04 2010 8:35 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
Absolutly fantastic story, there should be more teachers like this, dedicated selfless, willing to take students home for indepth education.
I hope this story will continue! Thanks.
Date: March 21 2009 11:59 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell
You have superb style and the story is very well-crafted. For me, the quality of the writing is just as important as the plot line and you have it in spades. Great job and please continue!