Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2009 9:35 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell

good add. keep up the good work on this story

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2009 7:21 AM Title: In Her Shoes

Chozo!

I'm sorry, was so busy the last few weeks because of finals... Awesome 2nd chapter you wrote here! I loved the ending of chapter two so much :) Just wanting to rate of course, giving it 10/10. See you soon :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, friend. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2009 8:53 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell

I reviewed the counterpart of this chapter at GTS City. But, I'm curious: what was the reason for the removal (however briefly) of the original version from same?

Author's Response: Adam X removed it and told me it was because the characters were underage, but I don't see how he made that determination when I didn't mention the characters ages at all. Sure, they are teens in high school, but who is to say they aren't 18 or 19 year old seniors? Its probably best not to get into lengthy bios for characters (I used to do that), and instead just cut to the chase. Its a shame it was deleted, and unfortunately I never read your comment (or any others that may have been made prior).

Reviewer: nostromo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2009 11:58 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell

damn... i wanted to rate this story a good ten, but clicked on five (for five stars)... let me correct that.

Reviewer: Motherland Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2009 2:10 AM Title: Enslaved By The Bell

More! Please God, MORE! It's starting to get really good and has a ton of potential too...

Chozo, please don't let this one end up in the heap of abandonment! :P

Reviewer: mushroom Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2009 6:19 PM Title: Enslaved By The Bell

You really need to work on this more. I like where it is going.